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A Pegasus pony named Blush is a young mare with three tear drops as her cutie mark due to her tears ability to revive and grow plants to their full potential witch made her past hard. Blush find herself alone because her fear of being used like a tool, but she finds friends that help her through life.

-P.S. credit to DEL for the pic

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 13 )

well shoot, she got raped and now she is pregnant... ABORTION! ABORTION!

Heil, this is the Grammar Nazi! I have come to point out all the spelling errors in your story! Lassen Sie uns beginnen! ()=letter missing or word misspelled.
The title: Forgot(t)en
The intro: Potential, not patinshol. Ability, not abillaty. Also, when you said "mark do to her tears" I believe that you meant due, not do.

I will now preceed to read the story and point out any errors. I will send a spell-checked version of your story to you via PM. You're welcome.

Well, killed an hour fixing this story. Probably could have done it faster if I wasn't working on an iPod.

This is really good! i cant wait for the next chapter. keep up the good work!

216121 Thank you for your help, I just dont think of spelling when I write

DEL

when are you gonna update it?
:fluttershysad:

DEL

great chapter! you misspelled the word "yeah" and all the letters in my name are in caps but other than that, it is pretty good:pinkiehappy:

wow... tht took a while to update? ow well.. dusnt matter. it's here now :pinkiehappy: off to read now

wow... tht took a while to update? ow well.. dusnt matter. it's here now :pinkiehappy: off to read now.
Great chapter as always. keep up the good work and good luck :twilightsmile:

I cant wait for the next chapter

I can just feel the feelz from just Reading the description

Philly is not the right spelling, this is filly

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