Inspired by the song When You Were Young by The Killers.

Ahh, the feels...

About the 2nd story to do that to me today.

Will stay a One-Shot?

I loved all of this, any chance of a possible sequel?

Celestia returning once again, with another memory?

When I saw the notification "When You Were Young" I thought "Oh No."

Then I saw it was written by Art Inspired, and everything became well again.

Good job, and keep up the fantastic work.

>>11271841127184>>11271871127187 possibly... but i'd need alot of requests in the comments for it to continue, otherwise, no.

>>11272331127233will do!

Very nice short story.

May use this idea of Discord/Celestia romance sometime

>>11272801127280sure. just provide a link to this story.

>>11272861127286

actually I may just incorperate this into my stories.

If I ever get around to writing them

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Also... I love this song.

>>11273021127302 well... alright, just as long as you provide a link within the story.

>>11273101127310who doesn't?

>>11273141127314 Celestia. Brings back too much pain.

STOP MAKING ME FEEL STUFF!!!

This was very touching, very cute, and rather sad

Good Job

The beginning was kinda kitschy, but I think that's just what a borred Discord would do time to time in eternal darkness.

And, you know, power corrupts. Absolute power.. is a whole lot of fun.

I totally agree with Discords point here. Endless darkness is still better than.. this.

Very Nice I like

I can't handle these feels...

>>11273671127367>>11277711127771 don't be mad if you start to feel sad!

>>11278211127821

Why do i think thats perfect for a troll to say while trolling people.

>>11278681127868 trolololololololo

A sequel? Where Celestia makes Discord a better soul? And they will live happy again, without discord being imprisoned? That would be really good, like an alternate ending for this.

Or you just make another chapter, where Celestia returns to him and tries to make him better. But Discord is to stubborn and remain angry at the princess. And he will live his remaining life in sorrow.

Or just live this story as it is and the readers will fantasies about a sequel.

Anyway, good story! Liked and faved.

>>11278841127884 All my ideas... Stripped and ruined before I could consider even thinking them up!

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>>11278921127892 hehhe...

>>11279051127905well... so far no dislikes... i may need to rethink posting another chapter, but no revelations till you read it... (still considering.)

>>11279111127911 Alright take your time.

>>11279111127911

Haters wont even bother with downvoting your story?  

>>11279461127946 what the heck

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am i watching?

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>>11282001128200 There we go.

>>11278711127871

Dont tell me you thought i meant something else when i mentioned "feeling"

My reaction after I read this masterpiece

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>>11290081129008 You're just... too kind!

>>11294091129409

And YOU'RE just too good!

What, art inspired not writing clopfics? Stop watchin! Jk, but seriously it's nice to see an author change their writing style and try out new ways to write stories instead of just clop, clop, and more clop.

>>11296791129679 clop is fun, but there comes a time when the author becomes truely inspired.

>>11300861130086

I really liked this one... Here have this

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That was good art inspired. loved it. Very good. Hope that the fic you and I were working on turns out as good as this.

>>11315461131546 as do I!

This story is good and shall do all in my power to make sure this story continues (except writing it lol)!

>>11272741127274 Okay, CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE! Please

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>>11321121132112>>11321171132117 *reads your demanding request for another chapter*...

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Why me??? why Celestia... why?!

>>11321671132167 Hahahahaha

>>11321781132178(sigh)... well... for the lovable fans... because i love to see you smile!

>>11321671132167 Because you have talent for this and it would be a sin and a insult to leave it be. None of us are forcing you. We just want to see it go further.

>>11325501132550 as i said, anything for the fans. the update time is unverifiable.

i don't have time today to read this

i'll read it tomorrow and complain on the feels like everyone else

and then demand another chapter

>>11325631132563 Take your time and pace yourself cause you never know  how big of a hit it just might be.

>>11326391132639 there's alot of competition. so far... i'm still considered mediocre, at best. and i accept this as an author... still, i wouldn't mind seeing this featured. its my first "rated everyone" fic that's been successful! (so far...)

>>11326721132672 All things come in time, nobody ever starts as the best they worked their way up with practice. From what I have read you have a solid foundation to work with. I will look forward to seeing where you go and I think everyone here agrees you will do fine. Just remember one of the most important things about stories: have fun with it and that it is your story you write it how you want it.

P.s. Best of luck getting on the box.

>>11327581132758 thanks... your awesome!

