YAY! Your back! I swear, that If this ever happends again, there will be hell to pay! Isn't that right boys!?!?!

What keeps happening to the story?

ok WHAT THE FUCK!

WHOEVER THE HACKERS ARE STOP IT

we got a fluttershy

Aww mah gawrsh!

I LOVED THIS ON FANFICTION

>>11705291170529

But the story is amazing! Did you piss 'em off or something?

>>11706431170643 Now I'm only more confused.

Wait what happened to the story?  This is the first time I am reading it.  Good story by the way.

>>11706431170643 Did Poultron take care of that hacker for you. I remember seeing your conversation with him. Also, when ever I went back to try to read this story, it was gone, and I know I wasn't crazy. Glad it's back, and it will be one of my number one priorities once I am free.

I'm confused...what is happening?

so your re-uploading them?

content rating... 'everyone'....

until chapter 6 XD

>>11708261170826

I am enjoying it very much.

Why would they delete this amazing story.

>>11708891170889

Hate... that is all really.

>>11708371170837 Aww, okay. Just as long as you don't have to deal with the hacker and all.

Even among the bronies there is hate...

I thought bronies all loved and tolerated...I was wrong...

Why must there be bate in this wonderful pony filled land of ours? Aren't we all the same...why hate each other?  Anti-bronies cause enough hate...

That was my little speech there, hope y'all liked it.

I wonder why I didn't read this when it was up the first time... it's awesome!!

>>11710581171058 Agreed, I don't understand why bronies are flaming, and causing hate, between one another. Lucky, for me, I just brush it off, and I forgive and forget. I don't care about insults enough to start an argument about them. By the way do you have any stories I can read? Recommendations or personal stories? I'm going to go to your profile to see if you have any stories of your own, so you don't have to tell me those. Unless you have a few and there is a certain one of your bunch that you want to recommend to me.

I don't have any stories written by me...I almost start then I either get pulled away from it from something or I am just too lazy.

Displacement is a good story, I can't remember the names of the others.

I have a good idea...But my computer cord is not working so I am forced to operate from my kindle...the pony creator is hard to do on a mobile.

Look at my fave's, I am sure you can find a good story.

good story so far I like it

I like all of it it's awesome!!!!!!!

Great chapter! oh diamond tiara when will you learn

I can't believe someone would take this down, Hacker be gone I say! Lol but was there ever a real reason they took it down other than they thought you were a pedophile? I mean the story I like, But I have a question about it, how old is the guy?  He carries a DS around with him (Not gonna say anything bad about it, I to have sometimes play a DS at times for no reason) and he cries, but so do I sometimes, well forget what I said but his age I would like to know, because alot of things don't add up to me and I can't put him in a certain age group in my mind to get a clear image of him, like is he 12 or 13 or is he older but likes nintendo stuff and is sensitive to critiscism? Or did I readto fast and it explained that?

I've always found the bracelet scene touching.

When do you think you will have all the chapters re-uploaded? and when will there be more chapters?

why not a hiden blade gauntlet that would work for me

“Rarity, have you seen my clothes?” Really? Is he naked?

Human and pony... AWKWARD SHIPPING

Glad that your back and I hope now permanently.

HiE? ...meh. Why not.

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png

Well his credit card bill will be through the roof by the end of the month

I tend to read what I think is the main confession first seeing as how it wasn't there last time and the landlord was rarity I thought this to be a Human x Rarity now I can read this with no worries... also my real name is James so okay but try to get more out soon I don't want to read it with only a few chapters. must not read story yet Edit: okay maybe will read it now because of the amount of words per chapter

OH GOD MORE!

nice sweet story so far......was a little put off by James' shyness prolly due to the fact i don't give a flying buck what the general public thinks of me if i like me and my friends like me the rest can go fuck them selfs but i've actually come to like the person you made and eagerly await the following chapters

“Yeah, yeah, whatever. Now get outta here, blank flank. Or do I have to introduce your flanks to my boot?”

Oi, that really makes me want to punch the guy. Especially since he gets to tell Rainbow to cut the pranks.

>>11769541176954

More than that: By using her 'blank-flankedness' to humiliate her, he's insulting all the other kids who don't have their Cutie Marks yet, too. (Not to mention that he shouldn't get to decide any 'punishments' for anypony, but that's another point entirely.)

