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Comma-Kazie

Joined December 2011
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I'm Comma-Kazie; grammarian, nitpicker, and all-around master of feels.

Stories (7)


Dinky and Sparkler have the most awesome godmom in Equestria--that's right, me! Rainbow Dash. Being friends with their mom means I've spent a lot of time with them over the past few years. They're pretty cool kids.

But then ... well, Ditzy got sick. Like, really sick. I've been watching them for her, but if she doesn't get better soon, they may be staying with me for a lot longer than I thought.

That's okay, though: I'm Rainbow Dash. I can handle anything life throws at me.

(Connected to From the Mouths of Fillies, Saying Goodbye, and Feeling Regrets)

First Published
22nd Aug 2012
Last Modified
12th Nov 2012

Comments ( 582 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 17h ago · 2 · ·

It feels wrong to click like for this story.  :fluttercry:

Ugh my heart hurts now.

But good story, things can only get better from here...  Right...?  Right?!

#2 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 17h ago · · ·

Sad. Just sad. :fluttershyouch:

#3 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 16h ago · · ·

Damn that was heart-wrenching. Hope you have a good followup.

#4 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 16h ago · · ·

I don't like this alternative part of the main story,

but you wrote it down well.

#5 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 16h ago · · ·

I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :twilightsmile:

I was surprised when a tear rolled down my face after reading the line:

“Shh.” Dinky snuggled closer against her mother. “Mommy’s sleeping.”

Especially after having read your other stories.

#7 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 16h ago · · ·

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#8 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 16h ago · · ·

This is fantastic. Unbelievably sad, but it's a great story so far. Can't wait for more.

#9 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 16h ago · · ·

WOW, I really hope you write at least one other chapter that was just...wow.

Right in the feels.

#10 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 16h ago · · ·

>“Shh.” Dinky snuggled closer against her mother. “Mommy’s sleeping.”

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#11 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 16h ago · · ·

This story and some somber blues to set the mood...that was heart wrenching.

#12 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 16h ago · · ·

This one loses out to "From the Mouths of Fillies". Spelling all the gut-wrenching details makes it another "somepony dies"-story, a really good one, but just another.

#13 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 16h ago · · ·

That was incrediable. Your discription on how ponies of diffrent ages act during a tragic event such as this is very believable. I hope to see more soon.

#14 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 16h ago · · ·

Why did I choose to read this just as my friend was coming over?

#15 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 16h ago · · ·

Ouch. That one hit me right in the feels.

Amazing job with the emotion.

#16 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 16h ago · · ·

:fluttercry:  more?

#17 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 15h ago · · ·

Oh god, I can already tell this is going to make me sad. :fluttercry:

EDIT: IT DID! IT DID MAKE ME SAD!:fluttershbad:

#18 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 15h ago · 1 · ·

... I bucking hate you, bastard.

(In other words, you're doing your job, and I freaking hate you even more for it. :fluttercry::raritycry:)

Manly tears have been shed prior to Legal Research class...

Also, inb4 Feature

#19 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 15h ago · 1 · ·

i want to hug dinky so much right now it hurts

#20 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 15h ago · · ·

I was sad before I started reading this. Now I'm sadder.

#21 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 15h ago · · ·

I feeL like I've been gut punched. Poor Dinky. Poor Sparkler. Poor Rainbow. :raritycry::pinkiesad2::ajsleepy::fluttercry:

Can't wait to read more...just let me get a tub of ice cream first.

#22 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 15h ago · · ·

I know how you feel Dinky, My mom died too, just six months ago. My eyes are watering now.

F*ck ye author for makin me cry, and for making the Derpster die.

#23 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 14h ago · · ·

I woke up with my chest in pain this morning, and now I know why.

#24 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 14h ago · · ·

>>1135633

I'm so sorry to heard that. Please accept my condolences.

#25 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 14h ago · · ·

I can't hold all these feels. This story made me legitimately sad. I'm going to go crawl onto my bed and die now.

