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new chapter!... Just as I was going to sleep oh well, more coffee for me
Every time I see the star indicating a new chapter, I start getting excited and think to my self, 'Hope It's Diaries of a Madman!', and while more often than not I'm rather disappointed, being a different story updated..... WOOT, new chapter!!! I've also been shamelessly plugging this story, trying to get some non bronies reading it, simply because this is not just a fan fiction, it has taken on a life of its own-- I'm still waiting for the announcement that someone has decided to animate this epic tale.
so many people called the smiles situation. also at least trixie cannot get her hooves on the amulet now.
Heh, while it's true that some of the "errors" in spelling/grammar are intentional rather than a mistake, I seem to note it becoming an increasing trend where the legitimately correct usage of words gets singled out as being incorrect.
Anyway, a very entertaining chapter. That innuendo in particular was hilarious.
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It doesn't help that I have more proofers now than I ever have before. This is why I don't like giving my in-progress chapters out.
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I'd feel sorry for anyone trying to animate it. That would take so much work.
I find it absolutely HILARIOUS that one of (If not) the longest single 'book' Stories is a MLP Fanfic....Keep up the brilliant work you magnificent bastard
You know... out of all the fics I'm following this is the one I get the most excited over when it updates and the one I'll miss the most when I get shipped off to basic training. So glad the adventure is finally underway though! I've been waiting for this part of the story since it was first announced... and I think that was nearly 1 million words ago xD
FUCKING SMILES
AAAAndd, shit went down. Well, that was interesting. Didn't Discord say something about Kat not making it out though, or was he talking about Miguel? Cause Kat wasn't even in that chapter.
Wonderful chapter mate. Will try to comment more when not on the tablet
YEAH! SMILES IS BACK!
also dont you think the conversation between nav and ames was a tad...... queer?
That innuendo with the naga... You are such a tease.
Well, suddenly things became more interesting than usual. Discord makes two appearances, none which were wanted, and plenty of foreshadowing. Funny how when it comes to females flirting with Nav, Kumani is all protective, when Nav actually gets stabbed, she's rather casual about it.
NO FAIR! We all wanted Taya to realize that Discord was evil, and when she does, it's "all according to plan"! AAAAAARRRGGGHHH!!!!!!
Other than that, excellent chapter as always.
AND HERE'S MOTHER FUCKIN' SMILES TO FUCK UP THE REST OF NAV'S SHITTY
DAYWEEKMONTH.Yes, that needed to be written in capslock. It's too damned good to not be. Also, all of the innuendo with the Naga. It was beautiful.
Lol I just realized this:
Sausages and giant meatballs :3
Damn you! I was just about to call it a night!
Anyways, wonderful chapter! I wait with bated breath for the next one.
Yay, Smiles is back. lol. I was wondering how you were gonna bring him back. I thought that Nav just leaving him in Stalliongrad so far from Canterlot was a bit cruel, so I'm glad that didn't happen.
Definitely a good chapter. Nice to see Taya is starting to become aware of who Discord really is, and Nav now knows she's been seeing him.
Also... more magical artifacts! Interesting.
Only thing about the chapter that confuses me is when Nav gets the book, he's told to wait until he meets an old friend. I initially took it to mean Miguel, the same "old friend" mentioned by Discord, though I assume now it's referring to a DIFFERENT old friend. That's just a tad confusing.
Unless that interpretation was correct and Nav is going to read it during the trip.
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Over 1m words. Any animation would have to be of small portions to have a ghost of a chance.
I'm sure rule 34 could easily dictate which portions to choose, but disregarding those, any of the fight sequences would be obvious choices. Both of the tournaments Nav enters. The time he found Taya. The spider fight, and Flo. Plenty of things to choose from in 1m words.
Is it possible that Discord wants Navarone to kill him?
I hope Navarone kills him
Grogar?
Did i miss something important and this character will be important or was that just discord fucking with us?
Finally onto adventure! ... in the next chapter
The part with the naga XD
Damnit smiles!
Huh. I knew shit would hit the fan this chapter, but I didn't think it would go down like that. Nav has a few new toys, though.
Blacksmith named Jak, with an annoying yet lovable sidekick?
Jak better be either a mute badass or a wisecracking badass.
Also... Discord played his hand and lost, but at the same time... What could that have gained him? In the end, all he did was take care of a loose end he could have dealt with himself. Well, and give Nav a blood sucking dagger. Doesn't make sense, but then again...
WHAT FUN IS THERE IN MAKING SENSE!?!
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Fucking Smiles, man... I thought we'd seen the last of him. BUT NO. He's back, and he'll probably get torched by Kumani if he keeps up his flamboyantly gay shennanigans. I can't say I'd be disappointed.
