Good story, more please

Damn it!

How dare you catch my interest.

my interests, you has them

good so far, feels a little rushed though

who is lucky? is that Fluttershy's bunny? if so his name is actually Angel

also just after entering Fluttershys house you switched the names around once

good good now ill read chapter 2

like it you have my reading pleasureful

This story is very interesting.I definitely want to see where your heading with this.It's certainly a new approach than most H.I.E.'s.It was a little rushed due to lack of details and short conversations but not overly so.Overall I thinks it's one of the better stories and deserves a thumbs up :).

I approve of this and will be awaiting updates as they come

Cool Chapter.It answer multiple questions and creates even more.I can't wait to see the next update.

Good chapter, but wasn't it " take a leter spike" instead of "take a message"?

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She is just that angry, poor Twily

Nice. I like that you're trying to come up with something new to HIE. Overally good chapter, keep it going.

yay for good health.....

But I have to ask... how does one pony check another ponies prostate?

They have hooves! Not fingers!

(I could not find Rainbow blitz of this so Rainbow will have to stand in)

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Now you know why Baker really didn't want to get a prostate exam

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I'm wondering... Are you planning any shipping, or you are going to focus more on Baker-Light relations?

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I have no plans for anything real shipping in this story, it is all about Baker and Light

...Okay, I'll admit it... I sang that song out loud

You made and broke my early morning, guy. I was about to hit the hay, when i saw this get updated. Yet, i must read on!

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EDIT:

Finished reading, and i must say, Andy seems like a know-it-all which rubs the wrong way then off to the right alternating between the two as i read each chapter. The former because i dislike know-it-alls and the latter because I want to see what kind of trouble he'll get into or how the story will progress if he keeps this up. Again it would've been nice to have his back story explained a bit in the 1st chapter.

Another thing is there are several typos and a few grammatical errors to point out, though i don't mind coz i autocorrect when i read. Though the grammar nazis of the site might not appreciate that. All things aside, keep up the good write.

corner of eye, not corner of eyes (what's that?)

To be honest this was a hard chapter to write, I didn't want to make Derpy's life so awful but i couldn't think of any other way to do it.

You need to make use of descriptions in your story, filling the majority of it with dialogue can make it seem a bit bland.

And that is the end of Baker's story. BTW all the characters introduced in the epilogue are the children of the Mane 6, see if you can figure out who is who.

very nice. The ending does feel somewhat rushed though.

>>16324851632485 endings always seem rushed for me

Agree with the others, the story was nice and interresting, until the end wich is totally rushed.

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To be honest, I ran out of ideas. I didn't want the story to limp on so I finished it with a flash forward, I wish I could have done better but this is all I had left.

While I have to say that the flash forward wasn't the best strategy for that point in the story, overall it was pretty darn good.

I love this chapter. I work in a library myself and it's so much easier using the Dewey Decimal System.

You're saying that Equestria has a National Health Service?!? That's better than I expected. Reading the word 'diapers' in earlier chapters suggested that this was written by an American but to portray Equestria as having a proper welfare system suggests it was written by a Brit. At best I thought that only essential healthcare would be free and the rest would have to be paid for, just not for profit (refer The Ticket Master).

I'm disappointed that there's no analysis of the beliefs and languages mentioned when the protagonist reorganised Ponyville's public library but apart from that, and your acknowledgement of A Canterlot Wedding, this is a marvellous work.