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Zethariel 212944

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    Twilight Sparkle decided that only through inventing someting totally new and innovative can she trully be "awesome".

    The question is, what hasn't been invented before?

    Cover image used with permission from Mafon

    First Published
    19th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    19th Aug 2012

    Comments ( 8 )

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    #1 · 39w, 17h ago · · ·
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    Set to the read later list, only because im so tired now. But tomorrow after work...this will be read.

    #2 · 39w, 17h ago · · ·
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    Nice story! I liked it. :twilightsmile:

    #3 · 39w, 16h ago · · ·
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    :rainbowlaugh: at the ending

    #4 · 39w, 15h ago · · ·
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    A few grammatical and tense issues that could be cleaned up with a simple edit or three, but otherwise a hilarious story.

    Twi should just be happy she didn't summon any hentai demons.  Things would have gotten ugly.  Or awesome, depending on who you are. :twilightsheepish:

    #5 · 39w, 9h ago · · ·
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    >>1114193

    I'm sure she'd be fine.  Princess Molestia could do things much better/worse than any sort of hentai monster.

    #6 · 39w, 2h ago · · ·
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    I really like how you described Twilight's mental space as a landscape that she would retreat to. I wanted to see more of this landscape. Also, the ending was fun, but I had to go back and reread through Twilight's experiments to get what was happening there.

    #7 · 39w, 11m ago · · ·
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    Today, Twilight Sparkle learned that making mistakes can lead to brilliant revelations.

    #8 · 38w, 3d ago · · ·
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    *Grins* The ending was very cute. Nicely done:pinkiehappy:

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