As long as he keeps using 'blank-flank' as an insult, he's not not helping, because he's implying not having a Cutie Mark makes a pony less worth than others. Sure, not everybody can be as smart as Twilight in recognising things as she did at Diamond's Cute-ceneara, but I doubt he'll ever think about what he's doing unless somepony confronts him with that. So, that's one of the reasons I have the urge to smack him upside the head (or, more likely, politely ask him to have a talk about this)

This story is mother-bucking amazing.

>>11707351170735 Indeed...

I have no clue what's going on.

Anyways, great story so far! Gonna keep on reading.

>>11776441177644

I know. However, he's still using it as an insult himself- as long as he does, things didn't really change, right? It's just someone else abusing somepony for being a 'blank-flank'.

It's surprising to me how nopony is pointing that out to him- or the fact that the joke is getting awfully cruel. Yes, she deserves comeuppance, but íf you push a little girl to physically attack you it might be a good idea to rethink what you've been doing. Well, the way it's now it feels a bit like a revenge fantasy.

Addendum: It feels that way to me which is,of course, a completely subjective view.

It was gone I got worried it came back Im happy

holy crap a Innocent clop scene!? my love for this story just tripled and especially liked the chicken reference and now i want jawbreakers your prick

So many feels this chapter.  Cloppery isn't even my thing, but you wrote it well, and sweetly. More please!

I can dito that last comment bro

Wow I just finish the last Chapter and all I could say about this new one Wow

PET THE CHICKEN PET THE CHICKEN. BUTTERED TOAST...My god it's been ages since I seen that. I must go find Edd Ed an' Eddy again.

>>11764711176471

>>11710581171058 They hate us because they do not know us enough, that is why we Love and Tolerate, but I tolerate haters to a certain degree, after that I just think they are acting like a bunch of ass-hats. And yes this story is best. Next to the other five I like best.

Rainbow dash: OM NOM NOM NOM

Read the chapter first, then you know of what I speak of.

damn

>>11808141180814

Sorry I wrote a comment and I was like...WAIT!

because I thought it was a different story.

Now I WOULD LIKE MORE FLUTTERSHY AND JAMES STUFF.  

BUT RAINBOW IS COOL so leave some perverted comments for her at ALL times!

well this kinda cliffhanger and i'm leaving for work soon......this sucks

'...It almost feels like nothing can possibly go wrong now...'

*looks back at tags for story (tragedy, sad, and dark)*

Oh gawd, why would you challange the universe that way!?

>>11701321170132 lol best post i seen yet

Damn you, Diamond Tiara!

I brought my face close to Elizabeak and nuzzled her while one hand stroked her back. “Pet the chicken… Pet the chicken…” I muttered in a quiet yet goofy tone. If you who are reading this happen to know where that quote came from, congratulations.

Ed, Edd, and Eddy

Oh my god... This is such an amazing story . I'm not real fond of clopfics, but you have made the subject so much more tolerable with how you word everything. I hope this story updates in a day or two, and I hope it continues for a long time

The clop scene was perfect. It was just passionate clop and not that the weird stuff I sometimes read.

*Reads chapter* Oh..........My...........Glob! This is going to turn tide for the worse. I sure hope they can somehow dodge that law. Suspense is going to make it harder for me to go to school knowing another chapter might be on its way.

AWESOME!

>>11851971185197

Story of The Blanks reference. Sadly, I only watched videos of it on youtube, and have not beaten the game yet.

>>11852381185238

No, I mean I always get stuck in the beginning of the game when you first go into Sunny Town. I just fail so hard at that game.

I am greatly enjoying this fic! Keep it up!

Man just a great story so far keep it up

>>11855241185524

I enjoy the immense detail you put into describing everything. Makes the story come to life! A good skill to have in writing if I do say so myself!

Since Humanity seems to be specifically looking for more in depth commentary than a simple "I like it"....

Humanity, I like this story in general, but what I think is best about it is that while you take the characters in directions beyond what the show displays, I rarely if ever feel like anyone is acting out of character. The way you managed to do this in some areas actually resembles how the show expanded off of the relatively shallow personalities initially given to the mane 6.

However, if I may offer one bit of constructive criticism, I did not like the converstion between rainbowdash and James in this chapter. The first reason for this is that I believe the events of the story would leave both RD and James too emotionally high strung for the conversation to go the way you portrayed it. Also, on perhaps a more subjective note, I felt like RD's reassurance that they would work it out with Celestia ruined the emotional flow of the chapter; his flight into the Everfree was based off of fear, and horror is a main theme of this chapter, so avoiding any kind of reassurance might have worked better. Play up the idea of being alone, and living in fear out of uncertainty, you know?

