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Aw, if anything can melt his cold hollow heart it would be a filly. Keep her Navi! You need some light in your life.
What did Luanne do that made Celestia ship her out to Egypt? Sam was sent because he was a mare beater, but what did she do?
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She's really creepy. Like, molestation level creepy. Nav killing Sam kind of snapped her out of it, or at least it made her no longer want to do anything creepy to him. Seeing Kat probably also helped with that.
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Granted she might have been creepy, but did she deserve the death sentence that Celestia sent her on? She pretty much intended for Navi to execute her as well.
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More gets explained later on, as is usual for this story. Trust me when I say that you'll probably be surprised at some of the revelations, this one included.
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A child like figure involved with Nav making him appear more emotional and kinder. Is it fair to say that this will be repetitive in the future?
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It's fair to say that, but that doesn't make it true. Children that go through what she has been through are not normal, and would most likely never return to normality. Her personality has yet to be established.
But she will be attached to Nav and try to emulate his behavior. She might fixate on him as a role model if not a parental or guardian figure.
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I guess time will tell.
seriously how does this story not have more views and likes!!
man I'm tired and hungry but i CAN'T STOP READING!!
Another chapter down, fighting hard to catch up. Long way to go though...
wait a min it is still moving! the chapters are still moving but i'm moving faster then them i'll catch up eventually
Sleep, sleep is for the faint of heart
Hunger, hunger makes the weak strong
The desire to finish this story.
It is what drives me
Yep there are your wise words from buck, ponder them for about 2 seconds then completely dismiss them because i have No clue what im saying
27 chapters in just two days with 10 hours of sleep. I'm setting a wonderful pace, and should hopefully be done by this coming weekend.
My god how I love these good, long stories. Reminds me of reading The Hobbit and Lord of The Rings as a kid again.
Dude, just got recommended this fic a good 8 hours ago in one of those "longest fic ever threads" in this site and I have to say that while the wall of text can be disconcerting at times (here's looking at you 1.1 million words and counting...) but this fic is one of the greatest fanfics I have read and I really like how you wrote Celestia.
I have no idea why but I do. And I normally hate all the sex scenes in most fics (especially if its a rape scene) but damn it man it works.
The Prologue set up the rules of this fic so well that when I started seeing the rules in action.
And Navarone has grown on me. And I still have 60 chapters to go. Overall great job.
Loving this more and more as time passes and I gotta say, it's a fanfic that's good to the point for me that when I read it... I just kinda am reading it and that's it? I don't even pause to think hey that was an amazing fanfic, I just keep reading and wondering in my mind what'll happen next as i play out little scenes
I was really happy to see Navarone get some praise and gosh darn it that fully is adorable with Navarone, I hope he can come to realize he isn't so horrible, though I fear sadly that Navarone is indeed real and Discord will.... Still Harmony shall prevail!
Celestia's character, I feel is quite lined up with my own view of her that is canon, like I don't give her any second views or thoughts I just accept her actions, maybe Navarones method of acceptin things are rubbing off , I know praising the author here when he's so far ahead and commenting wont do much but meh... Hope he doesn't mind
Ohh goddamnit Nav, you pretend to be a jerk, but throw a ten year old orphan at you and your true colors come out. I also find it hillarious how "Near-Celestia tier Political Manipulation" is a skill you consider necessary for a ten year old.
Also:
ALL OF MY FEELS
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The real scholar here(moi) says this makes no sense.
Finally I can sleep. I had to read this chapter. A second time, of course.
Wait. Why isn't she saying ponies and pony?
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I imagine because she wasn't raised in Equestria. You'll notice the cats and dogs say people and person as well.
XD Oh god, I forgot the kings actual name was Jim Johnson. I wasn't thinking about it but when the line came up I thought he was being really sarcastic before I remembered.
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it does to me. But that might be the insomnia.
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3698194 And i love your avatar. Sweetie Belle is always best pony.
You brought me to tears on the part about nav not being a bad person.
Wonderfully done.
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Yup now I see it...
TAya will be navs anchor
GOD THE ADORABLENESS. GOD.
Is it me, or does "Taya's" description sound similar to Discord's daughter Screwball's description? (minus the propeller beanie)
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That's the point.
3359708 ok I know this is late like 18 weeks but I have your answer. She doesnt know about equestria. Early on in the story the author made it clear Celestia invented 'everypony'. S it would make logical sense that she has probably not even heard the word before.
That bit makes me tear up everytime I read it.
Thank you for making emotionally compelling characters.
I just realized that you manage to plop out 10K a week. You're a monster typer.
Oh my goodness, we have an emotional attachment going on with the main character... Taya is totall gonna wind up dead at some point.
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I hope you're wrong.
4259962 So far, he is.
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HOLY SHIT!
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Oh my Taya that....reallly nce
Humanity +1
Loved the softer moments of this chapter. A welcome addition and very sweet.
Oh yeah, I'm in tears.
I think I just acquired diabetes.
Excuse me... Sorry to be a bother...
But I just wanted to tell you that this single paragraph was probably the most exquisitely crafted piece of literature I have ever read. I have been staring at that one paragraph, sobbing for the last fifteen minutes. Before that, I haven't shed that volume of tears in years.
It's not just anypony who can elicit such an emotional response. That takes somepony special. Please do NOT stop writing what you write.
And, if it's alright with you... I'd like to proofread work for you. If I wouldn't be in the way...
Just... Wow.
P.S. I don't normally do this, but I just couldn't help it.
It's funny re-reading this story (spoiler just to be safe.) Looking back at when Nav first meets Taya when she was just a small thing in the begining, but she changes Nav's life forever. This is one of the points that makes Nav less "earth" human and more "Equestria" Human. Plus she is the single cutest thing to ever been written. Look up some fan made pics. They are the best
I hear that there is fanart of Taya running around out there. Anyone willing to point me to it? I couldn't find anything.
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http://i.imgur.com/RYSS8Vf.png
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That's most or all I've been given.
What a coincidence that half of the guards present had previous dealings with Nav. It's almost like that was meant to showcase his 'smiling rogue' -ish nature.
6258650 Well, also, remember many of the guards offered the assignment turned it down, and the ones that accepted did so because of him. So it would make sense that they would be the ones who had had previous encounters with him.
5837995 I Know this is late, but if we made any fan art, is there a forum or somewhere for it specifically? Or could I just PM it to you?