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LunasCaptain 5317

Joined August 2012
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    LunasCaptain's Stories (5)

    • Common Ground
      The tale of a Changeling ambassador to the Crystal Empire and the unlikely origin of her species.

      47,823 words · 2,084 views · 214 likes · 10 dislikes
    • River of Light
      Celestia travels across the country with only the talking head of a Lunar guard for company.
      9,133 words · 131 views · 18 likes · 1 dislikes
    • A Winter Arrival
      A mysterious girl with odd powers wakes in the woods, unable to remember how she came to be there.
      2,162 words · 228 views · 10 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Artificial Light
      Twilight Sparkle returns home from a long journey.
      3,459 words · 381 views · 15 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Lethe
      4,141 words · 155 views · 8 likes · 2 dislikes
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    A one-shot, in which a human girl with decidedly inhuman powers wakes up in an icebound forest.  She receives help from an old woman who lives nearby, and learns more about her origins and her purpose than she ever wanted to know.

    I wrote this quite awhile ago and just barely got around to typing it up.  Please, try not to judge too harshly.

    First Published
    25th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    25th Aug 2012

    Comments ( 6 )

    #1 · 42w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Wow. That's deep.

    I'm notebook one for sad stories, but have a favorite, thuumb oh, and a :moustache:!

    #2 · 42w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Well, I hope Rarity finds Twilight, and I hope she's okay.  Although the choice of bringing Derpy along for first contact is a questionable one.

    #3 · 42w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1153894

    Haha, thank you!  And so begins my extensive collection of exotic mustaches.

    #4 · 40w, 6d ago · · ·
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    For some reason, when I read the news article title "War Declared on Aliens," I couldn't help but think of the general from Futurama.

    "What's that alarm for?"

    "That alarm'll tell us if war were declared."

    *the bell starts going off*

    "What does that mean?"

    "War were declared."

    Sorry that was really random... I liked the story, though. I very much look forward to the next part.

    #5 · 40w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1224089

    Haha, I haven't watched Futurama in so long. XD  Your comment reminded me of everything that is good about the show.

    Back to the subject at hand, there probably won't be a next part to this fic, because I have absolutely no idea what would happen next even if I did continue it.  I wrote it specifically to be a one-shot, and never thought I'd come back to it.

    #6 · 20w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Interesting story, but it would have helped if there was more of an explanation as to what started the war between humans and (former) ponies. As it is, it seems like a bunch of pegasi got bored one day and decided to create a superstorm, just to stop being bored.

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