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  • T The Many Secret Origins of Scootaloo

    Everyone wonders what Scootaloo's story is. Apparently, everypony in Ponyville has their own answer
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  • T Faith and Doubt

    After everyone fails to heed to her warnings about Cadence, Twilight gives in to her darker thoughts
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  • E The Doctor Of Oz

    Twilight and Spike accidently end up in Oz and must defeat the Wicked Witch with the help of some familar looking allies.
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  • E Crisis of Infinite Twilights

    When Twilight Sparkles from alternate dimensions begin popping up in Equestria, it is up to Scootaloo to round them all up and find a way to send them home and retrieve her world's Twilight.
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  • T The God Squad

    Luna decides to go on an adventure and her family tags along for the ride!
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  • T The God Squad: Equestria's Most Wanted

    Season 2 sees Luna, Celestia, Tydal, Shining, Cadence and Chrysalis on the run and attempt to clear their good names. Needless to say, they are sidetrakced... alot
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  • T The Abundance

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  • T Happy Hearth's Warming Eve, Twilight Sparkle!

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  • Saturday
    Non-Pony Story: Do You Want To Fly the TARDIS? (A Doctor Who/Frozen crossover)

    I try to do several different Christmas present stories, as I call them, at this time of year. I do one MLP story (hence this year's Les Petit Poneys) and then I do something else, something completely different.

    This year it is 'Do You Want to Fly the TARDIS?', a crossover between Doctor Who and Frozen. Taking place towards the end of 'The Angels Take Manhattan' (with me correcting that episode to give Rory and Amy a less sad end), the Doctor finds himself alone and journeys to Arendelle where he gets caught up in the events of The Eternal Winter and has to team up with Anna, Kristoff, Sven and Olaf to find Elsa and bring back summer.

    The story is 100% complete and I will be posting a new chapter every 2 days or so. PLEASE take the time to read and review.

    Thank you all and keep an eye out for 'Les Petiti Poneys', which begins after Thanksgiving!

    1 comments · 35 views
  • 1w, 6d
    This Year's Annual 'Hearth's Warming Eve' Story...

    11 comments · 115 views
  • 3w, 4d
    Non-Pony related: National Novel Writing Month

    So... I normally don't do things like this but I thought it might be fun and give me the kick in the pants I need to get back to doing some serious non-fan fiction writing. So, dun dun dun dun!, I am going to be participating in National Novel Writing Month!

    Now, since I have a few days, I just need to decide which of the four novels I have bouncing around in my head I should write. Here are the four current ideas I have.

    'A Monster's Tale'- A retelling of the Frankenstein myth from the Monster himself, revealing that much of what we thought we knew was a lie and that who is the man and who is the monster is up for debate. (Drama/Retelling)

    'Confessions of a Reluctent Supervillain'- The story of Dex Deus, son of two supervillains who realizes he isn't evil... and how his parents, their friends, and the entire hero community is sure he must be bad to the bone. (Comedy/Superheros)

    'The Heart of War'- A total departure for me, writing wise. A young woman named Denny answers a job posting and ends up being hired by Ares, the Greek God of War, to be his personal assistant. Imagine her surprise when the War God turns out nothing like she expected. (Young Adult)

    'The Bible with Bill'- A book several people want me to write right now. This story, written as a series of episodic tales, stars Bill. Bill is an immortal being who wanders around the Old Testiment interacting with God, the Devil, Adam and Eve, Noah, Moses, Samson, Lot and his family, Goliath and more, pointing out how they are making things harder than the need to be. Bill is the straight man to the insanity that is the Biblical Days. (Pure comedy)

    Any one people want to vote on?

    22 comments · 113 views
  • 8w, 4d
    Tydal- Royal Armor Design (Image)

    7 comments · 145 views
  • 9w, 1d
    Should anyone else join The God Squad?

    So, I am trying to bank a bunch of chapters during my vacation, that way there isn't a huge lull, and as I am getting near the end of Season 2 and planning out Season 3 I am undecided on the makeup of the God Squad. Naturally Luna, Celestia, Tydal, Cadence, Shining and Chrysalis will remain part of the team. Discord will also be a part of the team full time by the end of Season 2.

    There are some other characters I have already considered about allowing to join the squad but the issue that always arises is how big the team should be. Right now it is a six man/pony/capricorn/changeling team, and Discord makes seven. What should be the limit though? Keep it at the seven? Cut it down (maybe you guys want Discord not to join or would love to see someone booted off... I can't imagine the team without the Core 6 but maybe you'd like it to be a smaller group).  Or maybe you want the roster to continue to grow and have any of the following join:

    Princess Twilight Sparkle: Let her have some mommy and me time with Luna

    Polar Vortex: Tydal's favorite brother AND a character voiced by Alec Baldwin!

    Philomenia: The sarcastic phoenix that only Celestia understands

    Mary Sue: Even though she is one of the Doctor's companions she is a deity...

