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Secret_Shadows
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I enjoyed this story a lot. The only thing i had an issue with was 'its'. A lot of the time you used its when you should have used it's. i think there were a couple other silly mistakes like that, but overall this was a very nice story. Very calming, too. Makes me want to go sit on my porch and stare out at the sky. Maybe I'll do that tonight.
This is a pretty nice story. Can't really say there was anything that bugged me about it. I have to praise how you described the night sky.
Hey, cool! You found the same picture I used for one of my fics!
haha, delete this comment. It isn't overly important, my fic wasn't even all that popular.
I FEEL OKAY ABOUT THIS
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