Hmmmm seems good I would like more please.

OOOOO, I am going to enjoy this alot. But I reckon it would be better in 1st or 3rd person

I got a notification for his it is time

Makes me think of myself

Dude were did you get the picture? The only time I see that picture is underground dubstep

>>11975491197549 Just google gas mask. I think its in the top results.

May I have some more, please?

The violence is amazing, pulling someone's spine out the front of their body, I havent seen that one before now

i like the good side bad side you give him, even if the bad side wants to kill it is not without reason. even if it is still a bad thing.

I hope there are killings

I like this story, i like this story so much that i am going to look for a gif that fits with the personality of this person.

Image: http://denver.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw7702-67691__safe_animated_vinyl-scratch_artist-efrejok_artist-paultorsynocobnik.gif

I think i found it.

>>11987731198773

How much did you get paid for this?

And by the way summer is ending here its almost fall.

Anyway stop doing this atleast the bronies who spam on this site put pony-related stuff in their comments.

>>11992511199251 Should I delete his comment or tell the mods?

>>11993261199326

Tell the mods, then delete it when the mods looked to it.

Great story by the way, i hope the gif isn't too annoying.

>>11993431199343 The gif gave me a good laugh, so you made my morning. Although the guy is already banned so I don't know if I should still tell the mods....

>>11993741199374

Wouldn't be necessary then.

Its 18:30 here xD, i just love the internet for this.

Well keep up the good work and all that.

I have no idea where I'm going with this story...

me like

please make more

yay

Well, i hate to be cliché, i was going to say the shit is about to hit the fan, but i'l the original.

The fan is about to hit the shit.

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png

I am very curious about the next chapter, this one was really nice.

aww crap i don't know if i should be afraid for AJ and Rainbow, or be excited for the action in the next chapter.

This can only get worse from here

By that I mean the ponies fubar sitrep

killing evil stuff and ponies this is right up my allyway

And now we all know that this guy is NOT TO BE FUCKED WITH!

Kill them... kill them all.

Huzzah! A new chapter!

Ouch.

DONT FORGET THE MASK!

...They forgot the mask, didnt they?

>>14069651406965

Such things are easily forgotten when a leg falls off.

yay pony beating :D

Watch the shift in perspective. You've gone through three in the first three chapters, changing back and forth. Apart from that and a few spelling mistakes, you're shiny.

>>14095861409586 I usually only shift like that when doing fight scenrs and what not, but I usually only write in 2nd pov, so don't worry too much about it.

Okay I was just pointing it out.

Oh you big tease, you don't have him wake up just to cut off.

Well at least its still an update.

PRINCESS LUNA! I think.

Well this is getting intresting.

Wat?

Well, shit has hit the fan.

Image: http://images.wikia.com/dragonage/images/2/2a/Anchorman-well-that-escalated-quickly.jpg

Shit, Meet fan.

This was a little short but, hey, it's better than nothing.

Nooooo it was to short

Y U NO MAKE LONGER CHAPTERS?!

YEP. My nipples are hard. a job well done!

MOAR! MOAR!!!!!

Image: http://www.myfacewhen.net/uploads/2691-moar-fat.png

I hope you clamp down on the fact that she invaded his mind. Everyone seems to give ponies a free pass regarding that.

>>17502191750219Well he did attack her.

Yhis story is awesome, i'm looking forward for the next chapter.

No really everytime this story updates i'm like

Your doing a great job, keep up the good stuff.

>>17510921751092 Thanks!

>>17525281752528

Don't mention it, here have an award. (i feel like throwing with awards lately, and you kinda earned it in my book so here ya go)

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Now just sit right there while I tell you how I became the prince of bellair

>sees title

>sees picture

>>19612581961258 that was a creepy episode.

just random comment keep going

What the fuck are you doing? Are you raping that tree?

Made my day

Truly

I accidentally smacked my dog out of the laughter I could not control

Putting more strain into your arms, the feeling of the chains digging into your wrists sent a rush of ecstasy into your blood. With pleasure running into your senses, you felt a surge of renewed strength that tipped the chains past its point and caused you to grunt in pleasure.

Umm...

Ok

He seems like he is the Paragon of Bondage and King of Kinky

I love this fic.