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A new threat has risen in Equestria: Princess Celestia's former pupil, Paradox, has come back, 23 years after his supposed death, to seek his revenge on Princess Celestia. And it is up to the Spirits of Harmony, and the Princess of the Sun herself, to stop him from whatever plans he has to carry out his revenge.

NaPoWriMo challenge. Current status: 52,348/50,000 words - Goal reached on 30/08/2012.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 7 )

Luna has a computer and you can use charms to replicate the power of alicorns? Dirius approves and I am very interested... I REQUEST MOAR

How has this only been voted up one time? You'd think more people would have seen it.

Well... that was unexpected. Probably should have, but didn't, realize something was influencing Paradox.
And it seems like it's just one or two more chapters before this is over, judging by the number of words. I'm guessing, at least one finale chapter, or maybe a two-parter, possibly followed by an epilogue.

The box is influencing paradox and helping him open it. It's like the Black Book from Fallout Equestria.

Yeeeeesssssssssssssss there must be MOAR?

Good story. Now I want to know what would happen if Paradox had succeeded (not devil)

Nice read. Of course a lot of it is outdated with new canon now, but that's to be expected. I am curious about this elder Alicorn council and so on, since that suggests there's some sort of Alicorn society off to the side that's implied but never really outright talked about.

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