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  • 64w, 1d
    I think I'm done

    With The Colours of Dusk now complete, I think I am finally gonna throw in the towel for fanfics for at least this year. With my final year of university looming as well as my wishes to work on a 'proper' piece of original fiction, I will have to make sacrifices, and unfortunately this comes into the firing line. If you are reading this and you've enjoyed what I've sneezed out over the last year or so, I can only thank you from the very bottom of my heart for deciding to spend your time reading what I have to offer, it seriously means the world to me.

    Thank you all.

    Until next time.

    X

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  • 66w, 4d
    Brief delay in updating while I tan myself up like nobody's business

    Regrettably, for perhaps some of you, I am bombing it down to London tomorrow to watch Doctor Who at the Royal Albert Hall, and to Italy at the end of next week for the week to chill at the bottom of the tasty Alps with some friends. As such, these activities demand a great deal of my time, so I shall be a lot slower on the updates for a week or two, and, indeed, have no Internet at all for a week. I will still be working on it, but I won't have access to a computer.

    Of course, this is me implying you really care that you'll have to wait a bit longer for cute pony snuggles, but just so you know where I've gone. :P

    Speak to y'all again when I'm a bronzed god of a man.

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  • 71w, 4d
    25,000

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  • 72w, 1d
    The Colours of Dusk

    Finally!

    I've finally got the first few chapters up!

    If you like Rule 63 and/or TwiDash, then I would give it a look, but I would say that, since I wrote it.

    I would like to clarify that it is not related to Chasing Rainbows, but I imagine that if you liked that, you'll like this.

    Right, back to writing it.

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  • 73w, 14h
    Based Faust

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Rainbow Blitz falls for the quiet and bookish Dusk Shine, but nothing goes as planned for the poor pegasus, and he becomes a victim of intolerance and prejudice, with betrayal lurking around every corner. In the meantime, Dusk doesn't know what he should do, this is something he has to work out by himself.

First Published
28th Aug 2012
Last Modified
10th Sep 2012
#1 · 112w, 1d ago · · · Reshelving Day ·

Dusk is reacting quite realistically to this.

Lets see where this goes.

Gonna have to note that the intro was cliched - you can drop the weather report and the "this is how my life was turned upside down", just start with Blitz flying through the air.

#2 · 112w, 1d ago · · · Reshelving Day ·

I Would Love To - Steve Vai

#3 · 112w, 1d ago · · · Reshelving Day ·

A very interesting start, faved to see where you go with this :twilightsmile:

#4 · 112w, 1d ago · · · Reshelving Day ·

Is that Rainbow Blitz with a Lightning bolt scar on his forehead?

Is that... HARRY POTTER?

zel
#5 · 112w, 1d ago · · · Reshelving Day ·

>rule 63

As much as I like MM romance, I simply have no power to deal with this genderbending bullshit in the morning.

Srsly, blitz has to have the worst design in mlp famdom history, maybe except alicorn OCs.

#6 · 112w, 1d ago · · · Reshelving Day ·

Hnng!!! My heart!!! :pinkiesad2:

#7 · 112w, 1d ago · · · Reshelving Day ·

Hm. Well, Blitz sure a jerk and idiot here. Even straight confessions not like "I love you, I love you too, yay sex". When your crush not even gay\bi himself, what you expected, honestly? Dusk need time to undestand his feelings, to get why, when and how. It's not like he has obligation to return Blitz's feelings.

Rainbow just has to deal with it and stop thinking all about himself. What happened to "make you happy"?  He sure acted oppositely.

#8 · 112w, 1d ago · · · Reshelving Day ·

>>1173223 It's his eyebrow, dingus.

#9 · 112w, 1d ago · · · Reshelving Day ·

You know, normally I find M/M stories odd or uninteresting, and yet I'm perfectly fine with F/M and F/F, with TwiDash being my favourite. So, having decided to try and over come that hypocrisy I decided to read this after finding it. So far I have not been disappointed. Lets see how well this goes :twilightblush:

UNCHARTED WATERS AHOY!

#10 · 112w, 1d ago · · · Reshelving Day ·

>>1173618

Looks more like Harry Potter's scar. Just sayin'.

#11 · 112w, 1d ago · · · Reshelving Day ·

>>1173521

It's what happens, believe me, I've been there a number of times, in both Dusk's and Blitz's shoes.

#12 · 112w, 1d ago · · · Reshelving Day ·

>>1173714

Yeah) I'll wait what happens next. Interesting story. Not your usual shipping where you KNOW they'll be together at the end.

