For the past year a strange ship nicknamed the Space Blimp has been orbiting Equestria. Nopony has any idea why it is up there or what intentions it has.
Eventually it is forgotten by nearly everypony except for Princess Luna. She maintain a vigil on the Space Blimp while racking her mind as to its intentions. Are they good intentions? Or is it a harbinger of darker things?
Rated Teen for an awkward walk in.
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I read the first few paragraphs... Not much chaos, but you have me interested.
MOAR. OH GOD MY BODY CRAVES MOAR!!!!
Good story
but make MOAR
oh my god, the awsome levels are OVER 9,000!
Intergalactic struggle with Equestria caught in the crossfire?
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you got me at
Very good so far. Out of curiosity is this a crossover with something I've never heard of or simply your own imagination?
Sex tag?
Didn't this have a different title last time it updated?
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Yes, I changed the title because I felt it was too foreshadowing.
Small nitpick: 10,000 tons for a 2km craft is very low. A Nimitz-class aircraft carrier masses about 100,000 tons while being only one-sixth as long. At these dimensions, Hyperion would have a density well below that of cigar smoke.
Well Luna you may have just ruined first contact -_- sucks she doesn't know they were doing a simple scan of he hahahaa
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in the first chapter their is a vibrator reference
Why did you cancel it! This story has something good going for it!
Luna...
4113571 Huh this coment was posted exactly two years and five days ago.