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UPDATE I'VE BEEN WAITING SO LONG FOR YOU AND NOW MY LIFE IS COMPLETE!
Yes, god yes!
Edit:
Heh, now I wonder what the task really is. It was about the assasination attempt on Cadance, as it was told in one of the other chapters.
Is he supposed to go undercover into the griffin lands, to try to find out more about this?
Heh, maybe he is supposed to act like he is going on a vacation with Taya, while investigating. Heh, could be likely, since he is so against it, and it is Celestias plan.
YES! Sexy as fuck, and I also see you added that conversation...10/10 Only because withdrawal has been bitch.
Can't wait for next chapter. Is going to be awesome.
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Nice scene.
most of the things she forces nav to do are fucktarded i don't see why he's surprised...
Wow, he stated outright that Cadance reminds him of his sister and the ponies ignored that!? That's huge! Why would they sweep that under the rug?
Also he get got Celestia to cry. As stoic as she usually is that might mean she really regrets what has happened to him.
How long until he finds enough evidence to realize humans lived a long time ago?
Wait.....Everyone thinks he's a actual Man-whore?
Don't the night guards know about Luna's intermixing with blood and sex?and the spells that made him a sex crazed manic?!?
Ah shit Navs rep might make it hard to find a mare/female that would want a actual relationship.
Now that I think about...Sunny might have crush on Nav.. And Nav gave a hint of him being raped....
Who wants to place bets on who will nav end up with?
For some reason I want him to end up in a health yet slightly possessive relationship....I vote for the Dragon Kusami or Sunny Smiles....Why sunny? Because he's the best pony so far.
Wicked awesome to see this story updated. I have a question though, why did the Spear shock Nav? If it is the same spear that we know than shouldn't it have allowed a human to wield it? Or is it because Nav is not a pure human?
Must have MOAR!
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He wasn't surprised.
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Cadance had something else on her mind. Shiny was too embarrassed to think about it. And yes, Celestia most definitely does regret what happened to him. She may get him to do terrible things, but she does it for a good reason. What was done to him was evil and there is no way she can punish those that did it. She is truly torn about it. There is no justice in letting the girls walk free, but she can't put them in jail because she needs them to wield the elements. And Nav straight up called her on it, in front of them and two guards, and there was nothing she could do about it. She hates herself so much right now it's unreal. The next chapter will start out with a fun conversation.
And it'll be a few chapters before he figures out what happened to the humans.
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No, the guards don't know about what Luna did. Shiny and Celestia know and Cadance will soon learn, but you don't let the fact that the princess that went insane a few years back has a blood fetish get out. That would not end well. And the fact that he was under a spell didn't get out either, because that would raise the question of who cast the spell. In order, that would be Celestia, Twilight, Chrysalis, and some random mare. One is the important princess, one is an element and the princess's student, and one is a leery ally. It would not be good for that news to get out. Thus, everything Nav did that week was on him, as far as the ponies know. So yes, his reputation is absolutely tanked.
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Navarone isn't a human anymore. His mind might be, but his biology isn't. But honestly, the spear doesn't give a shit about physical bodies. It cares about the mind and the spirit and all that BS the hippies talk about. Navarone is not a good person so he couldn't use the spear. Simple as that. Fluttershy could touch it safely, though, not that she'd ever want to.
Oh, and in case anyone missed it, this was the scene I used for the bar: http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m8/whatmustido/Do%20not%20judge%20me/1345921576868.png
I actually base more than a few scenes off pictures I've seen floating around. I should keep a compendium of them somewhere.
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Now now children we all know who to blame here....Taya of course.
YES! An update!
I’m usually fending of horny royalty.
Fending -off- ??
Cant wait for the war games.. its gonna be FUN!
So what was up with that box?
Took me 5 days but at the urging of /mlp i read your epic diaries. I have enjoyed it and eagerly await additional chapters. The changeling /alicorn history is a novel approach. I look forward to the elementals arc ( a path to salvation maybe?).
Thanks for the entertainment, and your time, both in writing, and in interacting with readers. Keep up the good work.
Its nice to see a new chapter updated. I thought it would be weeks before any new updates. What was with the box, was it some magical thing or ancient human artifact? The spear, was it made specifically for those who do not have evil intent?
