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The Feels <3
So beautiful...
As soon as you said the word fireplace I was really REALLY hoping you were going to do this th07.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2014/063/4/7/murky_and_the_kiss_comic___commission_by_pantzar-d78vmdt.png
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Fallout: Equestria - Murky Number Seven: Punching you in the feels with every word.
~ TOOWC
Oooh. That bit, in the MoAS, that was a dream, wasn't it? Oh, gods, for a moment I thought it wasn't and it was horrible. Loving this story, still, forever, and always.
5476758 I panicked for a bit.
What a disappointing story, given all the praise the comments gave it.
I suppose I didn't know what else to expect. I have yet to find a Fo:E story I like.
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surely you didn't expect the Apocalypse to be bright, warm and cuddly?
now this is how you do a recap chapter, I can feel the feels.
Geez, Fuzz. I didn't know you were capable of writing something less than 10k words.
That apostrophe in "masters" shouldn't be there.
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No, I just don't expect a goddamned slapstick comedy with some murder and rape frequently thrown in either. You can make those two things coexist, but let one moment and another be separate! It's like a Robin Williams movie in here, and most of you know my thoughts on Robin Williams.
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Right in the chutzpah
I came
(when I saw the update)
Then I d'awwed
Well this was a rather nice break from the doom that is happening and is going to happen outside.
Of course Shackles is still probably going on with his plan, at least he doesn't have the people and supplies in the mall backing him up anymore.
Let's hope after this rest, all his friends can guard this place and head down and stop Shackles and at least find some of those children and old Ghouls down there.
You had me there for a moment. wow, I had forgotten how much this story meant to me. Excellent writing as always.
You said it was going to be short. While I'll admit the pacing was short, but... six thousand words is Fuzzy's short. Okay.
That doesn't equal each other. Honestly, when you said short I expected about two or three thousand words.
But anyway, I was on the verge of tears at the end. Don't know why... but dang. You got me right in the feels. Great job Fuzzy.
-Stahl
Yay! Shipping!
5477753 Somepony should look up Clockwork Orange's singing in the rape scene. I've heard complaints that most FoE stories are dark dark and darker. I have read several and Murky's descent to rock bottom in this story has to be the longest and hardest dark part in any story I've read so far. (mind you not the darkest) but the comedy and drama in between the dark parts in these fanfics is some of the funniest and heartwarming things I've read compared to actual books. It's what keeps me coming back for more fanfics
5477753 I wonder, when have you EVER seen slapstick in MN7, or any of the major Fallout: Equestria titles? I don't remember any.
Slapstick is bumbling protagonists failing their goals in funny fashion because of overplayed motions. Good examples are Laurel and Hardy, Mr. Bean or Wile E. Coyote cartoons. For the most part, F:E doesn't have that, because it wouldn't fit. Even the main series is very reserved in its use: the only two scenes that come to mind are Twilight's pummeling in Feeling Pinkie Keen and the destruction of Town Hall in The Last Roundup. Both prominently featuring Derpy, interesting enough.
5476758 It would be really screwed up if all of MN7 was just a fantasty or dream Murky was having as he goes about his day as just another slave.
I just cought up, and this is one hell of a fic. Keep it up Fuzzy!
I read around a third of this story (off-site - I read longer things on my kindle now). I'm not finishing, and probably never will, because it's bad for my health...
But that's good darkwords for you.
Not that it means much in the flood of others, but have an upvote.
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Really awesome to hear your thoughts going through this, I love seeing chapter by chapters like this.
Chapter 7 was awesome fun to write, I have very fond memories of it over the 4 days it took, while on holiday. That was a good time, so it's nice to hear something so long ago is still going down well :)
I'll have to have a look for those pegasi things then, do enjoy your read!
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I'm glad to hear it. I will say that I personally feel the pacing dropped a bit much in Chapters 14-16 in what represents the 'hit the bottom' part of the story, so I hope that doesn't show too much.
All I can say is that 17 onwards is, personally, some of the parts I'm most proud of for varying reasons, even if it might not look it at first. I hope you'll enjoy!
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That was absolutely one of those 'timing choices' for drama. In absolute law of reality and character, Glimmer would have started teaching him within days of realising he couldn't.
But in terms of when feels impactful and meaningful, I felt waiting for now was best. :)
Whooowee. That was one long journey. Great story. 10/10
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You may not have to wait long for the next one. Hint hint! =D
Huzzah!!!! I have at last, finally caught up to this AMAZING story! Can't wait to see what's coming up next! The end is near! I can feel It! I give this story 11/10 mustaches!
Which now leaves the question, what am I gonna read now? Oh the horror...I knew this day would come, but I didn't expect it to be so soon! XD
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Same! XD I kept expecting it to happen somehow in other chapters as well.
5717292 :D
Let it be known that upon this day, many a pony's desires would be confirmed to come true.
Praise the all glorious one...
Murky.
