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This is great so far! Really like the journal style, and the villain protagonist angle works really well.
One thing though - it might be slightly easier on the reader if you separated the different sections a little bit.
Oh, and you've spelled Shining as Shinning in a couple of places.
Looking forward to seeing how this all turns out.![]()
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