epic when are updates

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Thanks for the comments glad u enjoyed it so...

Don't panic! I have several lined up and plan to release the next few over the next few days.

good this is epic man I've been reading way to many vampire fan fics I'm a action guy

me like

who knew that the happiest pony in all of equestria was a vampire.

Oh the irony.

Ok bad ass ending I wanna see twilight come back to the other ponyville as Queen twilight.

>>14025001402500 I second that proposal!!!

>>14034751403475 ... Maybe with some super powerfull magic and godlike abilities?

>>14044011404401 Epic idea is EPIC!

Greetings to Archivist Nightwatch and Grtgfbll.

Hmm... I have to admit I've had a sequel in mind whilst I finished Vamp Pinkie and by the sounds of it I'd be on a winner if I were to commit it to paper so I have to ask what other things would you like to see including characters and which ones as vampires from this side and the other.

(Oh its on...)>>14034751403475>>14069661406966

Lets see, how about twilight found out that Pinks and the CMC are alive as vampires and while she is now "Queen" she learned how they arn't THAT bad so instead of leaving them in that universe she travels back to get them and bring them back. Funny and serious stuff happens which range from pink and CMC thinking twilight wants to kill them to Celestia thinking that Twilight is trying to take over the world. (She doesn't know she is now weaker than twilight but twilight doesn't even try and harm her.) Her friends try and "Convence her that taking over Equestria would be bad. Even though she is Denying left and right she is trying to. Also she Is under a Illusion that makes her look normal while her Real self looks... I don't know badass you decide.

What you think?

>>14084611408461 ... DAGNABIT!  You hit all the good ideas!  I'll just go slink back to my story now...

I really enjoyed this story.  The premise caught my attention from the moment it was first posted; and after reading the finished work, I find myself looking forward to any sort of continuation.  However, I have to be honest with you: it was definitely not smooth reading.  I nearly stopped after just the first chapter due to how many errors there are.

Before even thinking about beginning any sort of sequel, you really need to fix this story up.  You're in desperate need of a good proofreader or three.  Your punctuation is practically non-existent, and most of what is there is incorrect.  Your dialogue is somewhat confusing with how you've broken it up.  Your pacing is far too quick at times, and your "action" scenes (fighting, rapid movement, etc.) can be rather difficult to follow.

I highly recommend hitting up the Proofreaders group, and then perhaps even the Author Support group here on FIMFiction.  The first will work with you in correcting and refining your writing, and the second may be able to help you out with that sequel if you want/need it.

Regardless, keep writing and improving yourself.

This is beast!! No pun intended

1. Awesome!

2. Sequel (Pleaaasse )