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    Everyone wonders what Scootaloo's story is. Apparently, everypony in Ponyville has their own answer
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  • T Faith and Doubt

    After everyone fails to heed to her warnings about Cadence, Twilight gives in to her darker thoughts
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  • E The Doctor Of Oz

    Twilight and Spike accidently end up in Oz and must defeat the Wicked Witch with the help of some familar looking allies.
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  • E Crisis of Infinite Twilights

    When Twilight Sparkles from alternate dimensions begin popping up in Equestria, it is up to Scootaloo to round them all up and find a way to send them home and retrieve her world's Twilight.
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  • T The God Squad

    Luna decides to go on an adventure and her family tags along for the ride!
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  • T The God Squad: Equestria's Most Wanted

    Season 2 sees Luna, Celestia, Tydal, Shining, Cadence and Chrysalis on the run and attempt to clear their good names. Needless to say, they are sidetrakced... alot
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Blog Posts83

  • 4w, 2d
    Tydal- Royal Armor Design (Image)

    7 comments · 137 views
  • 4w, 6d
    Should anyone else join The God Squad?

    So, I am trying to bank a bunch of chapters during my vacation, that way there isn't a huge lull, and as I am getting near the end of Season 2 and planning out Season 3 I am undecided on the makeup of the God Squad. Naturally Luna, Celestia, Tydal, Cadence, Shining and Chrysalis will remain part of the team. Discord will also be a part of the team full time by the end of Season 2.

    There are some other characters I have already considered about allowing to join the squad but the issue that always arises is how big the team should be. Right now it is a six man/pony/capricorn/changeling team, and Discord makes seven. What should be the limit though? Keep it at the seven? Cut it down (maybe you guys want Discord not to join or would love to see someone booted off... I can't imagine the team without the Core 6 but maybe you'd like it to be a smaller group).  Or maybe you want the roster to continue to grow and have any of the following join:

    Princess Twilight Sparkle: Let her have some mommy and me time with Luna

    Polar Vortex: Tydal's favorite brother AND a character voiced by Alec Baldwin!

    Philomenia: The sarcastic phoenix that only Celestia understands

    Mary Sue: Even though she is one of the Doctor's companions she is a deity...

    Fuzzy Thinker: Yes, add the Dumbledore parody to the team!

    Starswirl the Bearded: He could either be alive or his skull could be part of the team.

    The Evil Muffin: Just make him officially a member.

    Fluffle Puff: Give Chrysalis something to cuddle

    Nyx: Poor thing, I don't think anyone but me remembers her... (looks around awkwardly)

    Let me know what you think of the currently Core 6 line-up, Discord's upcoming joining of the Squad, and who else you'd love to see join the Squad (either full time or for as a recurring member)

    Also, why are none of you making Tydal plushes? He could hunt down the other, weaker, plushes and beat them up!

    48 comments · 212 views
  • 12w, 2d
    Another Non-Pony plot bunny

    As if I didn't have enough unfinished stories sitting about (and I swear I will get back to my Iron Man/Game of Thrones crossover and my Justice League story... I was writing a lot of both of them right before my mom passed and I've found it hard to get motivated on them), I have another plot bunny dancing in my head. I've already written two chapters on my day off and I'll probably get a third done tomorrow. Just wanted to see what you guys thought of this strange combination:

    Indiana Jones and the Abbey of Downton

    Timeline: Just before the start of Series 3 and into Series 3

    Synopsis: After Sibyl marries Branson and Mary becomes engaged to Matthew Crawley the family, fearing that Edith will become desperate and cling to the first bachelor she finds, convinces her to take a trip to America. They had hoped this would allow her some time to breathe so that when she returned they would be better prepared to find her a suitable match. There was no way they could have known that Edith bring back with her a fiancée… a young soon-to-be Doctor of Archeology named Henry ‘Indiana’ Jones Jr. Now two worlds collide as a newly empowered Edith and her fiancée Indy arrive at Downton, ready to throw English society off kilter… and perhaps discover some lost treasures along the way.

