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I have this strange urge to see Chryssi kiss Celestia in this story…
“I dunno. The way you’ve been acting, I kinda thought it woulda been me or something.” He flinched back and his eyebrows jumped up. “What?! You’re a guy! And a bro! I love you, but not like that!”
oh thank god this ship has sunk and yay! new chapter! good that flo is free. yes i know my opinion is irrelevant but still.
Come from behind Spike twist!
Nice chapter btw, I'm just wondering if you're trying to hit 3mil words though.
Yay! New chapter.
Good job making this one of the longest stories and keeping my attention so far.
No rest for the wicked. Challenge accepted.
also thank you for the update.
Well! I'm glad that Nav had the time to relax for a few, short days - and that he and Chryssi were able to help each other out to an extent. But I must say, I'm looking forward to seeing the spiraling descent into madness, insanity and horror.
So, Flo's free. what happens next, i wonder....
Oh. Well. While I'm glad that the bromance between Spike and Nav hasn't gone off the rails and killed everyone on board... I actually kinda wanted to see that train wreck. But seeing Chryssi try to be good still makes me smile. She's so bad at it, but she just keeps at it! It's heartwarming! And creepy!
6327859 Nav`s gonna be Flo`s b*tch from now on...or it may be the other way around
Update!!
And so, our heroes journey continues. With Flo free, they head off to gather the other passengers!
Which Elemental is next?
Will Navarone survive his trip with Flo freed from her prison?
Will she stop being a slut?(Nope)
Find out next chapter on, Diaries of a madman!
I have waited so long for this chapter, finally I can get my fix!
Would have been interesting to actualy read the Spike/Nav scene^^ but nice chapter aniway, and fairly relaxed.
Nice chapter. I am noticing that Nav isn't offering educational access to the laptop to the changelings. The offer to bring the train presenter in for some private tutoring seemed like an opportunity, though not to imply it would be clandestine. Yet he didn't mention or seemingly even think about it at all. Deliberate?
Well that was just an all-around feel-good chapter. All warm and fuzzy at the end.
What are you about to do to us?
SpikexNav confirmed non-cannon! Woooo!!!!
Fuck yes!
Flo is free, the Spike ship has been thoroughly obliterated, and we're heading to the Heart of Darkness.
Keep it up whatmustido, you beautiful son of a bitch.
and now that flo is free, nav will know no rest... take that as you will
So... Been wondering. Is there anything actually stopping Discord from locking himself into a dreamless sleep somewhere inaccessible until the end of time? I mean if he's sick of existence then oblivion is only a few steps removed from sleeping and never waking up without dreaming, since you aren't aware of any of the passage of time.
6327922 I'm feeling awkward merely thinking about It.
6327784 This story is weird, It'll probably happen one way or another eventually.
6327898 In three months :(
i was hoping Nav would keep a changling characteristic or power when she changed back.
my face when i read that
there goes my OTP
not sure wat to make of this
lol
I FLO'S SCENE AT THE END. NEW OTP
Aww, poor tentacle changeling option.
Oh well, easy cum, easy go.
The names Buzz, Queen Huggle Buzz?
The changelings have invented the Hyperloop? I blames Navs musk.
And now Nav has the fully equipped Flo rider?
Lets see what happens next, on the way to The Heart Of Darkness.
I think Nav should be ok as long as Taya doesnt settle for only Minotaur and Dragon studs?
You know, I wonder what the remaining curses will do to Nav's body? Will the key turn him back to a male, or force him to be unable to lie? And what could the ring possibly do? Maybe when all is said and done with the curses, he'll look like the Sphinx from the legends, and Discord has a shot at dying once more.
... Wait, that was the third most horrifying?... What was the second? He doesn't remember what happened with Rarity and Pinkie Pie, so maybe Kat?
... Magitech? A push to make things more steampunk? What's next, is a psychopath going to manipulate certain key characters' actions in order to arrive at the precipice of power, as well as his own destruction?... Huh, I just compared this fanfic to Final Fantasy VI... eh, no matter.
This story is wonderful.
And its total word count surpasses the entirety of the harry potter series.
Dude, when this is finished, you could have it made into a legit fucking book, I would buy it, like damn man.
This has got to be the best story I have ever read.
Also Flo is free.
It that a toy story reference I see? :D
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I bet he came from behind, too...
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Definitely Kat.
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Nothing you won't enjoy.