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Fixed it.
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Not all ruins will hold treasure and you won't always get to a ruin before they're plundered by someone else. That said, though... Not all of the elementals were amused by what the air elementals did. I can think of a few good ways to imprison them...
And the spear has already been commented on, but basically it lets itself be used by genuinely good people. Nav may not necessarily be bad, but he can't be called good anymore either.
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Glad to see you liked it and I'm always glad to get more readers. More is coming when I can get it written.
If it was an air spirit Flo would have noticed...maybe.
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Unless the spirit was already gone by the time they got to the room and Flo was already still very tired from all the across-the-world manipulation she had been doing. Remember, air elementals are very hard to detect by their very nature.
First off, I just got done reading this. It has taken me several days, AND HOLY SHIT! HOW HAVE I MISSED THIS!?
You my good man are getting a watch. And some free publicity.
I'm not exactly well known here, but I do know a few authors that have well known to moderately well known stories, and I'll direct them here if they are interested. If they like them, some have lots of watchers and could spread the word. No guarantees, but I'll do what I can.
I'll try to remember all the questions and comments I have. I might just send you a private message.
Easily in my top five favorites. Easily. I shall wait with bated breath for the next chapter.
Okay, first comment. At the beginning, all was groovy. You had me hooked with the new Discord and this game. The guy was interesting. Loved all of it.
Then bang- rape. Here is my face-
One of the few times in a story, where it hit me right in the feels. Not in the happy way, just the "Damn" way.
Another big point. When he finds out that the Princesses have been playing him. Ho. Ly. Hell. That was not what I expected. At all.
This is when I realized I wasn't in my Equestria anymore. Yeah, the rape was crazy, but I could see where they got the idea. But the Princesses not being all good, kind, and wise... Holy hell.
And Nav bangin' the Princesses.
I probably shouldn't have been so excited, but it blew my mind that it was in an amazing story. And it fit. IT FIT. HOLY HELL.
"This ones a keeper", I thought to myself.
As of right now, I think I'm still trying to process everything that I've read. Any more revaluations or comments and you're be the first to know.
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Awesome to all points. And the princesses are good and kind and wise and all that fun stuff, but they're also politicians at heart. They saw someone they could use and they did so while trying to make it as pleasant as possible. It's just something they've gotten so used to doing that they don't really even notice it anymore. They weren't expecting Nav to ever figure it out. They thought he and humanity were more like fighters, not thinkers. When he proved to be both, they were horrified, worried, and elated all at the same time. Worried, because they took someone that might give them a run for their money and they gave him a perfect reason to absolutely despise them. Horrified, because they realized what they had done. And elated, because it meant they might finally have someone to talk to.
But yeah, I'm down for all manner of publicity I can get. This story might not be perfect, but it took one hell of a long time to put together and it's starting to impact my grades. I'd like something to show for that, even if it's just a reader counter on a website.
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That's pretty much what I meant, but I'm just still in kinda the aftershocks to write to deeply into it.
Let me see if I can give up some of my favorite points:
-The characters are fan-freaking-tastic. Nothing that has happened I would consider really OOC. The rape things and such came damn close, but how you had the characters explain such things, I could see it. Still shocking as all get out, but I could see it.
-The world is huge. And filled with stuff. And the backstory is huge. There are so many creatures and races and encounters that would fit with the MLPverse that aren't in the show, it baffles the mind.
-The main guy. At times I think, damn man, you just gonna take that? But at the same time, I see why he does what he does. It truly is, well, terrible for a human in a ponies world.
-The Princesses. From pretty much every story, the Princesses are loving, wise, and kind (Not that they aren't here) but you gave them so much more than that. Celestias drawer full of sex toys- much laughter was had at this point. The giant moth thing- lots a laughter... and shuddering. The plotting- OH LORD THE PLOTTING- the levels of levels of plotting. It was beautiful. They truly are trying to do there best (usually), but as you said, they have just got so used to manipulating. If the Princesses are just going to become minor parts when he leaves or if it will be on good terms, I don't know. And this excited me. And how you described the loneliness, exactly on the spot (though they kinda blew that one). Immortality might not be what people crack it up to be.
-The sheer number of scenarios and places. Amazing. Simply superb.