    Pairings: Edith/Indiana, Mary/Matthew, Sibyl/Branson, Cora/Robert

    The basic plot would see Edith, now more empowered by having Indy in her life, and Indiana injected into the world of Downton and how this would alter things. And this being Indiana Jones, of course he is going to begin seeking out lost treasures and dangerous artifacts.

    2 comments · 159 views
  • 16w, 6d
    Everybody Wants to Rule the World...


    (We see Ponyville. Everything looks normal and peaceful… but there is an eerie calm, like the one that comes before the storm)

    Welcome to your life

    (We pan in, moving past Sweet Apple Acres, Rarity’s Boutique, Sugar Cube Corner… and while looking the same, are too static, too quiet)

    There's no turning back

    (We see the world suddenly flicker, the buildings changing from their normal forms into older stone buildings and huts straight out of the past. it is a strange vision, like a tv flickering between two channels)

    Even while we sleep

    (We see flickers and ghostly images of ponies, capricorns and other beings racing towards each other, clearly in the middle of a war. The phantoms are like wisps of fog, swirling about Ponyville.)

    We will find you

    Acting on your best behavior

    (the sky is now black and full of thunderclouds)

    Turn your back on Mother Nature

    (Everything goes quiet and still again. There is a crack of thunder and the screen goes black)

    Everybody wants to rule the world

    (The camera is now focused on a purple eye)

    It's my own design

    (We pull back to see Faith standing at the prow of the Abundance, looking down at Equestria, confused)

    It's my own remorse

    (Faith looks down and sees a golden coin. He reaches down and picks it up, his head tilted, befuddled)

    Help me to decide

    Help me make the most of freedom

    (He stares at the coin, which bears not the image of Celestia but the face of a strange pony-like figure)

    And of pleasure

    (The coin crumbles into dust in Faith’s hoof)

    Nothing ever lasts forever

    (Faith’s eyes go wide and he slowly begins to turn)

    Everybody wants to rule the world

    (We see the Abundance’s deck explode as columns of flames burst from it. Faith silently yells, racing past the crew towards the helm, reaching for Trixie, who is holding a crying Clockwork… )

    There's a room where the light won't find you

    Holding hands while the walls come tumbling down

    (…only for him to fall through the lower decks, his wings impaled by burning shards of wood. He falls out of the ship, his eyes still staring up in horror as the Abundance burns.)

    When they do, I'll be right behind you

    (Faith lands and looks up, only to see Princess Celestia, wearing grim armor, standing before him.  the silver alicorn looking about in confusion as Celestia steps over him, her stare as if she were looking through him rather than at him.)

    So glad we've almost made it

    (Twilight, Cadence, and Luna join Celestia, looking across a battlefield, Faith trying to get their attention but failing. Their horns glow and the four charge forward towards a massive army in black armor and burning manes.)

    So sad we had to fade it

    (We pan over the battle field until we come face to face with a Qilin, half dragon half pony; it is the being from the coin. He smiles and holds up his clawed hand, fire appearing in it before he silently sends out twin jets of fire through the sky towards the battlefield)

    Everybody wants to rule the world

    (Jets of fire race towards Faith, who shields himself, only for geysers of water to shoot up and stop them. Faith turns back and stares as Lord Tydal races onto the battlefield, letting out a silent roar as he leaps towards the qilin general)

    Everybody wants to rule the world

    (Faith trembles as he witnesses the battle, completely forgotten and ignored. He gripes his head and Twilight turns, snapped out of her battle fury as he screams, black magic bursting from him)

    Everybody wants to rule-

    (Close up on Faith’s eye as it goes dark, coat going pure black)

    -the world

    The Abstract Saga

    Volume 3

    The Should-Have-Been-King

    Coming to later this year

    “Those who do not learn from history…”

    20 comments · 440 views
  • ...

