Senorita-De-La-Nieve
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Why is it already on hiatus? Just curious how that works, is all.
That was NOTHING like what I expected.
MASSIVE SPOILERS INBOUND!!!!!
An OC(I'm fine with that by the way) with 4 wings escaping fro Tartarus after sustaining grievous injury to be nursed back to health was not what I saw coming. I was thinking maybe another zebra shows up seeking the potion master (no not Snape!) but even she would not be able to heal him of whatever rare ailment he had (sad and tragedy tags).
Bout time we got some Heterosexual love for Zecora that wasn't Big Mac.
Dicorns: The Dicorns are like Unicorns, but with two horns, and they have half the magical power of Unicorns because they have to divide their focus between two horns. Some Dicorns have become so adept at this, that they can cast magic at a normal Unicorn level, but very rarely will they be any more powerful than a Unicorn.
Hemiwings: Hemiwings are the Pegasi of Tartarus. They have two wings, but both are split down the middle and have formed smaller third and fourth wings. These extra wings allow for unprecedented air control, and allows the Hemiwings to fly about like insects, with no need for wind or clouds to glide.
Brutes:The Brutes are similar to Earth Ponies, in that they have no magic or wings. However, they have double the aptitude of muscular growth than that of Earth Ponies, and are therefore bigger and stronger than most Earth Ponies. They take to solving most problems in Tartarus through brute force.
This story is best one i've ever read, by far. Fav'd and a watch for you sir :D:D:D:![]()
When I first saw this description, these were my thoughts:
"What dafuq, this kid has no grammar skills."
After I click it:
"Oh, it's just separated by separate lines." ![]()
Very interesting start, you have me intrigued.
Author, are his wings one on top of each other? Or are they next to each other? Like one closer to his front and the other his back.?
It's be easier to picture him![]()







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