Though that might be quite a bit of criticism, keep in mind that it is only for a small part of a large work (large by fanfiction standards at least). I still have enjoyed this story as a whole. Thank you for writing it.

This story is very descriptive. Seriously Humanity I mean it, The Mane 6 make me think that I'm watching the show instead of reading the story. And this chapter really put the H in Horror.

I tend to enjoy the long chapters that take the Effort to discribe what is going on in the story without interfering in the progression of the story and Tend to like the direction the story seems to be taking all in all a great story and I hope you continue it it's not often we get some one willing to write so much in a single chapter keep up the good work.

So many feels.

this is the first story I can't put myself in the humans place I just can't place myself in James' shoes. I think the biggest of many reasons is I prefer to be peaceful yes but I embrace violence with open arms and a smile when I have to, now this is not to say he's a "coward" or a "wimp" simply that he is not me I know I have been and will be down right malicious to people hurt my friends or family and I'm ashamed to say I have taken it too far on 2 separate occasions (hospitals were involved). I'm also nowhere near that timid the result is he reminds me of my younger brother whom is best described as a marshmallow and I mean no offence by that. all meaning I have no clue how James will react to any given situation. To me he's unreadable for the lager part of his actions and I love that it one of the things that make this story you have a truly enjoyable read you have captured me with this one and I look forward to the rest

“Even though it rides high on the flank, Rainbow won’t look like a…"

was rarity going to call RD a skank?

This whole chapter... How much he cares for all of the ponies he's met, how much he loves Fluttershy, how much Fluttershy loves him. The impact he's had on Ponyville during such a short visit. It's all so... just wow.

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH

you refferenced that one team fortress crossover yea?

Plox catch up to where the story is on fanfiction.net!

my heart!  my heart!  it aches!

bravo with the affections.  Didn't make me cry but I dawed

I like chickens Eddy!

That reference made my night.

>>11758791175879 To bad he is no longer on Earth so I bet he can spend away!

This is possibly one one of the most interesting concepts for a story I have seen yet, I am very interested i where this goes, as far as Mitta and Moon. As for this chapter I found it very heart warming and enjoyable.

Hello thar!

Huzzah! Its good to see this story moved to this site, now i can finally catch up agein.

Please keep up the good work man.

Okay, I'm calling complete bullshit on what James said about humans. "There are good people in the world, but my estimate is that they are outnumbered four to one." When I read that, I'm going to be honest, I just wanted to stop reading the story altogether, and I think I am. Yes, there are bad people out there in the world, but there is not fucking way they outnumber good people four to one. It should be the other way around. Actually, I say to for every bad person, there are ten good ones.

Sorry if it seems that I'm being rude (I hate being rude to people, especially for stupid reason) but I just can not stand to see that kind of what might as well be bashing on humanity.

Exquisite chapter as always.

Last element ish mah element!I R teh element erve lerve!

Wow. The Mane 6's reactions to a human in Equestria are very strange. You would think more than "You're a human? Cool." Compared to some fan-fics where their reactions are to scream in terror.

Well all i have to say is that I adore this story immensely. The character development, the romance, the feels..........very well written.

Definitely faving and tracking in hopes of reading many many more chapters. Keep up the great work Humanity!

You sure do like using the term "but I digress" don't you?

>>11938941193894

Getting hacked is such a pain, I know exactly how you feel.

I'm really glad you made a new account and reuploaded this story, finding and reading it has been a real treat.

Heres hoping that your current account stays safe, I'll distract potential hackers by filling their rooms with angry bees.

The Three Caballeros Reference Nice And Good Chapter by the way

the cake is a lie. good job sir.

>>11916041191604 Eh... James did have a point, but i have to agree with you there... minion... XD

Don't tell me this is the end, I need more! I need to know if Fluttershy gets pregnant with his foal, I need to know how they all adapt to being a family with Scootaloo. Pleeeheheheeheasse.!!!

>>11940851194085 Good...

Use wasps though.

They work better ;)

And thus the first Centauer was created.

Fingers crossed that this isnt the last chapter. I can see how ending it here would work but I really hope it continues.

In other words........MOAR!

im picking up this big fluttershy and James vibe but same goes for rarity and James what are you planing good sir  

B..but Twilight is best pony...

im now starting to pick up on a rainbow James vibe.

I already know what's going to happen!

...No I am not telling you.

Two words:

TEH FEELS!

fluttershy James not bad good sir not bad but i was picking up on the vibe

They made a relationship between a mythical creature (that they didn't know existed) and a pony punishable by death? Damn trollestria doesn't play around!