Only 2 tanks?  Psh.  

This Fic was inevitable. so glad it was done, looking forward to reading it

I hate the wait time.

Mann Up mode is IMPOSSIBLE. I spent six hours on Decoy's Disk Deletion and only made it to round six (after twenty osmething tries on round five).

Also, good fic.

dafuq did I just read?

In all seriousness, though, I have some criticism you might follow. In listed-form of course, because lists are fun

1)  I thought that the flow was good over all, if a bit lost towards the very end.

2) There were certain instances where I found some parts to be a little forced, especially the beginning. It might smooth things out a bit if you were to add the dialogue of the other characters into the first chapter.

3) How did the Mane 6 get involved with Mann Co.? Who were they searching for? I might have actually missed that part in the story, so correct me if I'm wrong here

4) Spell check/ Capitalize/ punctuate correctly, please. I can't tell you how many times I've been turned off by bad grammar.

all in all, I think that this fic would be great if a little bit more polish was added. I did find it very funny at some points, very original humor. Great work here, 3/5 Moustaches!

I already did a story about the Mane 6 playing MVM a few days ago, lol. I think mine was the first, since Ragemoar didn't go out and say, "It's based on a game mode that will be coming up." Anyway, this and his are still good, and I'm not really saying anything bad. Although....I think my ending has yours beat.

>>11089851108985

You brought being a spamfag to a whole new level

>>11080151108015

I used spell check it's just for some reasong rammar check seems a little derpy. I've had tmes where it will literally send me in circles. I honestly don't use grammar check either because it just doesnt seem right for the characters. I mean look at The Soldier, a semi-retarded patriot with a rocket launcher, do you expect him to have A+ Grammar? No.

Also howd this get kicked off the new storys' page  so fast ;_;

>>11079371107937 ha wait till you see the final wave...plus i have done 3 mann up modes...it's not that hard relly

>>11101011110101

Hows mann up mode? I only got a job for a month this summer so i didnt want to buy any tickets

I had great fun and a sore throat reading this in the soldier's voice.

>>11104611110461 difficult my friend...you will fail many times...bloody tanks...and sooooo many BATS!!!!

>>11110801111080

I've tried Mann Up mode twice, and I got to the last round on the first try. But it takes me and my team 4+ hours everytime, and I have to leave before we can ever finish.

>>11115661111566 i mean on decoy...the last wave is all gaint bots and tanks

>>11110801111080

Im fine with the scoots, as a scout with the soda popper and max upgraded running speed every other shot is a minicrit

>>11107611110761

You, too?

wtf?