Just the everyday life of two brothers.
Hot damn was that depressing to write. Then again, I have even more depressing things planned. And don't forget to tell me how you feel about this. I take what I give.
Very nice! I've always liked the idea of brothers looking out for each other in the world.
Very nicely done, and very well written. Looking forward to seeing more.
Dear gosh, I'm sorry I haven't read any of your recent stories. I'm also sorry that I haven't been communing with your recently. That aside, I love this fic so far! The simple story of two brothers (loved that movie) trying to get through life when every odd imaginable has been stacked up against them. Bittersweet, somber, but heartwarming in the end. Exactly what was captured in the first chapter of this story, and I eagerly await every chapter following.
I like it. Moar plz!
Ok so, the story itself is good, there are just a few mistakes, like this:
"So, how long've you been teaching here?" Asked Thunder after a prolonged silence punctuated by the occasional pained wince."Oh, for about ten years. And I've loved every single one of them." She giggles softly to herself.
"Oh, for about ten years. And I've loved every single one of them." She giggles softly to herself.
See you can't switch the time as in she giggles softly is present while asked is in the past, you can't switch around or it doesn't make sense, other then that it's a good story that I would like to read more of.
Oh god yes, the emotion that went into is was fantastic. Dat last line had me going
Good fic..it makes me think of my friends family. He lives with his older brother... It's sad really...but it's his life
Tag is: Sad, shit, it will get worse.
Its happy for now must enjoy, well half happy.
._. ....I has feelings for them now.
awww I love it
I'll track this for now, see where you take it.
Very nice short story. Im suprised it doesn't have more views, its deserves more. Very nicely done man, keep up the good work man
>>11393841139384 Reason you haven't read anything of mine is because I haven't written anything up till now. Writer's block pretty much shoved it's dick up the straightaway of my mind and just sat there till now. Anyway, it's fine, you gotta do what you gotta do.
Glad you understand. Can't wait to see the continuation of this story.
Yay! Someone wrote for Thunderlane and Rumble, and an emotional one at that! Love sibling stories, and this proved right up my likeing! :)
Very interesting, looking forward to more.
did you stop this, or are you just a slow writer?
>>14522441452244 Relax. I've got another story in the works as awesome as this one.
coolio, im just a little antsy is all