I did a literal spit take when I saw your description. A Psych crossover? Heck yeah!

Ok now that I actually read the story, I must say PLEASE CONTINUE! You are spot on with everything so far and I can't wait to read more!

LOVE PSYCH, LOVE FIM. YOU SIR, ARE A GENIUS.

Love the title reference. A little disappointed that Shawn didn't turn into a pony but that's alright I guess.

It's about time someone made a PSYCH and MLP:FIM crossover!

For me, I'm happy he didn't turn into pony for that has been done many times before.

Anyways, the jokes in this made me laugh, even the demon donkey line and what Rarity said.

Pardon my language, but that was fucking hilarious!  You have Shawns personality/snark down pat.  "Demon Donkey" definitely sounds like something he'd say.

Thanks for all the positivity, everyone! I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far! I'm also happy to note that the newest episode of psych struck a chord of inspiration in me, so chapter two will (hopefully) be finished and posted by Sunday or Monday night.

Beyond that, I'm hoping to keep a schedule of at least one 5k word+ chapter a week.

As a side note, I do check the comments often and welcome any and all constructive criticisms, questions,  and outright flattery (it will get you everywhere).

New chapter! Let me know what you guys think!

Also, I apologize for not posting it sooner... Editing the monstrosity took far longer than I thought it would. You can all expect a new chapter by sometime early next week. I promise the next one will be far more action-packed.

Thanks for reading!

I cannot wait for more! Great job!

OH MY GOD.

USA... Make this happen...

Another good chapter.

I never stated this in my last comment but I never even heard of this series till i saw your story. I have seeen it now and enjoy it.

>>7842978429

You have no idea how happy it makes me to hear that. I'm glad you're enjoying the show. =)

I am loving this story. You seem to have captured Shawn's personality and his eccentricities perfectly. I also liked how you were able to show his awareness without explicitly stating it.

Please keep writing I must know where this goes.

If anyone knows of or has something that would make for good cover art for this story, please do let me know. I'd really like to get an image attached to this thing, so all ideas are welcome.

fantastic

Hmm... over five thousand words you say?  In fandoms of significantly larger size, chapters that are five thousand words in length is one of the criterion I use to judge whether a story is even worth my time when compared to the many others that meet that criteria.  It's very nice to see someone in the MLP fandom taking a shot at it.

I was a bit worried for a bit that Shawn didn't seem to be acting like himself, but I think I can safely say that was due to him being shell shocked from his new situation. Also, is Twilight going to be Shawn's new temporary Gus? Please say yes.

Wow, you write a really authentic Shawn Spencer.  I can't find anything good in my archives that would make a decent cover image for this, but I wish you luck with your quest for a cover image.

Loving the story, and I'm definitely putting it on Alert.  

>>8122981229

I agree completely with the sentiment, which is why I made 5k my goal. But, of course, longer chapters often mean slower updates. It took me about 3 days to write and fully edit 6k, so I figure a chapter a week gives me some leeway to work with without letting the story go stale.

Also, thanks! Shawn is one of my favorite characters, personality-wise, in any medium... I'm glad I was able to capture him somewhat.

>>8124581245

Shellshock...ness... is a common side effect of waking up in a cartoon.

Also, Shawn will always need a Gus.

Here some questions I want to ask about your story.

Q1.Are some of chapters going be murder cases?

Q2.Is Shawn still going to fake being psychic even though Twilight and the gang know the truth?

Q3.Is Gus and Lassiter going to appear in EQUESTRIA? I would like to see how they would react in that world.

Q4.At some point of the story is Twilight and the gang going to have to travel to Shawn world?

Q5.Is Shawn going to give Twilight and the gang silly nicknames?

Q6.Is some of chapter going to begin with flashback like the show PSYCH?

Q7.Are these characters going to make a appearance in the story? :

Princess Luna

The Cutie Mark Crusaders

Big Mac

Braeburn

Zecora

Cheerilee

The Mayor

Hoity Toity

Sapphire Shore

Trixie

Gilda

Discord

Soarin from The Wonderbolts

Prince Blueblood

Derpy Hooves

Dj Pon3

Lyra Heartstrings

Fleur de Lis from the episode Sweet and Elite from MLP:FIM

>>8394383943

Q1) Considering the title of the story, I think it's safe to say there will be some criminal activity and that Shawn will be assisting. Anything more than that would be spoilers.