-Making the mane six fallible was a nice move. It is always nice to see a story were the ponies aren't perfect saints and make humans look like satan.
-CHRYSALIS! I love Chrysalis! Maybe not so much from the show (though she was pretty cool), but when people give her good back story and make her actually approachable, it is music to my... eyes? Its great.
I'm sure I could rattle on some more, but thats all of the top of my head. Good luck, my talented friend.
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Heh, if you mean from the rape scenes then there's nothing wrong with it. It's not real life, just in a fanfic so there's no reason why it makes anyone terrible! And I guess I just can't easily spot any gramma mistakes then! :3
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There is no way to say it better.
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Well, I bet I could make the wording more flowery. When I read it again, 1546930 And I will read it again, I'll probably find even more stuff to gush over.
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True, friend.
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“Why would an object feel bad about something?” she asked as we walked back through the museum.
“I don’t know. It made sense in my head. Let’s just call it a human thing and leave it at that.”
She sighed. “Sometimes I can’t help but think that you humans are silly.”
so ficken true i had a nice talk with my fold up chair earlyer this week seeing how my awake hours are at night and i stubbed my toe on it...stupid chair
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I cannot hope to count the times I've gone to the trouble of thinking up new and interesting insults for some of the games I play (particular Bethesda games, as they freeze up more often than an air conditioner in a winter rainstorm). I go to such trouble to creatively insult a little disc of plastic that will never hear it. Never feel insulted. Never insult me back.
*sigh*...
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I feel that... Completed Fallout 3... It was way too short.
...And you die and have to revert to a previous save to continue playing?
These were my words, and I quote: You motherfriggin, ass squeezing, oxymoronic, piece of pigeon covered animal shit!
Except louder and with more capslock.
3034347 Forgot xenophobic.
Why did my mind jump to this picture immediately upon hearing the description?
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http://equestria-prevails.deviantart.com/art/The-Shady-Trough-319986368
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Check
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Now that author's notes are a thing, I should probably put that in there.
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Hmm… Yes. Functioning links and/or image tags are nice too though. I had very quickly skimmed the comments, but I apparently missed that. I blame your story for being to interesting; making me too eager to read the next chapter to be bothered with properly reading comments.
You could say I've looked at a lot of FIM fan art, even in the short time that I've been into the fandom (I started about a month before the end of 2012 if you cared to know that), I've seen a lot of art, and I immediately recognized the scene from your description. I think that says something for the memorability of the art, and perhaps the author's skill with description. I did imagine the scene from a different angle for some reason though, as I was thinking the stairs the came down to enter the bar was more to the viewers left, so when entering the room, Nav would have seen her from the side, but eventually come to a position that would match the viewpoint of the picture. <substitute summary sentence, mumble mumble…>
He's going to poniltaly and will discover crazy human shit. Spear of destiny is one of the other elementals weapons. Locked box held the air elemental. I. Think that covers it for now.
The link isn't working for me. Think you can put it in the comment section or PM me it?
1478491 And that link isn't working either. I would like to see the bar too.
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http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m8/whatmustido/Do%20not%20judge%20me/1345921576868.png
http://th06.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2012/222/e/e/the_shady_trough_by_equestria_prevails-d5aif28.png
http://equestria-prevails.deviantart.com/art/The-Shady-Trough-319986368
3220566 I must ask: Was that made FOR this story and then FimFic took it (Or you gave it to them, same shit.) or did you take it from FimFic?
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I found it on 4chan and traced it down to deviantart. It showed up before the story.
You know if i read this in his nonchallant voice, it really sounds to me like he had the time of his life!
Still I fell from my chair because of lol's given in this statement
Title suggestion: Standards. Yes, I have them.
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Used something close to that.
3606306 one of finfic cover pics in the story NICE
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Trust me, the picture came first. I haven't seen much fanart of my story.
3679467 I would if I could, but honestly I suck at drawing, I could probably edit the Paris Wheel, a sniper rifle and a scene from Fallout 3 into something worthy of a Fallout:EQ fic, but for straight up drawing? Urgh, takes me weeks and even then it's quite shady.
No pun intended.
i love the little nod to the fanfic. the golden armor. i do love that fic alot :P a bat pony, a white stallion and a gryph. :P