Teardrops
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Have you ever taken the time to stop and look at the stars?
To bask in the beauty of the night sky?
This is a short tale of a filly that does, learning a new lesson in life along the way.
Have you ever taken the time to stop and look at the stars?
To bask in the beauty of the night sky?
This is a short tale of a filly that does, learning a new lesson in life along the way.
Short, REALLY sweet, and well written for being something so simple. I was ready to nail it to the wall for the length but this is actually not bad.
-Chessie
Thank you all for the support. I always appreciate the feedback.
The Voice was not Luna, but -something yet to be discovered. Perhaps it already has been discovered.
The choice is yours to make. Each path leads somewhere else you know...
-Pandela
I like it... you need some commas and apostrophes, but other than that, you're good.
I like it.