It's Nightmare Night, and all is well. Except for a small Pegasus pony, who has mysteriously appeared in the Everfree Forest, bringing with her a secret that will change the lives of the six friends in Ponyville.
Please do not bold the font whenever a character is talking. It really detracts from the story.
The bold for talking is kinda irritating it makes me think everyone is shouting. Other than that Interesting. I'll keep an eye on this one to see where you take it.
Changed the bold thing, sorry guys!
can i has more of this story?
Yes you can.
nightmare moon is back!!! and she's a filly this going to be good.