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The original plan was to celebrate Thanksgiving by having Nav eat out a catbird thing, but then that didn't happen. Still, I changed the clop around for chapter forty, so there's that.
As ways this is a amazing story. Keep up the good work
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That would have been amusing to read. Good chapter and it is safe to say that everyone of your readers called it with Gilda. Who knows (you do), perhaps Gilda will develop feelings for Nav and make things all that much more difficult for him. Everything seems to fall in line for his troublesome final year before the journey.
Navi has the rest of his life (hopefully) to find someone to love. No need to rush.
Anyway this is a rather nice setup. A wide range of species and personalities living in one house in a town that has a natural/supernatural disaster weekly.
The petting scene is funny and he could probably make a living on giving hand outs. It is nice that he is talking with his pony friends again.
So you studied some anatomy huh. Humans kick other species to the crib when it comes to sex. Seriously it's like humans were made for passion. Too bad Navi can't find another human.
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I know that as of now we do, but I figure the ponies had some time to evolve and it's probable that sentience has given them some better endurance. I'm not going to be giving ponies shit endurance unless I'm also giving them full blown estrus. Same for griffins. Griffins still have thumb-dicks and barbs, though.
Heh, funny chapter.
I wonder how long it takes until one of the ponies that Nav has told the info to so far is going to reveal it. Especially considering one of the ponies he told it to was Twilight! And we all remember how she folded like a stack of cards when she tried to keep a secret.
Also, I saw the Romeo and Juliet reference in there, clever.
Gotta say, I liked the conversation between Nav and Gildas father, and how Nav put the smackdown on him. I would think that this would lead to some stirring feelings from Gilda. This considering that nobody had dared to stand up to him before, as stated by Gilda herself. Heh, this is probably one of the reasons that she is acting so bitchy at the moment, she is confused about how she feels about Nav, and is trying to figure it out the only way she knows how, being bitchy.
Anyway, I am always happy when I see a new chapter pop up.
Ps: I wonder how long until Luna shows up with Canterlock in full effect..........
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She's stuck in Canterlot because of her punishment, remember? Oh, but if she wasn't... Let's just say that Nav would be getting bitched at. The next time he goes to Canterlot, bad things are going to happen. First he has the temerity to get kicked out and not only refuse to go to his liege lady for help, but instead goes to her enemy. Then he's forced to get married and doesn't even try to ask her for help. Finally, he tells Celestia how he'll use Kumani to get out of his engagement instead of Luna.
She's not going to be happy.
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Luna has no one to blame but herself. That and she's also psychotic, but living on the moon for a thousands years by yourself is not good for the mind.
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Hm, true true, I did forget that fact.
Heh, bet Nav is really happy for the ring atm, since it is basically keeping him safe from getting his eardrums shattered.
When he took the ring of to fly over the wall that night, I almost expected him to reappear in Canterlots dungeon, with Luna ready to give him a piece of her mind. I wonder, does she still try to watch him as often as possible?
Heh, and if she can't teleport him, I wouldn't be surprised if some of the royal guards didn't suddenly show up outside his home, demanding to be let in so they could take him to Luna.
Funny thing, picturing that, my mind wanders to Monthy Python, and the Holy Grail. You know which scene I mean, right?
The one where the knights try to enter the castle, but the french just end up taunting and humiliating them.
Would be funny if something like that happened, especially if Pinkie Pie got involved...
I could see it now; Pinkie standing on the wall, throwing pies and other assorted pastries on the guards.....
Niiiice.
I found the scratching/rubbing scene pretty funny.
with a griffin that’s like as not to cut me to ribbons
Do you mean: with a griffin that's as likely as not to cut me to ribbons?
let our must trusted friends
our most
She walked back us both and into
A word seem to be missing here.
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Bitches be trippin', man. Bitches be trippin'. Yes, it's her fault, and she is trying to get over her love, but it's not working very well.
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Yeah, he was worried about getting teleported to Luna. She's not supposed to be watching him anymore, but that doesn't mean anything. He's not going far without his ring on, that's for sure.
The royal guard thing is a possibility. She was waiting for him to come to her, though, or for him to take his ring off. I could totally see Pinkie defending him, though.
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Fixed the middle one. Already fixed the last. The first is a southern thing.
Poor Nav, he's going through the Mariner Effect. Surround by living beings but nothing that can relate to him, thus he's surrounded by water that he cant drink. Also, did you update the title artwork? It looks a bit different.
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Yeah, Sawhorse learned how to shade and he changed it for me. It's pretty neat looking.
Lets just say my muse was more than a little giddy at having an update. I think she has the hots for Nav. Then again, it seems everything has the hots for Nav. The fact that he is so much like me makes that more than a bit awkward. Now if only she would get of her metaphorical ass and help ME write something...
Happy holidays! Now I think i need to go back an read chapter 40, lol.Thanks for the timely update, I was bored as hell.
And once again, I called it! Gilda... lol.
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Got a reply. It's back up now.
Awesome chapter as ever.
I can see various troubles ahead for Nav and they are EPIC.
Ok, still reading the revised chapter, still seeing anatomy issues. If hes face deep in Griffon poon, he should not be having issues with feathers, since the lower half of the griffin anatomy is that of a LION... no feathers there.