    Fuzzy Thinker: Yes, add the Dumbledore parody to the team!

    Starswirl the Bearded: He could either be alive or his skull could be part of the team.

    The Evil Muffin: Just make him officially a member.

    Fluffle Puff: Give Chrysalis something to cuddle

    Nyx: Poor thing, I don't think anyone but me remembers her... (looks around awkwardly)

    Let me know what you think of the currently Core 6 line-up, Discord's upcoming joining of the Squad, and who else you'd love to see join the Squad (either full time or for as a recurring member)

    Also, why are none of you making Tydal plushes? He could hunt down the other, weaker, plushes and beat them up!

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A freak accident causes New York Police Detective Kate Beckett and her partner, best selling mystery writer Richard Castle, to be turned into ponies and transported to Ponyville. Meeting up with Twilight and her friends, Beckett and Castle try to deal with their new bodies, the citizens of Ponyville and all the insanity that the Mane 6 seem to attract, all while trying to find a way home.

TVtrope page found HERE

First Published
21st Aug 2012
Last Modified
6th Jun 2014

Author’s Note- Let’s get this out of the way: I am not as big of a fan of the show as most of you probably are. This idea came to me and, in order to make it work I have watched all the episodes, done my research, taken notes, what have you. I came up with this more because I was amusing myself than a desire to write such a fic. What can I say, plot bunnies are evil.

But please forgive the mistakes I am sure are within this story, which I am sure exist. If a more passionate fan wishes to correct me (and I am sure you will!) I will try and make changes. I am interesting in hearing what you think of the characters, the tone, so forth.

One final note: This takes place after the events of season two of MLP: FIM, and before the episode ‘Always’ of Castle.

I have been posting this on FF.net, and gotten good responses from the Castle fan base, but now I want to get the MLP’s reaction.

Thank you for your time

While reading this the Castle soundtrack with all it's pauses and quirks was constantly playing in my head. This is fucking AWESOME!!!

I look forward to seeing the story develop. As a fan of both MLP and Castle, I will keep my expectations somewhat high.

Also, I am surprised that Castle and Beckett haven't questioned how The Almighty Pink One got into the apartment in the first place. It was entertaining to see their reactions to her though.

Looks good to me. Very well written, fun characterisation. I liked the description of a "realistic" pony body. I haven't seen the Castle series but it has been recommended by friends of mine. Will watch this.

I only have one thing to say about this.

Wut.

... If Castle called one of the chips "Princess Cadence", how come he hasn't recognized Pinkie yet? Claiming he's still half-asleep?

"I think I will name you Billy, and you Ginger, and you will be Princess Cadence-"

And yet he doesn't seem to know anything about fim? Still, I laughed heartily.

>>1125314

What/ Who's Castle? And what's this 'Always' thing?

>>1128233

The Princess Cadence joke was purely just a nod to the MLP fans and not Castle showing that he watched the show (if there even is a MLP in the Castle Universe...)...pay attention and you will find ALOT of references to other shows, movies, so on.

>>1125314

To me, a fanfiction should be written because it is fun.  Once it stops being fun (such as by killing yourself trying to research obscure points of canon), then I think you are missing the point.  That's my view as an occasional writer myself.  So, my advice to you is to enjoy yourself telling the stories that you want to tell and don't Let the canon nazis bring you down! :rainbowdetermined2:

I first saw this story on FF.net and it intregued me there.  I'll be keeping an eye out for updates and I'll be lookign to see where you take Castle, Beckett and the Ponies in the stories to come.

>>1128494

Thank you. Luckily, I haven't killed myself researching this...merely making notes of things throughout the show that I want to hit upon. That said, I am sure there will fanon that I horrifically destroy soon enough, especially when we get to the Big Bad of this arc. I'm just happy I haven't been water-boarded yet by the readers and reviewers here.

If you have been following on FF.net, I should note there will be small changes (mostly grammar but also a few lines of dialogue) as I do final edits before posting it here.

I am curious to see if anyone caught the hidden joke within this chapter.

I don't think THE joke is "Oh no, she's stuck in a loop!" but it was the one I laughed out loud at.

So, they turn up in Ponyland and they already exist there? Interesting...

>>1132713

Probably missed the joke, but I got the Lost reference.

>>1134861

The Lost reference was the joke. First person to notice it.

>>1134975

Oh. Cool. I'm gonna give myself a gold star!

Author's Note: I am trying to get these chapters up once a day till i get caught up with FF.net, then it will slow down to a more casual pace.

This chapter was fun to write as I got to have Beckett interact a bit closer and more personal with Twilight. I wanted to establish early on that all the ponies will have a connection to Beckett and Castle that are their own, but with Twilight and Kate it is a bit different. Their growing friendship will be one of the keystones to the story.

Also, I love Castle and Spike bonding and I realized as I was writing it just how similar to the two are.

