Strange and dangerous happenings take place in and around Ponyville, starting with a fire in the Everfree Forest, and the return of an old enemy. But the usual team of problem solvers, the Mane 6, are no where to be found; they are on vacation, as per the orders of Celestia herself. In order to combat a new threat, a new team, headed by Princess Luna, must be found. But can there really be an Alternative Six?
A short but nice beginning. I am now liking and tracking you good sir! Here have a mustache on me!
Ohhhh, I can't wait for the next chapter!
A nicely written story with potential, but I would suggest mending these chapters together into one large chapter. For example, the last chapter and this one could have easily been combined, but it's up to you.
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Actually, I thought about this. Its probably a more book-appropriate route, but I dunno, I personally enjoy smaller chapters when reading, so I guess its a preference thing.
Hello! I wonder how I put the story here to be read ... I've done everything but the most important is that I could not put HISTORY! Someone help me before they see my story is a real discord! Spirit of Chaos! so yes!