Page generated in 0.047 seconds
Total duration
1,068 users online
1,949,013 hits today, 2,561,572 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
And here we go.
God damn cliffhangers.
Also, I have no idea how you can pump out these chapters about once a week. I'm beginning to think your actually a team of fanfic-writing robots. Not that it matters. Good writing is good writing.
I don't know whether you did this on purpose or not... But I just wanted to say thank you for making this story one of the few I have found on the site that will transfer over to Overdrive without any errors that cut chapters short (Overdrive is an app for downloads books off the Internet so you can read them offline, in case you didn't know)
There was a new chapter.
Aaaand, its gone.
Wow, really great. Finally, he's leaving. And he's going to go adventuring. I'm interested to see how you're going to do this. I can't wait until around chapter 90ish. Then you'll be a few chapters into the adventure, and it'll start to get really interesting. Just really good, is all I can say. Can't wait for more.
so much foreshadowing.... dis gunna be good
2907810 Shhh. The system is in place to keep the common reader sated.
This chapter had my heart pumping! I can't wait for the next.
This pleases me greatly, I demand moar!
Why do I get the feeling Nav is about to get the heaviest dose of, "Bitch please!" to ever be given out, ever?... Or even worse, a rather large time skip.
I love this story
Yet another great chapter! Will be interesting to see what turmoil will ensue now since Luna has admitted her guilt and what problems that shall cause Celestia down the line. I was hoping he'd take the Umbral knight offer.... but might still happen at the party since Celestia will be there.... Also, woot- more Kumani soon!
Yeah go leave all these damn ponies to rot and suffer like you had to Nav!
Hm, I was thinking... perhaps these entries where written hundreds of years in the future and they're all hidden in random places. I'm guessing some random historian is finding the entries piece by piece. This was a great chapter and I expect the next to be even better.
the way you write about the journey it sounds like you've already git back
or meet all of everyone on the trip. kind of like they went looking for you. hmmm...
Keep it up. Oh yeah, MOAR!
The best story on this site, I swear you could get this published. Looking forward to the many non-equestrian adventures ahead.
I love lines like the last one, fucking assholes as we are...
Honestly my favorite story on this site. Cheers me up every-time I read it.
A NEW ADVENTURE AWAITS!
That last line.
Off to adventure!
Blah. I kinda want to go back and start all over again, but that would take forever, and that's a really long time. I've got... stuff to do, probably.
Probably going to do it, it's been one hell of a ride so far, and I feel that it's only going to get worse for everyone involved.
And Pinkie Pie as the Oracle of Delp... Ponyville? Why do I feel that nothing good can ever come from that.
It is a masterpiece what your doing know that I will never stop reading this story, to me it would be an insult to call this a fan-fiction, it is a masterpiece and should be recognized as one, ones it is done if you will let's me I would like it if you give me the right to have it print as a fine hardcover book so i may add it to my grand collection, for my continued enjoyment of this fine work of art for years to come.
Oh man this is exciting.
This particular line intrigues me, are they going to meet in the old Googleplex, or somewhere else, can't wait to find out.
-Mis
better be a three eyed fucking genie ....
Oh man... All the shit hitting the fan like that was just beautiful. Hell, if there was ever a perfect spot for a time skip, this would definitely be it.
I'd say words cannot describe, but you have proven that they can. I've been looking forward to this odyssey for a while. I know it will be epic.
Sweet, another chapter. Though now I have to wait again. :( Is this disaster you keep hinting at happen very soon? Because I thought he wrote these as they happened but with all this foreshadowing apparently not.
Meting should be getting I assume?
2908399
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/meting?r=75&src=ref&ch=dic
You're the third person who's said that. I'm linking the dictionary.com entry to that word.
It took me a while to finally start reading this, but once I did I couldn't stop. Those few weeks were great, and now that I'm finally caught up I can't help but feel a bit sad. There is no next chapter for me to read yet
That aside, I feel the need to congratulate you on this monstrosity of a masterpiece. I eagerly await your next chapter and the start of Nav's next grand train wreck of an adventure
I'm not gonna lie, I laughed when he booked it after Luna's announcement.
and now the waiting game resumes
I can't wait to read the next arc of this story.
2908404
It's irritating when people don't recognize words, isn't it. Meting, doling, appropriating, dealing... Such a great selection of words to use, all meaning the same, but each with their own flavors and inflections, and no one recognizes their meanings anymore. Sucks, doesn't it?
2908282
I really liked this line as well as all the foreshadowing in this chapter. I think that Equestria is going to go down Shit Creek as Celestia defends Luna and keeps the charges from reaching her. The guard, led by Shining Armor, will probably resign or revolt because of this injustice and Equestria, or at least Canterlot, will be left without a standing military force. Continuing down this road, Celestia will probably be driven out of power. But there are just too many possibilities, I can't wait to see what train wreck will ensue.
And so another chapter in nav's life ends and another begins. This story definitely gets better as it grows.
Thanks whatmustido!
meting is a wonderful word and very rarely used. i love it.
2908838
no i did....but i only slept for 5 hours
*Sees 1,186,890 words*
I wonder how that compares to others.
*Googles for longest novels. Sees 1,200,000 words*
Holy shit Luna confessed...... I can smell the kingdom burning already
2908945
did you just start reading?
2908990 no I have been reading this since October, why?
I'm guessing the mate Navarone's thinking is Kumani...or is it Kat?
Hmm...
The shit hit the fan and produced beautiful patterns on the walls around it!
Also all this foreshadowing is killing me, are you planning to write on this story forever? Because that would be awesome!
2909004
what chapter you on?
2909013 chapter 88 and when I say confessed I mean the public announcement about all the shit she has done to nav over the years
Quite a bit of foreshadowing(? I'm not exactly sure what the term is for something this... deliberate.) in this chapter...
And that's probably not all of them.
Seeing how this is him writing a journal or diary with an entry every week or so, and thus is almost definitely in chronological order(Actually, Flo's perfect recollection could really mess with that if he decided to do a huge update all at once.), I keep imagining him going back and writing these little notes in the margins using blood or something...