A freak accident causes New York Police Detective Kate Beckett and her partner, best selling mystery writer Richard Castle, to be turned into ponies and transported to Ponyville. Meeting up with Twilight and her friends, Beckett and Castle try to deal with their new bodies, the citizens of Ponyville and all the insanity that the Mane 6 seem to attract, all while trying to find a way home.

TVtrope page found HERE

First Published
21st Aug 2012
Last Modified
6th Jun 2014
#1 · 113w, 5d ago · · · The Arrival Part 1 ·

Author’s Note- Let’s get this out of the way: I am not as big of a fan of the show as most of you probably are. This idea came to me and, in order to make it work I have watched all the episodes, done my research, taken notes, what have you. I came up with this more because I was amusing myself than a desire to write such a fic. What can I say, plot bunnies are evil.

But please forgive the mistakes I am sure are within this story, which I am sure exist. If a more passionate fan wishes to correct me (and I am sure you will!) I will try and make changes. I am interesting in hearing what you think of the characters, the tone, so forth.

One final note: This takes place after the events of season two of MLP: FIM, and before the episode ‘Always’ of Castle.

I have been posting this on, and gotten good responses from the Castle fan base, but now I want to get the MLP’s reaction.

Thank you for your time

#2 · 113w, 4d ago · · · The Arrival Part 1 ·

While reading this the Castle soundtrack with all it's pauses and quirks was constantly playing in my head. This is fucking AWESOME!!!

#3 · 113w, 4d ago · · · The Arrival Part 1 ·

I look forward to seeing the story develop. As a fan of both MLP and Castle, I will keep my expectations somewhat high.

Also, I am surprised that Castle and Beckett haven't questioned how The Almighty Pink One got into the apartment in the first place. It was entertaining to see their reactions to her though.

#4 · 113w, 4d ago · · · The Arrival Part 1 ·

Looks good to me. Very well written, fun characterisation. I liked the description of a "realistic" pony body. I haven't seen the Castle series but it has been recommended by friends of mine. Will watch this.

#5 · 113w, 4d ago · · · The Arrival Part 1 ·

I only have one thing to say about this.


... If Castle called one of the chips "Princess Cadence", how come he hasn't recognized Pinkie yet? Claiming he's still half-asleep?

#6 · 113w, 4d ago · · · The Arrival Part 1 ·

"I think I will name you Billy, and you Ginger, and you will be Princess Cadence-"

And yet he doesn't seem to know anything about fim? Still, I laughed heartily.

#7 · 113w, 4d ago · · · The Arrival Part 1 ·


What/ Who's Castle? And what's this 'Always' thing?

#8 · 113w, 4d ago · · · The Arrival Part 1 ·


The Princess Cadence joke was purely just a nod to the MLP fans and not Castle showing that he watched the show (if there even is a MLP in the Castle Universe...) attention and you will find ALOT of references to other shows, movies, so on.

#9 · 113w, 4d ago · · · The Arrival Part 1 ·


To me, a fanfiction should be written because it is fun.  Once it stops being fun (such as by killing yourself trying to research obscure points of canon), then I think you are missing the point.  That's my view as an occasional writer myself.  So, my advice to you is to enjoy yourself telling the stories that you want to tell and don't Let the canon nazis bring you down! :rainbowdetermined2:

I first saw this story on and it intregued me there.  I'll be keeping an eye out for updates and I'll be lookign to see where you take Castle, Beckett and the Ponies in the stories to come.

#10 · 113w, 4d ago · · · The Arrival Part 1 ·


Thank you. Luckily, I haven't killed myself researching this...merely making notes of things throughout the show that I want to hit upon. That said, I am sure there will fanon that I horrifically destroy soon enough, especially when we get to the Big Bad of this arc. I'm just happy I haven't been water-boarded yet by the readers and reviewers here.

