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I hope you know, every time you update this it makes my day. #1 story on here IMO.
Flovorone
I ship it
I ship it so much
--SYA, The Horse
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I've said before that it ain't never gonna happen. Might as well get used to it.
5591665 Meh. I'll just go back to Johnlock
--SYA, The Horse
YES an update, also mate isint flo's voice supposed to be in italic? and Good Job on the chapter!
Did I miss what the painting was of or is that just going to be a brick joke for later?
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Good I'm just blind. Kind of distracted while reading this and you miss the small things. Can drive me crazy. Thanks.
Damn it. 127 chapters, and I still want more.
Love Soarin', and I'd like to see more. Love the part with threatening the day guard with dreams. Love Taya.
So much love.
Nav sure likes to get angry about things then never do shit about it. He never once told Soarin that he didn't know they had been on a date, and he didn't tell him that they were not going to go on another. Nav brings this shit on himself.
The more I read this story, the more my personality changes to reflect Nav's. It's really weird.
After every chapter I read, I always go "Oh man, this is so sweet". Finally we leave Canterlot behind and get to the action again! It's going to be nice seeing Chryssi again, I hope that she'll play some part of the adventure. Good to have you back guy.
Finally, an update of THE best story. There are a few good stories but nothing on te same level as this.
Good work and please don't make us wait quite as long for the next one.
I especially enjoy the banter between Nav and Flo.
YAAAY Great Update!!!!! Keep up the great work!
Dat song reference:
I guess we know what sort of things Celestia looked at during her time with the laptop.
... wait, has she interacted with it or was that just Cadence? After over a year of reading it's hard to keep a solid grip on all the smaller details.
fleur has really come round to Navs way, so far, theres still that insistant machaivaillian (ow) sub currant, but as long as its twisting and breaking nobles to Navs requirements, its all good.
Wonder how much Soike, Dopple and the Mane 6 are going to get on with each other, and how much reading Taya is going to be doing about magic, just so she can show Nav she knows what to do when she needs it?
Love it.
I don't know if have changed it or not but is he gonna see his changeling kids?
When will he be a mann again?
This entire part sounds so wrong... I love it.
Also, is it rape to give a straight male gay buttsex dreams? I bet if dreamwalker existed that would be all kinds of illegal.
Thank you for an amazing story whatmustido! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Wooooo!
The meeting with Captain Midnight was really awkward, I don't understand why Nav got all edgy and tried to bail when she showed up. They like each other, they're friends, she's not a threat. Why did he become so defensive?
And then a 180 when the painting was revealed. It would almost make sense if he thought she wasn't going to like it, but he already knew she was going to like it.
Also, I added this story to the "Tracking" list and it's a favorite and I still didn't get an email when the new chapter came out. Is there no function on the site anymore that will email me when a chapter is posted?
Huzzah! An update! I can't wait to see what shit goes down when Nav gets to Chrissy's hive. I've paid for the whole seat, but I only need the edge!
1. Fucking YEEEEAAAAH!!!! Update!
2. The part with Celestia... seriously? Speaking in lyrics and fitting so good? The love for this story and you keeps rising. Now you are at 1500 out of 10.
3. The day guard at the palace entrance... fucking lost my shit at that.
4. Just out and I'm already wagging my tail for the next chapter to come. (Feels like not even half of the story is through and the possibilities are aplenty)
Dragon san
After reading the part with Nav and Celestia my brain was stuck in song meter and I ended up reading through about another fourth of the chapter until I snapped out of it.
I also notice that Nav's Southern US accent is much more pronounced in this chapter then previously; Either his irritation with the Soarin thing is really getting to him or he's distracted/nervous/angry about something else.
5592094 It sounds like lyrics to a song. But I'll be dammed if I can place it.
Pffft wow, now that is a punishment you can't escape from.
