.... I need more!

Good, but MORE :) Lol the cover photo of Fluttershy in gear. I laughed ahah

Oh my god, I can't stop laughing. There were so many about this that were hilarious but I lost count.

This is an amazing story, please don't give up on this.

Me foamsta, keep it up! Watch and favorite.

Just a quick lil' niggle:

Prologue: Preperations

Prologue: Preparations is the way it should be spelt

Excellent story though, quite original and certainly made me chuckle. Not every author can make me chuckle. Chortle, maybe, but not chuckle.

Keep up the good work!

'tis funny, because I was holding a foam Nerf sword when I saw the story.

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One of the few

THERE ARE MORE THAN ONE?

This looks interesting

This has oodles of promise. I can't wait to see how Twilight wins.

Definitly going to give this a read, but i have to ask...

...Is this a hunger games parody?

lul

>>11129101112910

Just you wait until I pull some plot twist that should, hopefully, make sense!

>>11129231112923

So Twilight's gonna think she's won until Pinkie Pie surprises everyone and takes it in a silly fashion? Got it. Can't wait.

Not even the writers of BoBoBo-Bo Bo-BoBo could think of something like this...

>>11129141112914

I hope it's not, seeing how I have not read the books or seen the movies.

lol, to sleepy to read right now but will be looking forward to this when my brain is more functional.

there can be only one!

inb4 Fluttershy wins by staying at her cottage where everyone forgets about her and she only needs to fight the last pony standing.

Nerf guns, anyone?

Brilliant idea. Foam Artillery? Foam Knights? Foam tank! Must read more....

Why do i want to make this happen in real life? because it is so awesome!

ps. TOTALLY VOLUNTEERING TO BE SOMEPONY'S VICTIM!

hmmm... continue!

And across the border, the griffons are looking on in sheer horror

>>11135461113546 im in where do i sign up lol

Just the first line had me laughing!

This is gonna be hilarious and the only thing that ran through my head by the end of this prologue was this

Read the rest.

I now go and rest in peace.

Died of laughter

Fav'd

>>11129421112942 question: is the safety word bananna a family guy referene? Cause if it is, i see what you did there.

funny and interesting, I'm guessing fluttershy will equip her army of animals to fight for her Or maybe she will just use her sad face to stop the enemy from attacking

I will read this. But you must promise me one thing:

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At least one of the combatants must not be left-hooved.

There can be only one!

By the way, how awesome would a pony-fic be if immortals from off world came to Equestria to challenge Luna and Celestia to deadly one on one combat where they winner would receive the other's powers?

All I have to say is, 'Here we are! Born to be Queens! We're the Princesses of the Universe!'  

If Celestia could be bothered, she would blind everypony with a huge ray of light then beat them all with thousands of swords at once

I suppose neither her nor Luna will participate though, given they still need to raise and lower the sun and moon.... Too bad, I would be all-out supporting Luna "the flank-bucking has been doubled!"

Love this so far hope to see the next part up soon

>>11129331112933

Those guys are insane, I wouldn't put it past them...but damn you to tartarus, now I need to see a cross-over of that show with ponies.

I shall give this a read later. This isn't by any chance inspired by that story that has Twilight loosing her pillow is it?

THIS SHALL BE MOST GLORIOUS! 8D

FOR THE HONOR!!!

Neat concept, but it was way too short.

Banana

MOAR!

EVERYONE SHUT UP!

We all know Rarity's got this C:

The description kind of reminded me of the paint-ball episodes of Community. Oh well, this looks promising. Onward!!!

BY THE GODS OF NEW AND OLD, BY ALL THAT IS HOLY AND UNHOLY, BY THE GLORY OF YREDELEMNUL THE DARK, THIS IS GLORIOUS!

Rooting for Vinyl Scratch btw.

Can't wait for more!

>>11155891115589

The Twilight losing her pillow story gave me some inspiration to write this.

>>11156271115627

There is no need to worry, I plan to make all chapter after this one at the very least 2k words.

>>11159421115942

that is an absolutely adorkable picture.

Great start, definitely looking forward to more.

Couple of typos though:

"Few smart ponies sat in their homes, waiting to pick off stragglers after the main fight."  and "Rainbow war buzzing about, dreaming how awesome the prize would be. "

Otherwise looked pretty good.

>>11149851114985

The safety word being "Banana" is a Princess Molestia reference

Banana!

This is the Cutie Mark Crusaders plan to win the contest:

1. The day before, go to Discord's statue and promise him freedom in return for helping them win.

2. The next day, at the beginning of the contest, release Discord.

3. ???bananas???

4. Profit.

Where'd you find that Fluttershy picture? I never knew someone made Red Alert fan art with ponies.

Really good but who wins add mor and I'll give you a pony.

>>11161971116197

Sorry, I do not remember where i found it. All I can remember is that i searched Google for ponies with weapons.