#13 · 112w, 22h ago · · · Reshelving Day ·

>>1173656

Ah cool. I hope you enjoy the rest of it! :twilightsmile:

#14 · 112w, 17h ago · · · Reshelving Day ·

i can compleatly relate to blitz:fluttercry:

#15 · 112w, 17h ago · · · Reshelving Day ·

>>1175325

That was the aim, I hope I caused feels. I can relate too, since it's based off personal experience. :fluttercry:

#16 · 112w, 17h ago · · · Reshelving Day ·

your the best man:twilightsmile:

#17 · 112w, 11h ago · · · Reshelving Day ·

:fluttercry: My heart.......

#18 · 111w, 6d ago · · · I Can't Help Who I Am ·

If anyone is wondering why this is all probably shit, it's based on my own experiences over the last few years and it's a really good outlet for me to get it off my chest and get it down in writing. If you enjoy it as well, I just consider that a pleasant bonus. :twilightsmile:

#19 · 111w, 6d ago · · · I Can't Help Who I Am ·

I'm sorry to hear that you went through these kind of things. I don't get why people make such a big problem about it.

Anyway, great chapter. Very emotional.

#20 · 111w, 6d ago · · · I Can't Help Who I Am ·

>>1181308

I have gone through this as well. Loving this, but please. PUMP OUT MORE CHAPTERS AND FAST! I NEED MOAR! :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

#21 · 111w, 6d ago · · · I Can't Help Who I Am ·

>>1182606

I was gonna make an Applejack type speech about how quality takes time, then I remembered I randomly sneeze out like 1,500 words a day, do minor revisions on bits I don't like then hope for the best! :twilightsheepish:

'S'how I roll I guess. :pinkiecrazy:

Expect a new chapter soon, Friday at the latest. :twilightsmile:

#22 · 111w, 6d ago · · · I Can't Help Who I Am ·

>>1182635

Alright, speaking of Applejack...I have gone through this as well with country people. I live in Kentucky and they would do this kinda shit, but I was like, "NOPE! I DUN CARE!" It still annoyed me though. I have lived in 7 states and this is the only one that acts like this towards me. Go figure fucking bible thumpers.

#23 · 111w, 6d ago · · · I Can't Help Who I Am ·

>>1182672

It's always upsetting to hear, I am sorry you went through that. Here in Britain, it's just the older people, about 40+, them and the religious types...

I wanted to get the theme of religion in, but Equestria doesn't have religion, so instead I tried to work out a historical basis for the hate that AJ spews out, it was difficult, but I did it in the end. All shall be revealed soon!

#24 · 111w, 6d ago · · · I Can't Help Who I Am ·

>>1182698Oh thank you that you aren't putting religion in this. I know that sounds like a typical atheist thing to say but I can't stand anything to do with religion.

#25 · 111w, 6d ago · · · I Can't Help Who I Am ·

>>1182713

Nah, it's cool. I don't blame ya, I've only suffered from the hands of religion for the simple virtue of being true to myself.

#26 · 111w, 6d ago · · · I Can't Help Who I Am ·

>>1182733

Everyday someone tries to start shit with me about how I am an idiot for not believing in god. Smh, it really gets under my skin. :twilightangry2:

#27 · 111w, 6d ago · · · I Can't Help Who I Am ·

Applejack, you BASTARD.

#28 · 111w, 6d ago · 1 · · I Can't Help Who I Am ·

As I quote from Jon Spiro: Isn't Artemis a girl's name?

Then again, Artemis Fowl is awesome, but I doubt that a R63'd Luna would be much of a "hunter".

#29 · 111w, 6d ago · · · I Can't Help Who I Am ·

>>1182742

I know the feeling of annoying religious types, my sister is some kinda born again christian or something and I'm agnostic athiest, so me and her are ALWAYS getting into arguments over who's wrong and who's right, even though I expressly told her that I don't really care.

>>1182635

So far so good, still uncharted waters for me, but I like how it's based off real events <I don't like that the events actually HAPPENED, but when a story is based off of them it makes it seem more, I don't know, real I guess> just one question though, who's Macareina?

#30 · 111w, 6d ago · · · I Can't Help Who I Am ·

>>1185803

Yeah, I tried to make this as realistic as possible, well, as realistic as talking ponies can get.

