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For every action, there is consequence, as Sunset Shimmer soon found out on the day she was exiled from Equestria. Finding herself on a plane, haunted by a sinister presence and on a course beyond her control, everything that Sunset has ever known is about to change as she faces the inevitable conclusion to her life choice.
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When someone looks at how this story turned out, some would say this is a darker, mature version of Sunset Shimmer's descent from Equestria before finding herself in the human world. Where we see in some case a more symbolic yet descriptive process as to how Sunset Shimmer worked her way into the human world while everything she ever knew was gone. And to add more distress to her situation, we get that foreshadow of a demon and another creature who would remain a part of her prior to her start to adjusting in the human world and all the while they are both fighting for control over one body. A sort of conflict between 'Light and Dark' in a sense. For what it is, I'm satisfied with how this turned out overall. For everyone else, it's all a matter of interpretation and how they look at this story.
Didn't this story used to have more chapters?
10310030 Huh? This is the first time I'm posting this.
I think you meant 'bare.'
Great fic!
10310237 Sorry for the late reply. Thank you for pointing it out and I'm glad you enjoyed it
I'm a little puzzled with this one.
From all 10309907 said and some of the story, this places place soon after Sunset went to the human world and hasn't reformed. But from this pule the final lines of the story,
It takes place after she reformed. Did I just overlook something?
10429822
As confusing as this may be... There's a method to the madness of the story.
It's not really suppose to be a 'canon' interpretation of Sunset's banishment as it is more of what was possibly going on in Sunset's mind prior to her trip. You know how they say your life flashes when you die, in a way it's 'kind of' like that with Sunset in this case only instead there's more of a focus on two aspects of her personality fighting for some form of control in some degree.
The ending is meant to hint that what she doesn't realize is that her initial pursuit, that being power which was taken from her courtesy of Celestia (Partly) will eventually lead her to her greatest life changing discovery that will eventually turn her into the Sunset Shimmer we all know and love.
I truly hope that makes sense.
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I think I got it. The ending was like a future sight of what was to come for Sunset. That makes sense.
I think what partly threw me off was that the canon Sunset, from what I can see, never once hinted that she was struggling with the path she was taking, or at least, not at this level. So I take it that this was like a peek of the good deep in Sunset trying to put up a fight but lost, but was finally able to resurface after the big Rainbow attack at the end of EQG?
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Yep... That's the whole kit and caboodle (Or as some folks say).
On the outside, the Sunset Shimmer back then would've been smooth, cool, and confident... If not cocky enough to think she can get away with anything. But inside... It must be a 'real' nightmare.