#26 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 14h ago · · ·

Not in the mood to feel right now, but I'm definitely adding this to my read-later pile.

Also, just as a note, in the cover image that isn't Amethyst Star Sparkler. That's Sea Swirl.

#27 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 14h ago · · ·

Oh, ouch. Right in the soul. I really hope I see more of this.

#28 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 14h ago · · ·

That was a bit too powerful for me.  There was a lot of raw emotion and pain at a level that is physically disturbing.  Great writing moves a person, I suppose, but I can't help but shiver.

#29 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 13h ago · · ·

.... I sorta put on happy music in the background so I wouldn't cry, IT DIDN'T WORKKKK!  :fluttercry:

#30 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 13h ago · · ·

>>1135688

Eh, it's fine.

#31 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 13h ago · · ·

OH GOD, THE FEELS! The fucking feels, man! Having just recently lost my grandfather to cancer only a month after being diagnosed, and watching the life fade away from him, this really hits me hard. I don't know what hurts more about this story, the death of one of the best background characters, or how suddenly we were thrust into this emotionally intense scenario. I'm anxious to see how Dashie handles this.

#32 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 13h ago · · ·

>>1136037

I'm sorry to hear about your granddad, bud. I lost my own granddad as well a few months back.

#33 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 13h ago · · ·

The writing is pretty good, so nothing jumped out at me that was bad.

Unfortunate,ly, it didn't affect me all that much. (maybe I'm just an asshole)

#34 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 13h ago · · ·

Celestia DAMN it right in the feels! :fluttershbad:

#35 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 13h ago · · ·

wow. i can compare what i am feeling right now to how i felt when i read my little dashie :fluttercry:

#36 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 13h ago · · ·

I'm not gonna cry I'm not gonna cry I'm not gonna cry

....

GOD DAMNIT!!!!

#37 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 12h ago · · ·

These feels man, they hit me hard :fluttershbad:

#38 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 12h ago · · ·

Never before in my life have I felt something like this. Never.

F.

Fuck you.

M.

#39 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 12h ago · · 1 ·

Ditzy died because she was attacked.... BY THE STUPID!

#40 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 12h ago · · ·

more, please. I kind of want to see the trials of Rainbow trying to be a mother.

#41 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 12h ago · · ·

Why would you do that?!

These feels, they hurt man. They hurt. :fluttercry:

#42 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 12h ago · · ·

>>1135264 Jeez dude I was crying and u HAD to go and make me laugh. :raritycry::rainbowlaugh:

#43 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 12h ago · · ·

>>1136289, I raged at My Little Dashie. I laughed at Cupcakes. I had Scoots kill Dash in the Rainbow Factory. I cannot cry, for I cannot feel sadness. I travel time in Warhammer 40K. I understand ALL of Doctor Who. I have CABAL attack SKYNET. I take the fungal infection in my foot and mix it with the virus that causes warts to make stone hard skin. I comprehend Pinkie Pie. I make a cure to Nurgle's Rot. I make magi-tech steam-punk androids. I build the T1000. I am a Renaissance man in thought. I am a mix of Nikola Tesla, Albert Einstein, Pinkie pie, Twilight Sparkle and Trixie.

#45 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 11h ago · · ·

Congratulations on being the first FiM fic to straight up make me cry. :fluttercry:

Should have waited on this one for when I wasn't at work.

#46 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 11h ago · · ·

This... this story just wrenched at my heart so much, you described it all really well (which i sorta hate you for) and i was crying all the way through :fluttercry:

#47 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 11h ago · · ·

Dead Island goes well with this...well it kinda goes well with anything sad and makes them 15 times more sad.

#48 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 11h ago · · ·

Puts the whole Mare do well scene in a weird light.

#49 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 11h ago · · 1 ·

"And then they all died. Of Cancer. In the Snow. Alone. as orphans."

Aren't I DEEP and MEANINGFUL?

#50 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 11h ago · · ·

I feel horrible. Even worse is that I didn't cry. Maybe I'm just used to these.

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