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Yay new chapter! (which is absolutely fantastic by the way) Can't wait for the next!
Are you sure Nav, you seem to be able to bang anything if you try. And I was under the impression Spits swung both ways. Wasn't there a thing with her and RD earlier. Like a personal pole dance or something. Eh, nobody can resist Navs sexy swag so that offer is totally still on.
Edit: I'm kinda commenting in the middle of the chapter because I'm retarded to this may get deleted later...
Edit2: Many fanfics and ships would beg to differ...
5201953 LOL, I remember that. I really stopped reading this at all at around chapter 110.
I'm waiting for the next masquerade or other big party. Really want to see another one of those.
Wicked chapter! I just wish they would came out faster, but I prefer quality over quantity any day.
>Do you… want to come inside?
fUCK yeS
>and and
._.
That was fun. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
A Taya-Burrito! Only 3.99 at your nearest Taco Bell!
Sike, but awesome chapter, I anticipate more.
5202350 I'm sure I have no idea what you are talking about.
5202103 no offence, but that's a horrid way to think. Instant gratification sucks in the long run.
5202463 Mmm you are taking my comment to an extreme.... I am not talking about instant just more frequent than once a month. Plus I did say that I prefer quality over quantity. Meaning that I prefer a long gap with great quality than sacrificing on the quality for faster chapters...
TLDR I Love this story and would just like it to update once every half month maybe? but if it sacrifices the quality of the story I would rater wait 2 months than get rushed crap.... wait this wasn't that much shorter.... oh well
Oh and plus sense he is doing this for the kicks and not getting paid to do it..... I really have no say in what he does.... SO it is ultimately up to him with what he feels like doing...
5202103 huehue
5201893 is it on his dick?
You know... I think I'm starting to develop some kind of dairies sense or something... at a certain point I just get this feeling that it's been some time since the last chapter and that there should be a new one, and generally speaking, within a week, a chapter shows up
Anyway, great chapter, and I can't wait 'till the next one
today is an amazing day. this updates on my birthday. best surprise
Pinkie with The Note, and then The Balloon. All it needed was a marker smily face on it to make it true classic.
Twilight walking in on Nav and Celestia, ohdear, good thing Nav didnt ask Celestia if she knew at least if not gender magic, at least regional transformation magic, offer Twilight her very own Big Mac.
Wonder, given Pinkie helping Fluttershy out, what sort of relations Fluttershy, Rarity, Aloe and Lotus will have now?
Fleur. Will she try the various obvius, not very effective methods totake Nav, only to finish with her plan all along, use her magic to fling a stone or branch or somehting and use classic concussive force to knock him out to take home, for his safety?
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It has this, at least.
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Dairy sense? So you always know when the milkman is coming?
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I'd taste it.
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Fixed that shit, yo.
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Teasing in a dream is one thing. Sexing someone up in real life is another.
5202993 yee ♥
When I saw that Doppel turned into Phinny, I shouted "Yes! Finally!" But when you just glossed over the sex scene, I was like:
You tease me and it drives me wild, you naughty, naughty boy.
KBO.
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I tried writing it, but got a few hundred words in and just couldn't do it. Writing clop just isn't really fun anymore. I've done almost everything there is to do, it feels like. I'm probably going to try against next chapter, and if I can't do it then, I'm just going to throw in the towel on clop.
5203154 honestly, it has gotten quite dry at this point. It might be interesting, but if it's just another pony x Nav thing, it gets boring. Just my opinion, bro. I was wondering when the newest chapter actually came out, and if it was awhile ago, will there be one soon. (: For some reason, fimfiction decided to stop sending me emails about updated. Thanks.
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The next chapter came out about two hours ago.
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So is fapping to cartoon horses, but that doesn't stop anyone here.
5203316 thank you, friend.
CHAPTER! Just want you to know that this is my favorite story on this sight, and I've read over 150 story's (all 100,000+ words)
So many of these lines made me just die from laughter! Like for example
“Oh, cool. Though you know Pinkie’s gonna be mad, right?”
“Yeah, I know. If you’re interested, you can take my place. Just wear clothes, stand on your hind legs, and hide in a corner. They’ll never notice the difference.”
XD
Day sixteen. the wait has been killing me but finally an update has appeared. Those around me have fallen into insanity but here I am ready for this next piece of greatness. Though this new chapter is here I wonder if I will be able to survive untill the next.
5203154 Fair enough. It is understandable.
I am questioning if there will be an elemental with a host in the near future. (All the ones so far have not had any and are just okay to leave even if they are not imprisoned when found).
5203420 and here you can see the survivor in his natural habitat. And he is strong and will not back down. Notice the bodies containing the lesser minds of those who gave in to the temptation to give up.
