An interesting idea. Who's the romance between?

Nice new story!

Looks intriguing. Hopefully this wont crash and die like the others

*Interesting*

I am assuming this is a TwiDash at the moment but i have a feeling that it may chnage with time

You sir now have my attention to this story and for that i give you a

"Of course she meant apple juice. We don't drink our friends."

why is this so funny?

Bigwig making a story that's rated "Teen"?

THIS IS MADNESS!

that cover picture is also used in "quantum castaways", one of my favorite stories on here =)

thought for a moment i got a new chapter of that, but this is probably just as good ;)

>>11978571197857 Well, that might change later on, I don't know yet

>>11972401197240 TwiDash mostly. But it might change once e'rrything goes down.

>>11974581197458 No mention of the Rainbowlicious part?

>>11986051198605

Well, the concept seems good, but you did censor the clop.

That's a first.

Dis Gun B Gud.

RAINBOWLICIOUS

>>11986051198605

TwiDash you say?

We approve of this story

Gonna keep reading this.

Just help me out on this one please:

How does a pony with one hoof pinch?

>>12007641200764 same way they hold stuff.

If it seems that Twilight's guilt reflex is turned up to 11 here, I suggest that at no time is it ever below about 8.5 or so: this is, I think, an utterly realistic (for her, anyway) reaction to the horror of The Incident.  George Bailey would have understood.

Sweet,first!

EDIT: I normally don't Dash ahead and take first without reading but I was wondering when you updated this.

Sweet, second! And someone actually thought about scoots.

Also, ambulance with sirens??? Sirens are for making cars move out of the way. They have cars now???!!!

EDIT: I was right to track this.

Shit just got real.

Dis Gun B Gud.

They won't catch her in time. That would be too easy.... Besides, if Twilight were to accept reason before exhausting all possible, yet stupidly dangerous, solutions, well, she'd be out of character.

>>12019681201968

There is always substitutes. How trains have ponies drag them WITH coal in ovens at the same time.

Sooooo...we have a pony-dragged cart with a magical sound-making stone most likely.

>>Bigwig6666

Excellent work.

Would like to know when the next part comes out

>>12047411204741 probably tonight. if not, tomorrow.

>>12042021204202 I don't envy those stallions.

>>12058791205879

Indeed.

Crap, I should've given this a once-over. Is it too late, now?

>>12068191206819 a bit. Git workin on next'n!

>>12068391206839

Working on it now. I just want to say, that on this chapter, 'Pinkie Sense' was kind of a lame excuse. And she would've been more excited than that while telling them.

Maybe I'll just give you a grammar/spelling nitpick later.

this reminds me of that old, back and white film called 'its a wonderfull life" is this anything like that? will it have a good ending like that did? i hope so. good start. have a strong finish, you have my support.

>>12189911218991 it's sort of an adaptation of wonderful life. Good film

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want MOARbut loveing the story so far keep up the good work

Can we please have moar?

This is really good.

Update, update and update!

Cancelled ? i wanted to red this ... now ... dunno