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Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy have been living the "Pirate's Life" for 5 years now. It's gone without a hitch. They had the 6, of course, but they parted ways. Two of them became pirates as well, and they are now the most feared pirate crew in the ocean. What happens when Pinkie crosses paths with them once more? Inspired by Glaze's "She's a Pony" remix.
Every time I hear party cannon, I think back to Princess Molestia...
Anyways. I can see this being a wonderful story. I want this theme. So, I'll make a proposal. you and I do a collaboration.
Collaboration (In other terms) = you and I write a story together, from two characters' view, both interacting and further continuing with a storyline. God, I've not seen this done in over two years...Not since I last read Soad24k's stories.
Walk the plank! Um.. If it's okay with you, that is....
Pirateshy may be the best idea ever. Too bad you aren't pulling it off very well. The exposition is clumsy and the characterization is bad-to-nonexistent.
I suppose you'll be wanting a rating of some sort now.
3 PIRATESHY'S OUT OF 5
While I will admit that I am enjoying this story quite a bit. I am getting a little worried about your character development. Most of these characters are not even acting in a similar manner to their traditional personalities. I can understand a few changes but these characters bear almost no resemblance to their names sakes. I am looking forward to the next chapter, I only hope that I may actually notice the characters I have come to love.
Sincerely;
The Fictional Critic.
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