Q2-7) Read and find out!

I think i can help find a cover image for your story.

Here a guy some time do request and commissions you can request him to make a cover for your story

link here Not Safe for Work

and a link here

I hope it helps.

Yesterday I had the passing thought, "You know what would be an awesome crossover? Psych and MLP!" and lo and behold, when I searched your fic came up.  So far, this is perfect!  You really have the mood and humor of Psych down pat.  I laughed at the debutante mix-up and the flashback of them being forbidden to sneak into the facility immediately followed by them doing just that.  I can't wait to read more of this!

The cell phone ringtone was hilarious, as was Shawn's panic about the Demon Donkeys.  He's perfectly in-character, even to the point of worrying about Gus.  I'm anxious about Shawn and Pinkie Pie teaming up, because obviously they will be BFFs and Ponyville will be doomed to crazy shenanigans.

This is great!  Keep it up!

Yakshemash!

I apologize to anyone who might stop by expecting a new chapter. I actually write the story within the fimfiction editor and a cat related incident caused me to accidentally hit the publish button. I'd also like to apologize for not sticking to my promised schedule. In my defense: Christmas involved about 20 hours of cumulative driving this time around. Chapter 3 (as of this comment) stands at 4500 words (out of a planned 6k or so) and I expect to have it finished, edited, and posted by tomorrow night if not sooner.

Syntax is awful.

Actions and dialogue are associated with the wrong characters frequently and is a giant distraction.

Delightful story.

>>107527107527

Yeah, I realize I'm in sore need of a pre-reader... kind of hard to tell how someone else will interpret the associations, as they are firmly set in my own head. The syntax problem is a new one, though. Any particular examples? Or is it just the whole thing? If you have the time to point me in the right direction, I'd really appreciate it... I'm trying to fix this story up as much as I can.

In either case, thanks for the constructive criticism! And I'm glad you at least enjoyed the story itself.

New chapter! Not a false alarm this time! Enjoy, rate, and review!

As a side note... Still looking for cover art, here, if anyone has any good images.

I'm enjoying your fic so far, and Twilight should consider herself lucky Shawn may be activly insulting and ill behaved things could be far worse. She could be dealing with Monk. Great mind that he is Monk would not take to being in Equestria anywhere NEAR as well as Shawn is.

Oh boy, Twilight never say that again! lol

Anyways, great job, i'm already on season 3 of the series.

Another awesome chapter! I giggled a little at the pineapple and then totally lost it during the Puff the Magic Dragon converstation. Sounds like Shawn is looking pretty snazzy, I can't wait to see what happens when he meets the princesses.

>>107554107554

Unfortunately, the syntax problems are consistent. It's mostly the incorrect use of quotation marks.

>>109520109520

Hmmm... I hadn't noticed, but it looks like you're right. I was planning on slowly re-editing the chapters over the next couple of weeks, so I'll hopefully be able to catch and fix most of the errors now that I know where to look. In the meantime, I don't suppose you'd know anyone who'd be up for pre-reading chapters for me, do you?

In either case, thanks for taking the time to point it out to me. I can't fix problems if no one tells me they're there.

Oh man I just got the whole pineapple refrence cant belive it took me so long.

When I first saw this fic, I thought, "A Psych crossover? REALLY? How does THAT work?" And even though it's outlandish, it works really well. I have to say it just seemed so weird to READ Shawn's actions and inner thoughts as opposed to seeing him on TV. But by the time I got to Chapter 3 with Shawn's trademark smarmy attitude toward authority and Twilight essentially becoming his Gus, this fic REALLY hit it's stride. Love the detail you've added with the random Pineapple.

Will he be giving Tiwlight nicknames or will he do that with the rest of the main 6 too?

>>111276111276

Well, that depends. He doesn't always nickname people in the show. But he always has something ready for when the situation calls for it. I do feel comfortable confirming that I'm trying to recreate him and Gus's dynamic between him and Twilight. Of course, Twilight is not Gus, so it won't be quite the same. Actually, I'll just tell you what I tell everyone... Read on and find out!

>>109244109244

Mwahaha, I'm excited about this next chapter, actually. Celestia and Luna are completely different personalities from anything he's run into before. It's been fun, though difficult, to plan their interactions.

