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LOLOLOLOLOL! ![]()
Too bad that they were only wrestling. Maybe it will lead to bigger and better things? ![]()
Part 2: Twilight actually loses her virginity!
Yay for misunderstandings that aren't resolved and probably will lead to conflict in the near future, but are unknown unless the author makes a new story detailing previously mentioned conflict!
Hint hint.
i wanna be the guy that
has the curse of always walking
in on awkward moments!![]()
Oh, you! But wait--there's a picture!
(In all seriousness, though--Excellent writing, wonderful premise, very enjoyable little snack of a read. Inky-Approved)
This is good, I can already see the party now and all the MASSIVE awkwardness that it entails ![]()
"Congrats on popping your cherry, Twilight!"
...
"Oh, you're still a virgin?"
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"No, you were doing the eight-legged monster with Dashie, silly!"
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"Oh."
"OH."
"Hey Applejack, we need to talk."
...
personal epilogue (um...i had this idea, so i will just post it here. Sorry for writing this so poorly without any kind of permission
):
Twilight and Rainbow where walking casually over to sugar cube corner. "come on twilight" rainbow said. "I don't see what the rush is, I don't think she misunderstood nothing" replied twilight. They had just left the library. Twilight had asked spike if he knew what AJ needed and he didn't know anything except she mentioned to be heading over to sugarcube corner. "I just don't see why its weird a friend just popped in to say hello" twilight said. "look twi, I have known AJ for a long time, I can tell she was lying about us wrestling, she was nervous" the Pegasus said. They could now see the bakery coming up now. "OK, lets just convince her we where wrestling, even if i don't think it is necessary" twilight said. They opened the door and whistles and confetti hit them full force. Twilight was stunned for a moment, reading a banner saying "congrats on loosing your virginity Twilight". Rainbow just facehoofed. "I knew something like this would happen" Rainbow said sadly. "bu--but, how the fuck does a party for this just happen" stuttered twilight.
PINKIE PIE of course!
I read the last line.
And then it was very difficult to keep myself from immediately laughing loudly.
And then I decided this story was an insta-fave.
This needs a sequel. Of the party. It would be so deliciously awkward. And then Twilight would decided that she DOES need to do that with RD... ![]()
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*snerk*
Bwahahahaha!
The story itself was funny, but that line about a surprise party for Twilight getting laid was priceless! ![]()
Best laugh I've had in days! ![]()
Can we please get a followup about what happens at this party? ![]()







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