Reading on...
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Navs a strong independant man who don' need no woman!
Pretty great chapter, you're one of the few authors who's story actually makes me laugh out loud. Also, you know what would make Navs castle pretty damn sweet? Some close-in weapon system defences on the walls.
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Fixed that. I don't know how I didn't realize that.
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He doesn't want his home to look weaponized. If anything he would use hidden weapon emplacements. The wall is there ostensibly to protect against the forest but really it's there to keep meddlesome ponies out. It wouldn't do much good against unicorns and pegasi, though. Still, if the orange background pony gets pissed at him he'll be able to hold her at bay.
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If it would look like what they look like right now, I hightly doubt Celestia would be able to figure out their true purpose short of reading Navs mind. I get where you're coming from with not trying to make his 'home' look weaponized.
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There's the ballista and then a catapult. The ballista would look like a giant version of his crossbow, obviously a weapon. The catapult can be considered a weapon, and you just know that Pinkie would eventually end up shooting herself out of it like she did with the CMC's catapult way back in chapter something or another. I'm sure there are a few other things that I can't think of at the moment, but I imagine that they would all end up looking like weapons.
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Oh... you were talking about ballista point defense. I was thinking something more along the lines of:upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/1/19/Close-In_Weapon_System.jpg/200px-Close-In_Weapon_System.jpg
Obviously I was joking.
1666037 why does this look like a telescope?
1664835 a cat-bird thing? Im not sure how to feel about that
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I can assure you that, that is not a telescope.
1666528I am hevy wepons guy, and THEES es my wepon!
ha it would be funny if he ate out a as you said it "cat bird thing" for thannksgiving. Somehow I did not see Gilda being his fiance, now that i think about it though, I wouldn't. have it any other way!
IMO It shouldn't off been Gilda.
Also couldn't Celestia just destroy the house to end the marriage?
1666494 well yeah I expect him to have major ptsd but there has to be something to cheer him up like.....0.O I cant actually think of anything that someone with his characteristics could do to help himself other than learning to fight and killing stuff to vent or getting one hell of a hobby....wow now i'm depressed.
you sir/madam ( I duno) write a damn good book
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Well, it pretty much had to have been a Gilda. We know of two: The king's daughter and the Gilda we all know and love. Nav just got unlucky and got the wrong catbird thing. The other Gilda probably would have been a perfect wife for him: Demure, kind, loving, and willing to do whatever it takes to please the man she'll eventually have to marry. Instead he got the Gilda no one likes.
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He'd still own the land. And besides, destroying the house could be seen as a sign of war, since it was built by a foreign government in what is officially unclaimed territory but unofficially Equestria's.
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Depending on where you are in the story, you're going to see how he handles(or fails to handle) it. He hasn't had any big breakdowns yet... that we know of.
Tried to enjoy it, really did. Chapter 13 was as far as I could get. Story stopped being interesting, plot was ass-backwards, the main character is a mega-dick, rape's not really fun to read, Discord is Discord but one Discord doesn't know he's Discord. I checked the later chapters, he doesn't change much. Still a dick, still gets raped(cat's and fish people, who knew), pity sex with Luna. Seems like it caters to a certain niche. I just wanted a nice long-fic with some decent sex. Not what I got here.
This deserves more attention partly because the amout of time and effort put into it is astounding, seriously it's longer than fallout!
and also because its a well written story.
Ok, just reached last written chapter.
I really, REALLY want more.
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I think I prefer well-written being the primary reason this one gets attention, but being long is good enough, I suppose. Still, some people look at a story this size and just say nope and move on.
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Sadly, exams are coming up so it might well get delayed. I'm hoping it won't be too bad, though.
1679058 no worries...
I can wait...
1679061 bow chica bow wow
You are the best writer by far.
Nice new image.
Found this fiction once I put in the word count organization, remembering that Coal Buck's story used to be on the top before he deleted it, and saw this, as well as decretum. Will start read... tomorrow
Cool, Nav has a bad ass compound and a changeling concubine... uhh, I mean assistant. Oh, and the AJ belly rub was awesome!
>a griffin that’s like as not to cut me to ribbons
I think you mean "likely", not "like"
>she looks like a Mary Sue
You bagnificent mastard!
>I look lonely—” And fuck if that isn’t true
The shit you did here with the dashes looks weird
1679058 screw that, I need to read long ass stories. I go through a 50,000 word series in a day if I work at it.
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If it's not the Delphinus I shall be most displeased.
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2833150 ... What... What the fuck is that from... And why don't I have one.
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150 thousand if I am rushing...
3038975 ... That's nothing, I can do this whole story in 12 hours if i'm rushing.
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You are aware that this entire story is longer than the entirety of the Harry Potter series.
If, by some miracle, you were able to do that, I highly doubt you'd retain any of it.
3335968 Exactly! I didn't remember jack shit after I read it under twelve hours so I re-read it in under a week after that, now i'm on my... Sixth or seventh re-read.
its like a race to the finish. i want to finish this story so i can be there to read the new chapter when it comes out........ when do you think it should be finished? main story, plot planning, editing and more editing considered?