>>109062109062

The fact that this story turned you on to the show, rather than the other way around, is probably the best compliment I've gotten so far.

>>109061109061

I gotta watch Monk. I hear it's good, but I never get around to it. And I figure I'm going to need a new crossover to work on after this one is eventually finished. Maybe I'll put it to a vote... actually, that might be fun: letting readers decide which crossover I should do next. A thought for the future.

Thanks again for reading, everyone! Look for Chapter 4 later next week!

>>108925108925

I think i can help find a cover image for your story.

Here a guy some time do request and commissions you can ask him to do a request to make a cover for your story.

link here Not Safe for Work

and a link here

I hope it helps.

>>115303115303

Thanks for the heads up. I put in a request... now comes the waiting game.

In the meantime, anyone else who knows-of/finds/has/draws/conjures an appropriate cover image, please come forward!

You got me to watch Pysch on DVD just to get the references, good job on geting people interested in other shows

Great, need moar, also should explore meat eating habits.( akward dialogue is best dialogue)

Aaaaaand chapter 4! This one was exceptionally fun to write.

As always: Enjoy, rate, and review!

I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! Keep up the good work!

You have no right to make me laugh so much at a silly crossover story!

I'm important.  I have an image to maintain.  How can I do that if I wind up chuckling to myself like some kind of idiot?

So, in the future, place a warning message at the beginning, so folks will realize that involuntary guffaws or strange faces will be forthcoming if they choose to continue in the reading.

It seemes as if death follows the man everywhere he went i guess.

Anyway, great chapter. His meeting with Princess Celestia and Luna was handled well.

Heh, Twilight is going to absolutely flip her lid when she learns that Shawn hit Celestia with a rock.

This is great. You are the best person to have decided to make a crossover between psych and my little pony.

This just gets better and better each chapter

I love this!

It's really great!

A good fanfic!

^_^

^_^

*Logs on to check view count.

GREAT GOOGLY MOOGLY! I could have sworn I only had 2k-ish views yesterday. You guys are awesome.

>>126026126026 & >>126722126722 & >>126753126753 & >>127385127385

Thanks!

>>126153126153

By reading this story you agree to waive all rights to not cackle madly like an idiot. Side effects include: Loud guffaws, chortles, chuckles, giggles, snorts, smirks, and spontaneous combustion.

There, fixed it!

>>126617126617

Shhhhhh! Sparky might hear you.

>>127171127171

That picture is awesome. And you're awesome for posting it.

fantastic

>>125955125955

I'm a really big fan of psych so to me this one of the best fic I have read so far.

I'm already seeing  how it's not suicide. For example the shattered glass shows somepony pushed the victim through the window. If the victim commited suicide he would have opened the window first.

I'm curious about the other clues shawns going to find that's going to show it's not suicide but murder.

>>130642130642

Hehe, good on you that you spotted it.

One of the things I want to do in this story is that almost everything Shawn notices and later brings up will be mentioned at some point earlier. So, if you paid close attention to the description, you'll see all the same clues he does (with the occasional exception... gotta keep the smarty pants on their toes).

This is great.  I was laughing throughout, but especially at "Shawn was sitting perfectly still, under the assumption that pony goddesses worked somewhat like T. rex".  Everyone's personality is intact.  I like that you've made Aegis the pony version of Lassie.

The characters are so well done, I couldn't stop laughing. It's like I'm really watching Psych, except I'm reading it and it has technicolored magical ponies.

Oh wow, I wonder how the ponies will react when they learn that he solves murders weekly.

I'm not the biggest fan of Psyche. I nalways found Shawn to be a liitle more grating than charming. But this is SUCH a great story. I really like the Captain. I get the feeling he's going to give a lot of laughs. I just hope he turns out to be a bro and not a douche. But either way, LOVE this! Tracked like a mo-fo!  

I can't even find words to begin to describe the hi-larity of this. I mean...just...

NEW WORD TIME!

HA-MOUNGOUS!

How is this NOT on EqD yet? It's just so...

This is one of the best fics I have ever read. I can't wait for the next chapter!

>>131123131123

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Haha, well now... it looks like I'm not dead after all! I promise I was going to release this last chapter on time, but then I took a Skyrim to the... life... God, I hate myself for that.

