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Cobalt Swirls's Stories (8)

Sleep Tight, My Love
Spike's thought's and feelings as he spends time with Rarity in her final moments.
2,112 words · 5,221 views · 485 likes · 12 dislikes
Little Princess
Applejack visits Applebloom.
2,561 words · 1,526 views · 150 likes · 3 dislikes
I'm Still Great and Powerful
After accidently injuring Trixie, Rarity does everything she can to help her through her recovery.
6,230 words · 393 views · 31 likes · 0 dislikes
Friendship in C Minor
When Octavia is attacked, an unlikely pony comes to her aide.
7,666 words · 364 views · 22 likes · 1 dislikes
From Lylat, With Love
8,438 words · 659 views · 39 likes · 4 dislikes
The Fleeting Angel
3,634 words · 361 views · 23 likes · 2 dislikes
Now I Lay Me Down To Sleep
8,742 words · 468 views · 25 likes · 5 dislikes
The OC Story
1,067 words · 214 views · 15 likes · 2 dislikes

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Friendship in C Minor by Cobalt Swirls

Sad Slice of Life

When Octavia is viciously attacked on her way home, she learns that the friendship of a certain pink pony will be a key component in her recovery process, both from her attacker, and her own solitude. Upon being introduced to the young mare's friends however, she will find that they will be her best hope in overcoming a newfound dilemma.

First Published
20th Aug 2012

Last Modified
18th Nov 2012

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Grtgfbll

#1 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago ·

A bitter-sweet reminder that even in a land of peaceful candy-colored ponies, bad things can still happen. Good thing it doesn't stay that way

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png

Turai

#2 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 2d ago ·

A pretty good story, although I feel it's a tad short.

There was a few spelling mistakes with the most glaring one being:

"I reached down and carefully placed my bag on my bag." Actually made me giggle a bit lol :pinkiecrazy:

All in all, I liked it and I would like to see more from you.

Lulian

#3 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 1d ago ·

I dig your characterization of Octavia, but was very surprised to see it end there. I'm definitely left wanting more!

CommanderBigMac

#4 · Chapter 1 · 38w, 3d ago ·

Awesome. want MOAR :flutterrage:

HenryAnthonyCourtler

#5 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 3d ago ·

Really well put-together story! I really can't wait to see where you'll take this concept.

Celestias Paladin

#6 · Chapter 2 · 26w, 3d ago ·

An Octavia story that doesn't have Vinyl in it? Ok then let's take a look.... Good start, excellent foundation for the story. It will be interesting to see where this is heading.

TheSuperpony