1: Scootaloo 2: Rumble 3: Sweetie Belle 4: Apple Bloom 5: Fluttershy
Endurance, holding oneself aloft for more than a few seconds. This is the key to sustained flight. Scootaloo must now learn endurance with ease that flight would become effortless to her.
inspired by My Little Disney: Make a Man Out of You by DagaYemar
Was short and sweet.
Soon she'll be soaring like an eagle. I'm so glad for her.
Final Scootaloo story in f aew days (probably). after that stay tuned for Sweetie Belle and Applebloom, all three series intertwine. general timeline link here along with the general stories if you click on the timebar. spoiler alert do not click on the time bars.
>>11726531172653 Very impressive my good sir. I'm looking forward to these
Short, sweet, and gets the feels moving a little bit. I like how you write, keep it up! Looking forward to reading about the rest of the CMC.
edit: Just went and looked at your timeline for the story, that's cool man. I can't plan things out with that much detail and succeed, I am most impressed.
dude, don't be. most of Sweetie Belle's timeline came from events of Scootaloo's stories. And Applebloom, I had no idea what to do with her, her storyboarding was vainly trying to come up with steps to acquiring strength, then I changed the goal to applebucking, and played off of Sweetie Belle to get the ball rolling.
Most parts of the stories are not planned at all, only the steps (one per story), and the intertwining key events have been planned. from there I just wing it.
Still, to be able to create a structure like that is something I just can't pull off. I'll get tied up in my plans and panic.
While it's not what inspired me to write, this pretty much describes my muse: http://wordofchen.deviantart.com/art/Overcome-your-Writer-s-Block-323698295