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Commissar Rarity


You call this romance, Charlotte?

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A cutie mark appears on a pony's flank when he or she finds that certain something that makes them different from every other pony.

But you knew that already, didn't you?

But what you didn't know, perhaps, is that a common past time is guessing what a pony's cutie mark stands for. This is a story about one such game.


Written for a creative challenge and a contest on Reddit.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 5 )

Cute.:twilightsmile: Wait.. Inky? As in, Inky Pie?

1128388 No, an OC.
If it was Inkie Pie I wouldn't have used male pronouns.

Hmmm, looks good so far, continue on! :twilightsmile:

Short and sweet. A nicely written exchange between the characters. You effectively created their personalities without outright telling the reader. Bravo!:moustache:

I adore the type of stories that seem like they could actually be made into an episode- this one was no exception. Great work. :twilightsmile:

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