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Sunset is trying to come to terms with what she has done. She ends up dealing with guilt, depression, and trying to understand friendship. Can Vice Principal Luna, and the Mane 5 help Sunset with her feelings, bullying and life in general.
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Okay, just starting this out. You've got me intrigued.
Btw, your short description has her name spelled as 'Susnet.'
I'm so glad that this has finally got published! And it makes me so happy that I have inspired others to write, I honestly can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapters!
Despite a few errors i enjoy it and can't wait to see more
interesting start but i love it so far
Nice chapter
so far so good a few errors but they are negliable. Looking forward to more.
Can't wait to see more
Aww, that was a sweet ending. Nice to see Luna and Sunny bonding a bit.
Story seems interesting so far. Keep up the interesting work.
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OP of previous comment has deleted what they said, so I removed my response.
i disagree with LunaEclipsed011, English is not an easy language to wiled even for me a native speaker. I do see several issues but they are simple things that a proofreader would flag.
The new bit with Twilight has me intrigued.
Can't wait for the next one
10353296 English is way too complicated
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I see. Clearly, giving you the benefit of a doubt was a mistake.
Good day to you.
I really liked this chapter! I love how Luna cares about Sunset, and it's really interesting with what you're doing with Twilight! Also, I hope you're safe!
Enjoyed it and stay safe from the hurricane supposed to be a big one
Was quite surprised to see Sunset act like that to Luna and then calling her an asshole
Can't wait to see what happens next
Sunset's comment to Luna really hurt her, hopefully next part comes out soon. Luna needs to confront her about it, but in a gentle way.
Like the saying goes once you hit rock bottom there's nowhere else to go but up
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You good sir I like your remark. I give you a spike with a mustache
Luna definitely shows more signs of motherly instincts then it should be possible for a vice principal makes me wonder if something happened to Luna in this dimension have such a motherly Instinct on such an in-depth level
Ok, not cool. That just went from self defense to assault and battery of a minor. Whoever this “figure” is (my money’s on Chrys), she is one sick/twisted fuck.
Sounds like Trixie and her motley crew got what they deserved.
Well this chapter ended up being short and had a shocking ending and I'm starting to wonder who's the person who saved sunset my only guess is maybe rainbow dash but not gonna say why but I'll see what happens
Well if that doesn't sound ominous
Saw it coming
Sounds like someone else is about to do something potentially regrettable.
I had a feeling it was Dash.
The pony who probably has the answers Twilight's looking for is no doubt Princess Celestia.
Interesting story, added to my read list.
Ok it bad enough you have Sunset refuse to press charges, but how can the bit on not pressing charges as Sunset is a demon walking around school make sense?
Does the world have Random students go on rampages as demons a lot?
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That was even addressed at the end of Friendship Games.
i like it and want more of it that is all
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Don't you worry there is more to come.
Is this over?
Not quite
I have a feeling this is going to end not so well for either Trixie or dash being as Trixie already made it on Luna's s*** list and rainbow dash for her little stunt in the locker room
I'm expecting (a warranted) "Rainbow dash assaulted me in the locker room.", but also an eventual "because I was there when Gilda beat Sunset into hospitalization."
And yeah, Rainbow's going (probably significantly more than) a little overboard with what happened this chapter.
Venom refrence lol, great chapter
I enjoy reading your story please keep it coming
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I'm glad that someone picked that up.
Sunset: Asshole
Luna: you do realize i am still your vice principal correct?
Nice update.
And this is why you dont do that kind of stuff Rainbow-_-