Okay, it took me four weeks, but I caught up to the story. If I didn't have this sliver of self control within me, it would've taken half the time and I would probably have had to take this college semester again. I swear I will never feel intimidated by length again.
I'm not entirely sure about Mister Peace here. He's as fun as always, but I recall Murky leaving him inside a slaver house while the griffins were fetching some heavy weaponry... how did he survive? I fully expected never to see him again.
Another thing is Red Eye's death. It makes sense that it happened "off screen", but I didn't realize it had happened until Protégé outright told Murky he was dead. I feel like I should've caught onto that during Protégé's brief escape from Shackles after the sirens went off... am I just slow?
Very hyped for the next chapter.
i really really believe Unity shouldent have went off like that like wtf man he needs a mare on dem lonely nights and to be honest i had thought flappy bit was her stallion at first it would have been pretty cool but ur story and i still love it
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srry but it was kinda obvious to anyone with reading experience
5748586 you want "intimidating length"... Try reading Project Horizons (get your mind out of the gutter) loved that story but it's definitely a journey. I blast through long stories though.
Mister Peace took a bunch of junk parts are made a fake scrap pile of himself to fake his death remember?
I read Fallout Equestria first so I was expecting Red eyes death, wasn't hard for me to put two and two together but I binge read the story in a week or two so it keeps all the events fresh in mind
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PH is awesome im looking forward to the next chapter is should be out soon
5876223 I hope so PH, MN7, and Heros take so long to update I can reread PH twice if it doesn't release soon a I'll start my third reread
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you should read others i hear memory is good and starlight if you can get past the the childishness in it.
5878493 yeah I've read pink eyes , guise of chaos, merchants of Hope, and treasure hunting. Tried reading starlight but It was one of the first I didn't like, shortly after the discord reveal I stopped reading. I agree with project horizons portrayal of him in that if the norm of the world is death and destruction he wouldn't act evil anymore. been trying to read the sequel to Merchants of Hope but finally decided to give non-FoE fics a chance Lord I found alot of good ones. Will look into Memories though not sure if I've heard of it yet.
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http://www.fimfiction.net/story/173200/honey-pie
+ the sequel
and
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/41596/past-sins
this one i know you will love its amazing it beats FOE jus not Horizons
5882730 loved honey pie 1 and 2 don't know if the third is still updating though, read it after I read Hard Reset. Looked at your favorites list and added past sins to my read list after I saw you faved honey pie we have similar tastes XD so now the plan is to re-read Heroes and parts of Murky Number Seven then get into the new stuff and hope by the end at least some of my update watch list has updated. MN7 is a bit understandable at least, when they post updates they post Long Updates so it takes longer to update.
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as far as same taste i guess so aside that i like clop fics mostly and i dont usually fav them and no honey pie 3 is not being updated he is taking a break since he messed up writing it
5883520 well I hide the clopfics there's a reason my read later list is left privated and my private list is left privated been meaning to move all the naughty stuff into it's own folder.
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Thank you very much! It was an endurance task to complete that one, but I'm very proud of the result, always delighted when people love this one.
Also, thanks for the little typo spots. I'll get on them!
Been years sins I put reading this on hold. I think it's time to change that.
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if ya haven't figured it out its probably the same thing lil pip runs into with ... the stare go read it and find out it was when she was with zenith yaknow the big fleshy blob
The end battle is nigh!
When I was reading this, I wasn't sure what was going on at first. I thought that maybe it was: Murky in an old memory orb; a dream; or worse, Murky had been captured, and had his and Unity's memory extracted by Grindstone, and only subconsciously remembering his old life thanks to Unity's memory link magic; or worst of all, none of the rest of the story actually happened and was just Murky imagining things to cope with slave life.
When I thought of those last two options I was really unsettled, and unsure of what was actually happening. Glad that it was just a dream though, but it's weird that he was able to remember something he had removed.
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Those creatures and the mint beasts, while sharing the horror factor of once being ponies now monsters, are drastically different on several points
1. The main part is they kill differently, the stare monsters kill by picking you up before injecting eggs inside your body then keeping you paralyzed until they hatch and you die, the mint beasts kill in a way I imagined was more akin to that of the creatures from “a quiet place”, fast and crushing operating with nothing but physical prowess to rip they’re victims to shreds.
2. They were created differently. The Stare monsters were created by a pregnant mare having an accident with IMP and having her corpse give birth to these creatures which in turn impregnated the hospital staff and lived there then on until littlepip kills them, whereas the mint beasts are eluded you being created by the zebras experiments on ponies in the metro, while these experiments might have included IMP for a similar scenario to occur I believe that to be highly unlikely considering all IMP was just in its final stages of creation at Maripony when the bombs dropped and IMP was also highly classified for anyone who wasn’t directedly involved with its creation(not even Luna or Celestia knew it existed) so it’s not very likely that Fillydephia had any IMP in it at all
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They both are scary. Poor mare.
Yhaassss tease the Murky!!!
This was an adorable little chapter ^^ they deserve some rest before shit it's crazy again <3