It has been a long time since Twilight Sparkle has written to the Princess. She has been living her life, with what was thought to be a complete knowledge of friendship. When Princess Celestia receives this letter from her student, it comes with a disheartening message.
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Wow, I am not gonna lie, I cryed, that good, it killed me.
1108390 Wow, I don't really know what to say... I didn't expect anyone to think it was that good
but... why were they all dying? what caused them all to die so suddenly??
1108473 In the story when it said "all those years ago" I was originally going to put an actual number of years, so they would be pretty old. But seeing as how I have no real clue how long they live, I had trouble pinning down a good number. So to answer your question and stop my rambling, they were all getting old (kind like Granny Smith old, somewhere near there) and dying of natural causes.
Well written, with just the right touch of melancholy.
1108558 Thank you!
Looking forward to seeing future stories from ya!
Loved this a great deal, I just hope I don't get this morbid in my old age.
P.s.
Not sure if you intended it but 6ish paragraphs down you don't got a period on the last sentence.
Too amazing ans sad to be true
The tone is perfect, but what sells the story is that unfinished signature: we know Twilight would never deliberately leave anything unfinished, so we know that the letter is literally the last thing she did.
I'm already, by some standards, in my old age; what might seem to be "morbid" is merely an adjustment technique, getting used to the idea that yes, your days are numbered, and there are fewer of them left than there used to be. It doesn't get you down, unless you let it.
My eyes did get a bit watery but no tears. Sad story is sad.
Dammit. Right in the feels :C
wow beautiful story.i dont think i can watch mlp for a while
I'm so happy you all liked it!
1108764 I'm glad you loved it! Missing a...oh, thank you! Fixed it.
Bro, not cool. You made me cry.
My heart tweaked a tad.
One thing though, I'm not trying to be obtuse but you have Angle.
It's Angel or Angel Bunny for the more acute readers.
Keep writing.
1271533
He read that and facepalmed because he had fixed it in the past, but forgot to save. Thanks for the reminder!
1271533 Oh....thanks! as Aridifolia said I had fixed it but forgot to save it. Thanks! Also very nice puns
hope you liked it, because I just fixed it!
A great short read, a single manly tear have been shed.
wow... This fanfic really made me sad... its a really great story
GODAMNED IT
*grudging applause*
Good job you managed to get me crying you are one of twelve writers capable of doing it and second only to OrphiusOlyandra and their story:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/32548/breaking-twilight