If you have been following on, I should note there will be small changes (mostly grammar but also a few lines of dialogue) as I do final edits before posting it here.

#11 · 113w, 3d ago · · · The Arrival Part 2 ·

I am curious to see if anyone caught the hidden joke within this chapter.

#12 · 113w, 3d ago · · · The Arrival Part 2 ·

I don't think THE joke is "Oh no, she's stuck in a loop!" but it was the one I laughed out loud at.

So, they turn up in Ponyland and they already exist there? Interesting...

#13 · 113w, 3d ago · · · The Arrival Part 2 ·


Probably missed the joke, but I got the Lost reference.

#14 · 113w, 3d ago · · · The Arrival Part 2 ·


The Lost reference was the joke. First person to notice it.

#15 · 113w, 3d ago · · · The Arrival Part 2 ·


Oh. Cool. I'm gonna give myself a gold star!

#16 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Arrival Part 3 ·

Author's Note: I am trying to get these chapters up once a day till i get caught up with, then it will slow down to a more casual pace.

This chapter was fun to write as I got to have Beckett interact a bit closer and more personal with Twilight. I wanted to establish early on that all the ponies will have a connection to Beckett and Castle that are their own, but with Twilight and Kate it is a bit different. Their growing friendship will be one of the keystones to the story.

Also, I love Castle and Spike bonding and I realized as I was writing it just how similar to the two are.

Please take time to review and let me know what you think...and if you have questions, ask away. I LOVE discussing my stories with readers.

#17 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Arrival Part 3 ·

No way.

No fucking way.

No god-damned mother fucking way!!!!!

Castle and MLP = WIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Now that the fangasm is over, it's time to actually read the story

#18 · 113w, 2d ago · · 1 · The Arrival Part 3 ·


#19 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Arrival Part 3 ·

Oops i over reacted well good stroy but still DOOM

#20 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Arrival Part 1 ·

THANKYOU FOR WRITING THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really wanted to read a castle crssover so badly:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

#21 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Arrival Part 3 ·

Oh my gosh YAY! Poor alexis:fluttershysad: I bet castle is sad about that. BUT WHAT EVER I'm so happy to have found this story

#22 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Arrival Part 3 ·

Yeah, the separation for Alexis is sad but I do have plans for the entire cast, assuming the reviews continue to come in, so don't worry about her for too long.

#23 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Arrival Part 3 ·

Pinkie's normal self is probably the best interrogation technique known to ponykind. And should she find her way to our planet, mankind as well. Then the universe will tremble at her interrogation abilities. Literally. I don't think a universe-quake would be too good though. Might Pinkie everything up. On second thought, that's not a bad thing.

#24 · 113w, 2d ago · · · The Arrival Part 3 ·


Let's just say that, if you guys keep enjoying it, I have some ideas that would involve a mystery and Pinkie using those exact skills on a suspect.

#25 · 113w, 2d ago · 1 · · The Arrival Part 3 ·

Now that I've had an actual chance to read the story, I must commend your work.  Castle and Beckett are completely in character.

#26 · 113w, 1d ago · · · The Arrival Part 3 ·


Thank you very much. Mind if I ask how I am doing with Twilight and the rest of the girls?

#27 · 113w, 1d ago · · · The Arrival Part 3 ·


Pretty good, actually.  The throwaway gag with Rainbow and the door was funny as hell.

#28 · 113w, 1d ago · · · The Arrival Part 4 ·

A bit of a slower chapter, I will admit, but one needed in order to get the 8 cast members together and interacting under normal circumstances. This being MLP, of course things will go crazy pretty darn quick (there is a reason this has an Adventure tag!) and I wanted to show Beckett and Castle with the girls before the insanity begins.

#29 · 113w, 1d ago · · · The Arrival Part 4 ·

>>1148713 I prefer to believe things went crazy the moment Pinkie Pie showed up. And it's a wonderful kind of crazy that she has.