My poor attempt at feminising Big Macintosh's name. :twilightsheepish:

#31 · 111w, 6d ago · · · I Can't Help Who I Am ·

>>1185889

Big Mac eh? I thought it was Caramel. I guess because when I first read it it made me think of the song Macarena, which I always associated with maracas for whatever reason, a bulb on the end of a stick, kinda like how a Caramel Apple is a bulb on the end of a stick.... No one ever said my mind works normally, I don't even know how it works :rainbowlaugh: HURRAY rambling! :twilightblush:

#32 · 111w, 4d ago · · · Out of the Frying Pan ·

I fucking love you.

zel
#33 · 111w, 4d ago · · · Out of the Frying Pan ·

AAAW YEAH:rainbowlaugh:

Although I do not really think that original twi would go to celestia for help with her sexuality.:trollestia:

Still, awesome story when you disregard the fact that blitz is ugly.:moustache:

#34 · 111w, 4d ago · · · Out of the Frying Pan ·

>>1194579

Still, awesome story when you disregard the fact that blitz is ugly.:moustache:

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder

#35 · 111w, 4d ago · · · Out of the Frying Pan ·

Oh Applejack. :ajbemused:

#36 · 111w, 4d ago · · · Out of the Frying Pan ·

Oh my... Well now, that was, um... yeah I got nothing :twilightoops:

Good chapter though! Poor Blitz, and AJ is really making himself out to be an ass :ajbemused:

#37 · 111w, 4d ago · · · Reshelving Day ·

This is a great idea for a story. Don't know how I've never seen other similar stories. Well, anyway, I still have more of this to read, so...

#38 · 111w, 4d ago · · · Out of the Frying Pan ·

This is an awesome story. Great characters, realistic reactions (I think... I believe so) and a new perspective on the whole thing.

Thank you for this.

#39 · 111w, 4d ago · · · Out of the Frying Pan ·

Solaris needs to go burn the shit out of AJ with sunfire.

#40 · 111w, 4d ago · · · Out of the Frying Pan ·

God, I just want to kick AJ in the face and give Blitz a huge hug.

#41 · 111w, 3d ago · · · Out of the Frying Pan ·

AJ is acting pretty OOC. Even if R63-ed AJ was pissed that a friend of his was gay, he wouldn't send ponies to beat the stuffing out of RB. But then again, they were drunk. Then again, AJ wasn't drunk before. Then again, AJ might be acting homophobic because he is gay. Then again...

#42 · 111w, 3d ago · · 1 · Out of the Frying Pan ·

>>1198600

There needed to be an antagonist, and I wasn't gonna make an OC, so I needed a canon character. Since most characters are lovely and kind, there was gonna be some OOCness somewhere, I chose AJ because he/she seems the most likely of the Mane Six (to me) to be homophobic.

And small point, AJ never once directly told them to beat Blitz up, in fact he stopped them, albeit grudgingly.

And for the record, no, AJ ain't gay in this one.

#43 · 111w, 3d ago · · · Out of the Frying Pan ·

>>1198649

Darn it.

That would have been too expected, eh?

#44 · 111w, 2d ago · · · Out of the Frying Pan ·

So I added this to the LGBT Group. Because its awesome.:rainbowkiss:

This needs to update like yesterday.:pinkiecrazy:

#45 · 111w, 2d ago · · · Out of the Frying Pan ·

:rainbowderp: wow, this is good, faved and a thumbs up to you. AJ is a bit frustrating (I've known people like that), I can't wait to see where you take this; so far so good :twilightsmile:

#46 · 111w, 2d ago · · · Reshelving Day ·

Well, I can't say I quite relate to this, seeing as how I'm not sexually inclined the way Blitz is. But he still gets all my feels. This may not have been straight up rejection, but it still hurts no matter what gender/sexuality.

ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER! :rainbowdetermined2:

#47 · 111w, 2d ago · 3 · · I Can't Help Who I Am ·

Applejack... you... fucking... asshole...

I may not be gay, but behavior like that completely and utterly disgusts me. I'm sorry to hear that you had to experience this type of discrimination.

Also, good work with your fic. I've read only a few M/M fics and yours is the best one yet. :twilightsmile:

#48 · 111w, 2d ago · · 1 · Out of the Frying Pan ·

Applejack needs to get raped once a day, everyday, by a stallion in pony hell. Oh, the cruel, cruel irony. So delicious.

Another awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

#49 · 111w, 2d ago · · · Out of the Frying Pan ·

Poor Blitzy! I can't fault Dusk for his reaction - and there's a big difference between "I need to be alone" and "Get away from me" - but it hit Blitz pretty hard. That guy needs all the hugs. I'm a bit worried at how coldly vicious Applejack and his friends are being, and at the more widespread homophobia in Equestria, but I do understand the need for an antagonist. I'm sure everypony will come to their senses and write to Prince Solaris about this important lesson in friendship.

Oh, and ten bits says that Dusk had a crush on his foalsitter when he was younger. :twilightblush:

#50 · 111w, 1d ago · · · His Only Friend ·

Now I am working towards the ending as I speak, the last chapter will be very long, so be patient, and you shall has it before the week is out.

Peace. :heart:

EDIT: Rekorderlig is the tastiest cider.

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