I know what the present is,I know what the present is But i won't spoil it for anyone.

I saw that coming. Good story, I always love Soarin' x Spitfire shipping.

hurricane force winds indeed.

when i heard the word "careless" i knew what happened.

I KNEW IT!!!

Great story, by the way. Keep up the good work.

Looks like the rain clouds cleared just in time for a thunder storm.

Just wondering but is she pregnant with Rainbow?

>>11778741177874Well if this story is trying to keep canon in ANY way then that will certainly not be the case. If it is, i'll be VERY confused by the coverart.

>>11787391178739 It was just a thought, but ya it seems unlikely.

Sweet Celestia.....its not like we didn't see that coming....

Iydjtdjtdcdgdyeiygxtxuxmgxn dduuuhauuudauuuu major cliiiiiiiiffffffffffhanger I cnt wait for more!

how did a rapist like hurricane get into a police force?

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nopony ever reported it. they thought they wouldnt believe it as hurricane's dad is sky marshal

>>12011271201127 still, he should not have authority. he should also not be trained to use a weapon.

EDIT: also, the public seem pretty willing to believe those kinds of things when it involves a reputation being shattered

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life throws us these little annoying curveballs sometimes

>>12011621201162 and thats what i love about this story... please tell me hurricane will get executed by his fellow gustapo, because i could use some cheering up

Soarin's heading to Ponyville, eh?...Wait a second...*sees the Rainbow Dash tag*... Oh no...Looks like things are gonna get ugly later on. Poor Spitty.

Wow. I understand why Soarin did what he did. It was uncalled for, sure, but I see where he's coming from with the whole keeping secrets thing. I just wanna see things come together in the end.

Can't wait for more. Keep up a good work

For some reason, I like stories when Spitfire gets pregnant

Congrats and omg to Spitfire wonder what soarins gonna do in ponyville....

btw if you check my profile dont read my story unless you REALLY want to

I'm just so sexy... ewww

that was copied from the text

Well this is certainly on a different level to the first story..

Well this is hardly surprising considering what they had been doing that night together. oh well now Soarin' needs to grow up and learn to be a father.

Keep it going... this is good. I like it almost as much as the first story.

Leave Rainbow Dash out of it

Hmmm...faster what???

Knew it ALL along!

MOAR!

WHY NO DASHIE?!

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Dont worry, update arriving soon

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We've got a guy who served several years in jail for raping a seven year old girl on our police force, so my suspension of disbelief is retained.

......Soar you idiot...

Blame it on the alcohol.

A triple whammy: A cheating coltfriend, a possibly permanently injured teammate and she's pregnant.

Poor Spitty

Well i gotta say one thing to Soarin....

"YOU STUPID DUMB FUCK."

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Dude when iread your comment i laughed my ass off!!!

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oh mama he pulled a goally

I disappointed in soar

soarin has now gotta tell spitty ir she's gonna kill him

wow saddy waddy spitty

God, soar why....

Howcome I think that Spitfire will sing something along these lines to Soarin' after she finds out about Rainbow:

Alcohol is far and away your favourite plot device, eh? Anyways, this is going great, if a little fast paced. Aside from the predictability. I could have told you that Soarin and Dash were going to hook up basically as soon as you mentioned her.

THE NEWSFLASH:

Ahem soar i DARE you to go back and say sorry to spitfire and be HER marefriend

why did you have to break up like this?!

you idiot

Yeah, I read "Racing The Wind" and it was awesome. But i dont know if I want to read this and destroy beautiful picture of their lovestory

Soarin' Ya done fucked up.

You are still working on this? Right? Because if not I'm gonna scream!

>>19641921964192 Of course I am I'm just getting back into writing my other fics. But don't worry, I make myself a promise to finish EVERY story I write

>>19650631965063 Ok, just checking.

pffew! i feel bad for Rainbow but i am very glad Soarin stop himself. Spitfire will need him now more than ever.

one question tough, Rapidfire is Spitfire's cousin right ? in the prequel didn't you made him look a bit much like her ? like yellow coat and orange mane ?

Update! Yessssssssss!!!!!!!

>>20044302004430 Rapidfire always had a grey coat, but his mane colour kind of changed from orange through to gold. I needed some form of uniqueness so he wasn't TOO much like Spitfire

Ohohoh yus.

Excuse my bad grammar, but I need to read this pronto.

You did not disappoint, great chapter! Poor Rainbow, and poor Soarin... But he DID deserve it! I hope Spitty screams at him or something... Well, at least he didn't have sex with Rainbow, I'll give him that...

Irresponsibility

I am very happy to see another chapter to this come out.  I have been loving the story and I can't wait for the next to come out.  Keep up the great writing!

And this is how you write clop... without clop.

Really sad and painful but sweet at the end, melancholy. Nice

We need to stab hurricane in the knees and dump him in a landfill

THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! 10/10

Please make more Spitfire x Soarin shipping fics!

I love this story so much, I was actually happy when you did a new chapter of this

*CTS! CT-bucking-S!

*Continue the story

now known as skythorn not eventide

WHEN WILL YOU STOP CHANGING YOUR NAME?!

>>25622572562257 This will most likely be it

um...ok

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