As a sort of pseudo-apology, this latest chapter is a smidge longer than the other ones. I... actually wrote most of it today, so I'm sure I'll be going back and reediting some stuff tomorrow.

Right, anyway. Sorry for the delay! Thank you, everyone, for your patience! And, as always: enjoy, rate, and review!

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please?

>>166584166584

We all did don't worry about it and, Thank you for another great chapter.

lol. xD

My god that was hilarious.

nice job on a psych crossover to.

PANCAKES!!!

Good work.  Spencer still comes across clearly and its always fun to see him show off on occasion.  I liked the aspects of pony psychology set forth in the narrative.

The opening was a bit confusing.  It made me think I might have started reading the wrong chapter at first.  That said, it is dramatic.  If I had been reading directly from the previous chapter, having some kind of timestamp like 'Day 3: Merchant's Quarter - 2 AM, Canterlot' might have helped?  Not really sure.

Enjoying the story, hope to hear more from you soon.

>>168518168518

That's a good point. I worried that it might be confusing, but it never occurred to me to throw a time-stamp in there at the beginning. It'll work well enough until (or if) I think of a more elegant solution.

Thanks for the tip!

Ah, I let three of these things pile up before I got around to reading this story again.  Wound up going over most of Chapter 2 again because I'd forgotten parts of it.

This is really good.  I find myself so weary of crossovers written by people with OCs who are vaguely associated with the settings they've come from.  I like reading about the actual canon characters thrown into MLP situations with the Mane Six.  And I've gotta say, you write a really nice Shawn Spencer.  I've had a weird bit of luck with that in that I've never read a fic featuring Shawn that didn't have him written very well.  I haven't particularly sought it out, but there you go.

This is a perfect cross over

Reading this fanfiction actually is what made me start watching Psych.  Now I'm halfway through the second season, and I have to say, it's become my second favorite TV show (second to MLP).  HOWEVER, I still say your version of Shawn is actually more entertaining then the show's.  Or maybe he just goes well with ponies.

Also, I shall never forget S1E8, where Shawn actually critiques an artwork by saying "It looks nothing like My Little Pony."  Shawn is brony.  

I am tracking/watching/faving/rating-five-stars the hell out of this!  

...This...is one...of the best...no...the best. Crossover Fan Fictions I ever. Period. Read.

You just...capture his...Shawn...ness...so well...god I want to cry. You...you sir...you get a muffin.

Great ending and im tracking/watching/faving/rating-five-stars

I wish the chapters would get out sooner though

Image: http://www.myfacewhen.net/uploads/282-mother-of-god.jpg

This is great.

soo good

You made my day with this chapter.

Welcome back faithful readers! This is your capt-

Wh-... How the hay did you guys get comments up before me!? What is this, I don't even...

Okay, right! So.... Enjoy, rate, and review, everyone! Next chapter will be action-packed and hopefully not horribly late!

Was the title a refrence to Slum dog millionare?

>>200598200598

I like to make references in all my chapter titles. As you can probably tell by now, some are less obscure than others.

I love the references even the one Shawn was singing.

SHIT JUST GOT REAL

amazing chabter btw

Horseapples indeed Cap'n...horseapples indeed.

I like the song Shawn broke into, took me two lines but I picked it up.

Why, why the prince of bel air....

Other then that great story.....

Just had a chance to fully read it... BRILLIANT!

>>202246202246

It had to be done. Pinkie's not the only one who can break out into song, dammit!

Although, perhaps Shawn could learn to better choose his moments... whoopsie?

fantastic

HORSEAPPLES! XD

Another brilliant chapter!

DUN DUN DUUUUN.

That's all I have to say, really.

I have to ask. Are you SURE you aren't secretly the writer for Psych?  I mean, Spencer is just... spot-on here and the story itself sounds like something I'd see in the actual show.

Absolutely the greatest Fresh Prince reference of all time.

WE MUST FIND ALL THE PIECES OF CORRODING EVIDENCE!

>>7201772017 not the only one bro

When I saw this, I took a shit out of my dick.

>>257314257314

That sounds exceedingly... unpleasant. You should probably get that looked at.

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*sob* Why is it so good!?

I've read this story so many times. It never gets old.

DAMN IMPRESSIVE! You have a good story on your hands my friend. And if i may say so you do a spot on charaterization of Sean. Good job!