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Please do not bold the font whenever a character is talking. It really detracts from the story.
The bold for talking is kinda irritating it makes me think everyone is shouting. Other than that Interesting. I'll keep an eye on this one to see where you take it.
nightmare moon is back!!! and she's a filly
this going to be good.
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