5203555 You apparently do not know what the word "literally" means.
This made my night.
Is it sad that I'm constantly looking forward to this story being updated?
5203778 not even slightly. :P
Taya tacos are a thing now.
i was kinda hopeing for an alphin on fem nav scene here...oh well still fucking ecstatic about the chapter
5203555 Meh, It's your opinion..
To this day I still wonder why he's female still, like the actual point of it....
And I could give an essay long about why and what it takes away from the story and interactions, the biggest for me being that every interaction at this point with other male/female characters feels impure and unnatural. (I honestly think I hate it just as much as he does.)
That out of the way, love what you're did with Fluer, just making her a "fanatical" fan. (I don't really think she's fanatical, just has a lot of time on her hands.) If they can become friends from this, that would be interesting. Another political power that is even deeper in the political game than Celestia or Rarity. I would think most of the game is kept away from Celestia because everyone knows that they'll be played, which is why I say Fluer is deeper.
And having Fluer there could easily mean that she would be used against Rarity and all of her stupid damn shenanigans. I love power games like this, where people at kept at each other for the main character's sake. Mind games, loyalty games, and political games, they're all just oodles of fun.
I also like how you've taken sexual clop completely out of the story, and instead just heavily imply that it happened. I read stories like this to get into the interactions more than the sex. Oh, and anyone reading this, if you read this story PURELY for the sex scenes, then I have just the game for you. WARNING, THOUGH THERE IS LITTLE PIX-ELATED NUDITY, IT IS STILL A NSFW GAME! (I doubt that there's someone who doesn't know this game, but you never know)
Name your character Navarone and have a blast with that one.
Then you have the relationship with Celestia, and that.... That's ambitious, considering what and who she is. I like it. Gonna need to think a lot more about how it would affect the country and the interactions with everyone as a whole though, if they came out with it.
Good so far, though I have a question....
And it's not what him being female has to do with the main plot, it's about the dragon armor. Couldn't he take advantage of the fact it connects to nerves like that? I mean, hypothetically, if he were to ally with the necromancer that summoned that armor, couldn't that armor basically be a guard for him whenever he's unconscious? Just a fun thought.
Gah! I'm just itching to see Nav get on the road again. I wanna see when they finally rescue Flo! Bah!
Still though, I'm at least glad to see that he's back in Canterlot. Always something interesting going on there.
~Have a good one.
i don't believe it for a second, it's not possible for something not to go to shit in this story.
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No, dude. It was just THAT bad.
this story is literally a drug, when I don't read it I get itchy & angst'y. haven't read yet but I know it is good.
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God I know what you mean.
I've reread this so many times that not long ago, I could give a summary of most of the chapters.
No Alphyn scene?
Good chapter though, even without it...
5204256 No. It is not. It is like a drug. It has roughly the same effect on a person who likes to read epic stories as a drug. The story is engaging and makes you keep wanting to come back for more. And when a new chapter comes out you consume it as fast as you can to get your fix. When you finish the most recent chapter you feel depressed because there is no more. Every day you come back hoping there will be another chapter. When there is none, the withdrawals get worse But you get so happy when there is one it feels like a high. However it is not literally a drug.
“What’s this?” I asked, unfolding it. When I looked back up, he was gone. I shrugged and read over it.
I know. - P
“Oh god,” I whispered.
“What is it, daddy?” Taya worriedly asked. I turned to the window as the train started to move and saw Pinkie standing on the platform, staring directly at me with no expression at all on her face. My eyes widened slightly in fear as we sped up and thankfully quickly left her behind.
“I… I think we might be safe,” I quietly said, relaxing and sitting back, only to jump in fright. There was a pink balloon tied to the seat in front of me.
“Where did… What?” Taya asked, just as dumbfounded as I was.
“...Pinkie knows,” I said.
“But… she’s back there. We’re here, safe. She can’t make us party now!”
“With her, anything’s possible. But I think we’re safe. I think this—” I waved a hand to the balloon. “—is just a message."
This fucking part XD. That wasn't the only great part about this chapter too. Really great read overall, keep up the good work.
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I already have plans for that armor. I hate good guessers
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I really want to get him back on the road, too. It's just difficult, with so much going on. Hopefully I can do it after the next chapter.
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<- Me.
5205008 ya i cant remember the name but i will post the name soon. its some OC and with rarity, but pinkie joins in.
5205008 ok found it paint the town pink this is the sequel to Sweat
always a treat to read one of these chapters.
Say, that 'thoughtful analysis of a bit of satire' that a certain pony sent... did Nav bring in Gulliver's Travels? That seems the most likely culprit in this case.