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Secret_Shadows 155145

Joined July 2012
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    Secret_Shadows's Stories (15)

    • Rewrite: Sisterly Bonds
      Follow Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo as they discover their past and build a new future.

      74,411 words · 804 views · 55 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Sisterly Bonds
      Follow Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo as they discover their past and build a new future.
      36,562 words · 1,813 views · 106 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Eight Minutes
      It takes eight minutes for the light of the sun to hit Equestria, eight minutes.
      2,077 words · 696 views · 85 likes · 6 dislikes
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      Scootaloo gets a Cutie Mark, but its not quite what she expected.
      4,482 words · 707 views · 40 likes · 2 dislikes
    • A Sweetie Lesson In Friendship
      4,702 words · 1,914 views · 45 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Cutie Mark Crisis
      2,733 words · 404 views · 23 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Loyalty Tested
      3,782 words · 1,040 views · 74 likes · 12 dislikes
    • A Sweetie Lesson Sequel
      5,035 words · 315 views · 19 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Flight
      1,293 words · 165 views · 12 likes · 0 dislikes
    • To Be Different
      15,620 words · 491 views · 18 likes · 1 dislikes

    Twilight Sparkle shares her feelings about the night in this first person story.

    First Published
    2nd Sep 2012
    Last Modified
    2nd Sep 2012

    Comments ( 7 )

    #1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I enjoyed this story a lot. The only thing i had an issue with was 'its'. A lot of the time you used its when you should have used it's. i think there were a couple other silly mistakes like that, but overall this was a very nice story. Very calming, too. Makes me want to go sit on my porch and stare out at the sky. Maybe I'll do that tonight.

    #2 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1206032

    Thanks, and I will do my best to catch those in my future writings :twilightsmile:

    #3 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    This is a pretty nice story. Can't really say there was anything that bugged me about it. I have to praise how you described the night sky.

    #4 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1206080

    Well thanks :twilightsmile:

    Personally I thought I was starting to get repetitive, but glad someone else thinks I did a good job.

    #5 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1206090 That's all we can ask!

    #6 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Hey, cool! You found the same picture I used for one of my fics!

    haha, delete this comment. It isn't overly important, my fic wasn't even all that popular.

    I FEEL OKAY ABOUT THIS

    #7 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1206342

    Every comment is important to me unless its a mean comment :twilightsmile:

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