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Raot 981

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    This story takes place before the season 2 finale, it is a list of documents compiled to make sense of the events leading up to the changeling invasion.

    First Published
    19th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    19th Aug 2012

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    #1 · 39w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This is great so far! Really like the journal style, and the villain protagonist angle works really well.

    One thing though - it might be slightly easier on the reader if you separated the different sections a little bit.

    Oh, and you've spelled Shining as Shinning in a couple of places.

    Looking forward to seeing how this all turns out.:pinkiehappy:

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