(reads the description)

I... I... what?

(reads the story)

...did you write the description to a different story by accident?

Not what I was expecting at all. Liked it but very misleading.

>>11229991122999

Did he change the description or something?

Also, you called your own story ''truly touching' and I felt nothing -.-''

>>11232181123218 ...huh, he did. ...okay.

>>11232981123298

Kinda weird question, what was the old description? xD

You need to have someone read over your story and look for grammar errors, there were a few that jumped out.

>>11233101123310 Geeze, I don't remember much (bad memory). Apparently, some other pony was setting out to ruin Nightmare Night, so Pinkie Pie and Twilight became detectives again to solve the "mmmystery" (yes, that pun was used). ...notice how it had NOTHING to do with "Luna Eclipsed".

>>11233251123325

...wut

>>11233381123338 Honest to God, even though my memory is crud, THAT'S what the original description essentially said.

Um...okay, that was...interesting.

Really, what else can I say? Half of the fic was Luna singing "Poor Jack," while the other half was Applejack breaking character so you could vent your frustration with Pinkie in this episode. I didn't like her there either, but AJ wouldn't turn on her as viciously as she did. At most, she would give her a cold glare, a short lecture, and then tell her to apologize.

But other than that, it was fine.

>>11229991122999>>11231581123158>>11232181123218>>11238261123826

Oh boy. . .well I really blew it with this one, man!

First, I jinxed it with writing the wrong description, and then, well, I kinda made a "half" Pinkie-Bashing fic.

So, I'll tell ya what. First, why not smile and say: "Hey! Matthais123 just gave us an ARG (Alternate Reality Game) with this story! The previous description he changed was actually a clue to a special story he's planning on publishing for Halloween/Nightmare Night 2012! He's smart!"

And second, I am leaving it up to you, yes YOU!, to vote on whether or not I should delete this story from this site! Seriously, I was NOT happy with this story, and will gladly delete it if you so wish.

This is Matthais123 signing off!

>>11238261123826 I agree, it shouldhave been Twilight but otherwise this seems like a better ending to 'Luna Eclipsed' and let's hope in Season 3 if she gets an episode devoted to her and her sister they don't screw it up which if 'A Canterlot Wedding' was anything to go by they won't.

>>11250481125048 Damn why did I not realize. Well I will be watching you!

>>11250481125048 A) ...heh, I like that idea.

B) I don't think this should be deleted.

dude did you even watch the episode? Pinkie said its fun to be scared she didnt do it to be mean she even said so herself she knew luna wasnt gonna eat anyone it was just a joke sure it was cruel but still there is no reason to bash her for being well her its your opinion dude but just saying

>>11253501125350

So, should I delete this story?

>>11259281125928

Its up to you.

Aargh! Quit with the author bashing! Okay, I admit, Matthais 123 said that this story was one he was not pleased with, but still! Love and tolerance people! Have we forgotten the fundamental principles of bronyism?

Sorry if this comment is a little rantish, but I've just had an absolutely terrible day.

I'm feeling better now.

This is Australia...

I Like it.