Please take time to review and let me know what you think...and if you have questions, ask away. I LOVE discussing my stories with readers.

No way.

No fucking way.

No god-damned mother fucking way!!!!!

Castle and MLP = WIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Now that the fangasm is over, it's time to actually read the story

hi

HOLY CRAP RUN LIKE NIGGAS!!! CASTLE AND PINKIE = DOOM IM AT THE BORDER CAN SOMEONE HELP ME?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

hi

Oops i over reacted well good stroy but still DOOM

THANKYOU FOR WRITING THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really wanted to read a castle crssover so badly:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Oh my gosh YAY! Poor alexis:fluttershysad: I bet castle is sad about that. BUT WHAT EVER I'm so happy to have found this story

Yeah, the separation for Alexis is sad but I do have plans for the entire cast, assuming the reviews continue to come in, so don't worry about her for too long.

Pinkie's normal self is probably the best interrogation technique known to ponykind. And should she find her way to our planet, mankind as well. Then the universe will tremble at her interrogation abilities. Literally. I don't think a universe-quake would be too good though. Might Pinkie everything up. On second thought, that's not a bad thing.

>>1142496

Let's just say that, if you guys keep enjoying it, I have some ideas that would involve a mystery and Pinkie using those exact skills on a suspect.

Now that I've had an actual chance to read the story, I must commend your work.  Castle and Beckett are completely in character.

>>1145370

Thank you very much. Mind if I ask how I am doing with Twilight and the rest of the girls?

>>1146325

Pretty good, actually.  The throwaway gag with Rainbow and the door was funny as hell.

A bit of a slower chapter, I will admit, but one needed in order to get the 8 cast members together and interacting under normal circumstances. This being MLP, of course things will go crazy pretty darn quick (there is a reason this has an Adventure tag!) and I wanted to show Beckett and Castle with the girls before the insanity begins.

>>1148713 I prefer to believe things went crazy the moment Pinkie Pie showed up. And it's a wonderful kind of crazy that she has.

Just one quick question: Was there a reason why Pinkie Pie ended her number recital on '42'? It is the answer, after all!

I found this chapter interesting because of Kate's.... well, the only way I can describe it as "change of mind".  It must be a consequence of the transfiguration magic that turned her into a pony but I would be as disturbed as heck if my memories were scrambled that way.

>>1150735

Yeah, it is part of the magic. Will be explained in later chapters how it happened and why it affected her mind.

awesome chapter!!! love it :heart::yay:

And thus ends Episode 1. This was such a fun chapter to write and I really want to hear what you guys think of it, including the new characters Tydal and Piles.  As this next episode goes on I will be discussing the creation of this arc and how it changed from the original designs I had.

Also, the image of Tydal, like all the images I will post, was created by me with some help from the Pony Character Creator.

I saw the name Capricorn and the first thing that came to mind was this:

Oh god i'm dieing from greatest story in the world!!!!!:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::yay::moustache::trollestia:

>>1156133

No idea where that is from but looks very cool. I ended up doing a redesign on the general idea of the capricorn, to make it fit the MLP universe and to also make him more threatening and warrior-like. it is hard to be scary when you only have two legs and are dragging a fish tail around.  I wanted Tydal to look a bit other-worldly, even for Equestria, so I gave him the slit eyes and a fan tail instead of a standard fish tail.

>>1156808

Thanks, though I hope you live long enough to read the next chapter and to continue to review.

To everyone else, thank you so, so much for all your favoriting, thumbs up and so on. I really want this to become a long time story and every time I get reviews it only makes me write faster.

Thank you again.

>>1159366 That image is of the Capricorn Horoscope (yes, that's what it's called) from Kamen Rider Fourze.

And thus we begin the hunt for Tydal. This one is going to be a wild ride and set the stage for a lot of subarcs to come in upcoming episodes.

Oh that Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy reference!

:applejackunsure:"Oh ponyfeathers, she's stuck in a loop!":pinkiecrazy:

:raritywink:

Nice. Incidentally, does the ~MC~ stand for anything in particular?

I'm not sure if pony dialect applies in this situation, but in chapter 1 Pinkie was saying 'everyone', while in this one she is confused by the word 'someone'.

I wouldn't mind seeing Alexis make a cameo at the end of this. She would probably implode seeing ponies.

>>1174054

MC stands for my other pen name, Mr. Chaos. I tend to use that as a way to break up my scenes and find out if people are stealing my stories.

And here is the next chapter, better late than never. As always, if you spot mistakes let me know and I will edit them out.

uh oh they think discord is still ruling.:pinkiegasp: Crap SPOILER'S:facehoof:...i think?:unsuresweetie:

Great story as a fan of both shows i am really happy to find something the portrays all the characters so well. :twilightsmile: please keep writing this great story

Wow, totally called it. Supposed bad guy waking up from a long slumber thinking the last ruler of the world is still around and happens to be Discord. (Yes I thought exactly that.:rainbowderp:)

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