i want this to be a good story, because it seems like it could

MOTHER OF CELESTIA!!!

This story is absolutely BRILLIANT!

>>11532961153296 ill try my best

As the human's eyes began flitter to open, a faint grumble escaped it's lips, "Braaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaains!"

I like it so far, fun take on the intro into an HiE

>>11536891153689 no it groans "diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiick" lol

Not Bad

>>11537011153701

I got ya there

*wink wink nod nod*

brilliant idea love the story so far

very good thus far

my reaction to waking up in a room full of ponies  

As the human's eyes began flitter to open, a faint grumble escaped it's lips, "That's it I'm off the acid!"

As the human's eyes began flitter to open, a faint grumble escaped it's lips, "I gotta take a piss real bad"

>>11536891153689 As the human's eyes began flitter to open, a faint grumble escaped it's lips, "That's it I'm off the acid

As the human's eyes began flitter to open, a faint grumble escaped it's lips, "I gotta take a piss real bad"

As the human's eyes began flitter to open, a faint grumble escaped it's lips, "Braaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaains!"

SATIN LOOK WHATS THOU HAST STARTED!!! *giggle*

Good start

me like this story please make more

A Bit Rushed But it Was Good

>>13648571364857

dat face... not sure if good or bad.....

Shit just got real.

Pretty awesome update! We finally see what Lamia is capable of!

>>14157491415749

you have NO idea

As the human's eyes began flitter to open, a faint grumble escaped it's lips, "DAAAAMN I'm hungry! Where's da meat at?"

XD Good chapter, if a bit rushed.

>>15530151553015

"where's da.... meat..." This is... nevermind....

Imma just use images for this chapter's reaction.

Annnnd caught up. happy? Good. Not bad work at all, Ela!

Now:

Image: http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mcw8dfgyxv1rywk8lo1_250.gif

>>15533231553323

wait. back... ward.... s.... OMG