>>11327791132779 I'm glad I could help. If ever need advice or a prereader feel free to send me a pm.

sorry. be patient.

please be patient...

i had feels with this. i just finished it.

it reminds me of those friends we all have that we end up losing because of how they grow away from us.

i need a new chapter.

pwease?

OKAY let me explain... i'm having this chapter edited... but i got too excited and published it, then he tells me he's almost done, to i unpublish... THEN i find out it got featured... so i publish again... I"M SORRY!!!

going to clime this mountain

Climb.

>>11390641139064 thanks. it's fixed... like i said... it's being edited. nervous about ponies repoting me for my publication messup!

Wow. Such emotional feeling in such a short chapter. You have my respect. Do continue. I'd like to see what else can be told from this.

>>11390761139076

And the song counties to play in my head. Whats the score? Take a line from the song and work it into the story?

>>11391001139100it just... felt like the right thing to do... while mixing it up a bit.

You're doing a great job of structuring the story, but you're being way too trigger happy with your thesaurus. A lot of the big words you've included are just improperly used, while in other cases it would be far better to use a simpler word. It's decent as is, but it could be a great story if you tightened up the word choice.

well this is getting interesting keep it up this story is really good

okay! it's been edited! sorry for the mess ups!

Congrats on getting this story feautured for more than 15 seconds, I still remember when the first unicorn got featured for 15 seconds... Anyways, I'm glad you made this story longer instead of a one-shot story, fav'd and tracked!

>>11391941139194 thanks! i know, can't believe it's going so swimmingly!

Confound it!

Sure its a good chapter and all but if you were to ask me, it just should have been a One Shot...

Damn it....STEVE!

>>11392181139218 i do it for my adoring fans. they're so nice!

>>11392241139224

No!

I know who put you up to it...

>>11392351139235

please see this comment.>>11279551127955

This story is not exactly my favorite cup of tea, but a cup of tea it remains. I shall track this.

>>11392451139245

I'll respond to that when I'm done.

Now if you don't mind I got humies to kill.

But ohhh trust me, I'll fix you good like!

hey, quick question

celestia imprisoned nightmare moon then twilight w/ fiends removed her evil powers

so why can't they do that with discord?

do they hate discord?

does anyone diverse to be trapped, sitting, alone, so quiet.... everyone passes by yet no one sees you.... it's not fair!

not even sitting really, he has to stand for eternity. let's play empathy, now you go hide and i'll trap you in stone forever, just to see how it feels

>>11392831139283... i dont make the show, i just write fan fiction. but you have a point.

>>11392791139279 watch it bub! this isn't a clopfic ya know!

>>11393251139325

Gotta say, I have never been called "bub" before .

I spy with my little eye... a Lauren Faust reference!

I would like to see a continuation of this.

aaaaaaaaaaaaaand... first dislike...

>>11279461127946

You are a odd man....

>>11393491139349 uh, nope! no lauren faust here...

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Sure...

>>11394231139423 what's with the smile?

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>>11391241139124 my diction is very big, and there's no changing that. but i'll take your advice and try to keep it a bit more gently with the feel of things.

More please?

A story inspired by my favorite song of all time? This is going in my read later list.

No dislikes...well, let me say I won't be the first, because this has potential. I was really happy this just wasn't a one-shot, though the first chapter was still nice. I am a huge DiscordxCelestia fan (though whether it be friendship or more, I don't care), so of course I was interested. The bit with the flower was sweet and cute. I wonder when things will turn sour and ugly, because, of course, we wouldn't have the first chapter if nothing bad happened. So keep going; you've got my attention.

It's… so… adorable… can't hold it… in…

*inhales*

D'AAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWW DISCORD GAVE TIA A FLOWER AND SHE KEPT IT FOR THOUSANDS OF YEARS D'AAAAAAWWWWW SO BUCKING CUTE!!!

*ahem* yes… that is all.

>>11263431126343

I KNEW IT. I loves me that song.

>>11396311139631louder!

>>11396561139656

*inhales even deeper*

d'aww

>>11397171139717

So the story continues?

*put on sunglasses*

BUCK YAAAYYY!

>>11395111139511 See, that's exactly what I'm talking about: there's no such thing as a big diction. Diction refers to either one's word choice or their distinctive word choices. You can't claim to have a large vocabulary if you're not using have your seven-dollar words correctly.