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It's very deliberate, yes. He showed it to Princess Gilda because he knew she would have no way of taking it from him. The changelings have magic, though. If they wanted it badly enough, they could take it from anywhere. And another reason is because changelings actually do have magic. They can, in his opinion, get as far on magic as the griffins could with just sheer knowledge.
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That's sort of what the elements of harmony do. It allows him to poke at the world every now and then, just to see how things are stirring.
6328307 Ah, cool, I got it right.
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But if he has the power to do that (since he made the things apparently) then he could just... not wake up. I mean what does he think death would entail otherwise? Another eternity of something else?
Buddy, you know I've been around for a while reading this story, and that I only comment occasionally.
So let it be known that this chapter? This chapter was the shit.
Spike likes Rainbow Streak? Wat? You bastard, you tricked me!
Spike and Nav have a (integer)-some with Changeling whores? Wat! Amazing! (Doesn't really bother me you didn't write it out)
Flo is free and giggly like a school girl? WAT?!? I LOVE IT.
I want to say I shipped Flo and Nav since, well, a long time ago, but I can't remember if I actually put that into a comment.
Either way, I ship it.
And you'll probably find a way to wreck it.
And I'll love you for it.
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I wreck that in just about every chapter, dude. Nav and Flo have both said hells to the nizzo multiple times. I'd like to think the end of this chapter demonstrates why. The passive aggression that comes from knowing exactly what the other person is thinking is too much.
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You have to remember his nature. He may want to sleep forever, but some kind of conflict in the world would eventually rouse him. He can't fight against that, as much as he might wish he could.
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So... what would happen if he left the world in question?
Also there's several extinction level events that are caused by relatively mundane sources, if he really wanted to end all life. The most obvious I can think of would be to just start magically producing iron in the Sun's core. Sure, might take a couple thousand years to get a significant amount there, but once a significant portion of iron exists within a star, it'll go nova. Then there's plagues, and there's several examples of how sickness can be an extinction-level event with a sentient mind governing it in media. Pandemic, for example. All he'd have to do is tweak viruses (which aren't alive) or bacteria (which don't need to be killed, just altered).
I mean... Nuking the earth's a good try but when that doesn't work I'm not sure why he stopped trying.
SpikeDash denied! absolutely enjoy flows presentation at the end. I really like her big sister character. Keep up the good work!
Are the updates always this slow? (I don't mind the wait btw, this is one of my favourite stories)
6328100 At least he updates quicker than Berserk's creator.
It's been four years and Guts is still at sea
... Why did I immediately think of Flo going for Celestia because she doesn't know every thing she thinks? I don't know if that makes this story a bad influence or a good one. Either way, beginning construction of the OT3 now.
So he is heading the belguim Congo, the DRC, the broken center of africa?
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6327987 I think the way it's worded that living in the changeling hive for a while WAS the Heart of Darkness, not what their next destination is going to be. Or maybe it is foreshadowing idk. I ain't a mind reader like flo
I may be a little biased, but I enjoy the Chrissy and nav chapters. I think it's the feels and sarcasm that I enjoy most.
Awesome!
Oh man, this chapter was the shit.
So much concentrated awesome sauce can't be legal.
It's been so long since this story began and I've always enjoyed reading every new chapter. I still enjoy it as much, nay, even more as it progresses. Kudos
You rock, dude. Seriously.
YES FLOOO!!!! i love that girl, shes perfect for nav.
6328581 nah. Its normally 2-3 weeks
My mouth hurts, don't make me smile so much for so long when I read your story.
I wonder how long it's going to be until Flo goes back to being jaded and vaguely disappointed in Nav.
I just browsed b the "Longest" category. Your story is second. Congrats?
FUUUUUUUCK! FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-
*continues to scream in ecstasy*
The level of FUCK YEA is over nine thousand.
This was a long time coming.
This was lovely to read.
Im pumped to see Flo's form appear in the story.
And GOD DAMN, am I so happy I found this story so long ago!
Now, to re-re-re-re-re-re-read it.
What can I say? Im a slut for whatmustido's work.
Also, whatmustido, if you read this, I want you to know that your dedication to this story is something that someone should strive to achieve. It is honestly awe-inspiring to see a story this long come out of a fandom. You, my good sir, are the true MVP.
That moment when the SS. SpikeNav hits an iceberg.
Oh hellz to da yes! A new chapter! Now to shuffle reading list....
and suddenly there was an update. a killer one at that.
srsly man, great chapter.