#30 · 113w, 1d ago · · · The Arrival Part 2 ·

Just one quick question: Was there a reason why Pinkie Pie ended her number recital on '42'? It is the answer, after all!

#31 · 113w, 1d ago · · · The Arrival Part 4 ·

I found this chapter interesting because of Kate's.... well, the only way I can describe it as "change of mind".  It must be a consequence of the transfiguration magic that turned her into a pony but I would be as disturbed as heck if my memories were scrambled that way.

#32 · 113w, 1d ago · 1 · · The Arrival Part 4 ·


Yeah, it is part of the magic. Will be explained in later chapters how it happened and why it affected her mind.

#33 · 113w, 1d ago · · · The Arrival Part 4 ·

awesome chapter!!! love it :heart::yay:

#34 · 113w, 14h ago · · · The Arrival Part 5 ·

And thus ends Episode 1. This was such a fun chapter to write and I really want to hear what you guys think of it, including the new characters Tydal and Piles.  As this next episode goes on I will be discussing the creation of this arc and how it changed from the original designs I had.

Also, the image of Tydal, like all the images I will post, was created by me with some help from the Pony Character Creator.

#35 · 113w, 9h ago · · · The Arrival Part 5 ·

I saw the name Capricorn and the first thing that came to mind was this:

#36 · 113w, 7h ago · · · The Arrival Part 5 ·

Oh god i'm dieing from greatest story in the world!!!!!:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::yay::moustache::trollestia:

#37 · 112w, 6d ago · · · The Arrival Part 5 ·


No idea where that is from but looks very cool. I ended up doing a redesign on the general idea of the capricorn, to make it fit the MLP universe and to also make him more threatening and warrior-like. it is hard to be scary when you only have two legs and are dragging a fish tail around.  I wanted Tydal to look a bit other-worldly, even for Equestria, so I gave him the slit eyes and a fan tail instead of a standard fish tail.


Thanks, though I hope you live long enough to read the next chapter and to continue to review.

To everyone else, thank you so, so much for all your favoriting, thumbs up and so on. I really want this to become a long time story and every time I get reviews it only makes me write faster.

Thank you again.

#38 · 112w, 6d ago · · · The Arrival Part 5 ·

>>1159366 That image is of the Capricorn Horoscope (yes, that's what it's called) from Kamen Rider Fourze.

And thus we begin the hunt for Tydal. This one is going to be a wild ride and set the stage for a lot of subarcs to come in upcoming episodes.

Oh that Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy reference!

#42 · 112w, 4d ago · · · The Arrival Part 2 ·

:applejackunsure:"Oh ponyfeathers, she's stuck in a loop!":pinkiecrazy:


#43 · 112w, 4d ago · · · The Arrival Part 1 ·

Nice. Incidentally, does the ~MC~ stand for anything in particular?

#44 · 112w, 4d ago · · · The Arrival Part 3 ·

I'm not sure if pony dialect applies in this situation, but in chapter 1 Pinkie was saying 'everyone', while in this one she is confused by the word 'someone'.

#45 · 112w, 4d ago · · · The Arrival Part 4 ·

I wouldn't mind seeing Alexis make a cameo at the end of this. She would probably implode seeing ponies.


MC stands for my other pen name, Mr. Chaos. I tend to use that as a way to break up my scenes and find out if people are stealing my stories.

And here is the next chapter, better late than never. As always, if you spot mistakes let me know and I will edit them out.

uh oh they think discord is still ruling.:pinkiegasp: Crap SPOILER'S:facehoof:...i think?:unsuresweetie:

Great story as a fan of both shows i am really happy to find something the portrays all the characters so well. :twilightsmile: please keep writing this great story

Wow, totally called it. Supposed bad guy waking up from a long slumber thinking the last ruler of the world is still around and happens to be Discord. (Yes I thought exactly that.:rainbowderp:)

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