...I think I'd start a rave, actually.
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Raves're good. Think it'd be funnier to throw a wake, though.
3101536 Now that's a whole new level... btw please. for the sake of your own self (respect) image... don't go and do that to poor people whom are happy in their ignoranse of this work of fiction. Hell, I did a lot less reading inn english, and now I hang around this website. waiting like a vulture for a update in a story... (fml)
Foreshadow
Wat r u doing?
Foreshadow
STAHP!
Nice job.
After 3 solid weeks of reading, I finally caught up with this story.
IT. IS. WONDERFUL.
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Me every time I see a note from Discord.
Also, it's nice to know that Taya wouldn't be betraying Nav...
Mmmm... Sausage!
Srsly lost it at that scene, so damn funny. Good thing nobody was listening outside the door, especially Smiles. Speaking of which, totally called it.
So... was that curse just a way to avoid writing Navarone competing in the tournament? Haha.
Everyone called it.... Smiles you gay son of a bitch, we love ya man. XD
*random thought*
If Discord wants to die so bad, why doesn't he just create a collapsing pocket dimension, climb in it, and let it implode with him inside.
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I would have been more surprised if no one noticed. And disappointed.
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She expects him to be strong. But she also expects him to be hers and wants no one else to even try to tempt him.
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What?
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You'll see next chapter.
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>What could have have gained him?
Well, what's Discord's goal? That's the real question. If you figure it out, you might just realize what he's trying to do.
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I didn't even want to write this chapter. I just wanted to skip right to him leaving. I was originally going to write the tournament, then I thought of something better.
Keep up the spectacular work mate. That innuendo with the naga was fucking gold too.
3102077 I hope that this lasts a little longer at least. You're only a few hundred thousand shy of a Guiness World Record with this fic, literally.
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Because Discord in this story doesn't work like that. It's difficult to wrap your mind around at first, especially since when you 'see' Discord he's in the form of a draconequus, but he's not a being like you or me or ponies etc etc. He literally IS discord; he's the personification of it. As long as there are beings that don't live in harmony, he will exist(As far as we know, there could very well be another means of his demise). The question then becomes: 'Why doesn't he just destroy the world?' The answer to that is there are limits to his magic, real magic, as stated in a previous chapter. You can't just kill somebody with it; I suspect that applies to destroying the world as well, but it doesn't mean you can't make other people destroy the world.
Interesting chapter, nice to see things progressing with our favorite OP character.
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They were pretty damn hard to miss.
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Who said he lost his hand? I think his plan played out exactly like he wanted it to. And for the record, you missed the fact that Discord has pissed Taya off something fierce. I think that was the goal of this little escapade. Now you have a very pissed off Taya, who would do ANYTHING to get revenge against the guy who pitted her against her father, and a rather alluring Alicorn Amulet... Can you see anything that might go wrong here? ...I thought so.
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I was expecting more a logical reason than a plot reason. He may be the personification of anarchy, but that doesn't mean it's impossible for him to die while it's around. Anything can die or be destroyed the natural way, the secret is knowing what the line to cross is.
I was gonna read this, then I saw it was OVER EIGHTY CHAPTERS LONG how can I see what happens now, and how this story could possibly be sexual when It would take a month just to catch up, if I dont sleep. I might just read the first chapter though.
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Well yes, anything can die. It just turns out he can only die by very difficult means. He said back in the prologue that he can't die unless every sentient being dies(So then there's no more discord between them). That's the very dark way for him to die. We, as readers, are forced to assume there might be another, brighter way for him to die. So therein lies the plot: Will Discord achieve his goal of suicide by his means, or can he be stopped and, if possible, slain?
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There are a few chapters with sex in them. I'll admit, the beginning of the story is pretty bad, but it does pick up. And size doesn't matter that much.
3102271 yeah, It sounds interesting, but this story will probly kill me if it's good, when I read mort takes a holiday, I stayed up 24 hours reading it.
3102271 and Discord is my favorite villan, so I think this story will catch my attention
Uh, I really dislike direct foreshadowing (you seem to do it a lot!)... It ruins the flow of the story I think. Other that that, nice chapter!
I'm hoping that this mysterious book will teach Navarone magic. Is it a bad thing I want Navarone to be OP? Then again, is anything really OP when it comes to fighting against Discord?
3102112 I've seen a fanfiction with 4 million words once. (it wasn't mlp but eh).
3102325 Well Guinness doesn't track anything but published works, so dgaf.
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You ever tempted to go back and rewrite it to bring it up to standard? A good first impression and all that.
Or would it be too much effort and a distraction, at least at this moment in time?
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I did a poll here and everyone told me to keep writing. Going back and rewriting would take time away from writing new stuff.