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Pandela 2110

Joined April 2012
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    Pandela's Stories (2)

    • Teardrops
      Life can be full of mystery's and wisdom yet to be discovered.

      1,064 words · 143 views · 7 likes · 0 dislikes
    • The Fog
      Never go in the Everfree alone...
      1,377 words · 287 views · 10 likes · 2 dislikes
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    Have you ever taken the time to stop and look at the stars?

    To bask in the beauty of the night sky?

    This is a short tale of a filly that does, learning a new lesson in life along the way.

    First Published
    2nd Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    2nd Oct 2012

    Comments ( 5 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Short, REALLY sweet, and well written for being something so simple.  I was ready to nail it to the wall for the length but this is actually not bad.

    -Chessie

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 4d ago · · ·
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    A reminder that the night has a magic all its own.  Very nice.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Something tells me that the "voice" was Luna, am I right?

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Thank you all for the support. I always appreciate the feedback.

    The Voice was not Luna, but -something yet to be discovered. Perhaps it already has been discovered.

    The choice is yours to make. Each path leads somewhere else you know...

    -Pandela

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 15h ago · · ·
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    I like it... you need some commas and apostrophes, but other than that, you're good.

    I like it.

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