Arglblarghl! I loved the chapter, been a fan of this fic for a long, long time, but this homophone always gets my goat. (No, Pinkie, goats don't talk where we're from.) It's reins. To 'take the reigns' is what happens when a king gets assassinated by the first in line for the throne. Of course, that probably means something a bit different when it comes to pony BDSM play...
(ETA: Come to think, I bet that Nav takes the reigns all the time. Wink wink, nudge nudge.)
Wow... After watching Hellsing Ultimate Abridged... That was the last reference I expected to see today in the story... I love the song they used and you referenced
CHAPTER! Whenever I see a new one, I have a mini heart attack.
Good shit yo. Keep up the awesome.
Lol, I just thought of something funny. What if Fleur is really Luna?... HAHAHAHAHA! I'm just kidding, there's NO way that'd be the case.
Another unlikely thing to happen is that rather than Nav being Discord, it's Discord who's really Nav. You know, paradoxes and such.
Also, I think something needs to be said... don't worry, this isn't about Nav... well, kinda. whatmustido, let me be the first to pray that you don't fuck up the ending. I've seen too much stuff out there where a villain is built up INCREDIBLY well, even to the point of uber-omnipresence, but they get defeated easily or in a contrived way. Your depiction of Discord is incredible. So incredible, it seems like reading this thing is pointless because it SEEMS obvious how it'll end, with Discord and Nav squaring off and then Discord saying "Hey, Celly. Say 'tractor sand blue burn'." and it would all be over. Even now, a hundred something chapters into the story, and Discord's plan has gone 98.75% according to plan (the other .25% dealing with unimportant experimental error, the other 1% dealing with experimental error dealing with that time travel event). If Nav loses, that better be done well. If he wins, that REALLY fucking better be done WELL (I wonder if juggling has to deal with it?...). If it's half-and-half, well, if it's what I said earlier, I saw it coming. Anyway, see ya.
That was fun. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
Such a good chapter. Definitely worth the wait.
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It's a song from the late 90s. One I haven't heard it in almost a decade.
Welp, looks like Navarone will be suffering some more in the future.
Damn, that update took so long that I forgot the events of the last 10+ Chapters.
Also, It's interesting to see Celestia's transition from a caring ruler to what she is now. (Not that she isn't caring; She cares for Nav, Twilight, and her ponies in general.)
She does care about Nav, right?
5591583 *re-reads the intro* Damn, it's been so long since I read that that I forgot about it!
Now I feel like a silly filly...
Thanks!
Again, I almost died laughing with this chapter, almost... The wait was well worth it and I look forward to more.
The question here is...
Enlightened or Resistance?
5592927 Thanks!
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I don't know what this is but I want about 1,000 more of it.
EDIT: Oh wait. I remember those videos now.
im also thinking there has to be another reason flo was imprisonment down here and why she is the hardest to get out. im going with. corrupted flo :P you know what. that sound like a sick name for a metal band.
I like how almost no one mentioned anything in the writer's notes.
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He sure does. No one ever said he was smart.
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You should stop reading. Don't no one want to be like Nav. Don't no one.
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Kermits, of course. Why would I want to be a shitty smurf?
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Sure seems that way, yeah.
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Typo. Easy enough fix, yo.
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Why would you want to?
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It gets bad whenever he gets annoyed. A lot of things annoy him in this chapter. It also doesn't help that I've been hanging around my stepmom a lot more, and her southern accent's rubbing into me hard.
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Sleep is for the weak.
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She didn't, aside from talking to Flo on it.
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Probably gonna bump into them.
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After he goes through a training montage.
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Yeah, probably.
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Nav actually wasn't sure she would like it. She didn't specifically ask for one and he didn't know what, if anything, she would like. He also doesn't like sappy/sentimental moments and wanted to avoid dealing with one, if possible. And I think you have to actually set it to send you emails somewhere, but I don't know where.
Aaaaaa I'm super envious of Pointy Hat now. *Goes off to a corner to cry*
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Goddamnit. I'll be hearing that all evening.