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Poppinfresh 605

Joined August 2012
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    Poppinfresh's Stories (6)

    • When I Can Fly
      Rainbow Dash confronts her own feelings and others about them.

      6,400 words · 2,331 views · 295 likes · 8 dislikes
    • Compassion For the Great
      Fluttershy sees through the guise of a great actress, and decides to see if she can help.
      2,912 words · 629 views · 39 likes · 2 dislikes
    • The Unreachable Things
      Rainbow Dash makes a bold move in her old age.
      4,002 words · 305 views · 24 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Dashpunk
      The world's greatest flyer turns into the world's greatest DJ.
      1,825 words · 379 views · 22 likes · 1 dislikes
    • The Everfree Conspiracy
      13,574 words · 152 views · 5 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Machisimo In Question
      1,780 words · 398 views · 12 likes · 4 dislikes

    Life isn't as easy as it once was for Rainbow Dash anymore. She suffers from poor eyesight, an achy back, and a host of other ailments that come with old age. But worst of all are the things she can no longer have, the things she can no longer reach. Old friends are gone, and certain places she used to visit are now just as out or reach as her friends. But Rainbow Dash can get what she wants. After all, the sky's the limit.

    *Sequel to "When I Can Fly."

    First Published
    18th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    18th Aug 2012

    Comments ( 8 )

    #1 · 39w, 19h ago · · ·
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    *Author's Notes*

    Some of the people who read "When I Can Fly" mentioned they would like to see a continuation or a sequel.

    Well, here it is. I apologize if it's not exactly what you wanted, I know my last story was definitely more upbeat and lively than this one is. But it doesn't make for good or interesting storytelling if a story starts off, continues, and ends with everything being alright, which is what would have been the case had I continued this story right after where the last one had left off. That said, I do hope you enjoyed reading this in spite of it's more melancholy nature.

    For those of you who haven't read the story that comes before this one, I would highly recommend that you do. While it's not impossible to understand this story or feel the emotion in it without reading the first story, I can guarantee you that you'll get a lot more enjoyment from this if you take the time to read what comes before this (it's pretty good too, or so people tell me).

    If you already read this and are now reading the author notes, then I hope it worked out for you with no prior knowledge of the events that took place before this story. Be sure to let me know in the comments so I can make adjustments if necessary.

    Feedback and criticism (no matter how nice, constructive, or mean) is always appreciated.

    And as always, no matter what you thought of it, thanks for reading!  

    #2 · 39w, 14h ago · · ·
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    SOB SOB SOB :raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

    Damn you.

    This was amazing + I still love your unique writing style :twilightsmile: good work

    #3 · 39w, 14h ago · · ·
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    I... she... she managed to do a sonic rainboom?

    Dude, this stuff is heavy... but still cool!

    #4 · 39w, 13h ago · · ·
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    :fluttercry:

    #5 · 39w, 11h ago · · ·
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    >>1110153

    I have to ask, Wolfy, is it what you thought it'd be?

    #6 · 39w, 11h ago · · ·
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    >>1110771 It had a "Sad" tag, what else should I have expected? :applejackunsure:

    I feel like there are more sad stories then, well, not-as-sad ones. Easier to write or what?

    #7 · 39w, 11h ago · · ·
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    >>1110795

    They're often times easier to write, and they can garner just as much attention as a good shipfic (and I'm not gonna lie, attention keeps me writing), but I'm sure my next story will be happier. I'm not sure what it'll be about, but it won't be sad.

    Sad fics are so depressing to write.

    #8 · 39w, 1h ago · · ·
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    bravo good sir, very touching :fluttercry:

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