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    Twilight Sparkle asks Pinkie to help with an experiment but when the testing device goes haywire, Pinkie gains the memory span of a goldfish. Twilight and Spike now need to get Pinkie to the hospital before Ponyville falls victim to a memory deficient pink pony.

    If you enjoy this story, please check out the other Season Z "episodes".

    First Published
    18th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    18th Aug 2012

    Comments ( 17 )

    #1 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Emperor's New Groove refrence... :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    just one error

    So Pinkie Pie with a five second memory span is lose in Ponyville

    shouldn't it be loose?

    #2 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1106172

    Fixed.

    And yes, Emperor's New Groove. Love that movie! :pinkiehappy:

    #3 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Hmm....Pinkie with short term memory lost....Finding Nemo reference????

    #4 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Another fine job my friend you really should submit these to Hasbro! :pinkiehappy:

    #5 · 42w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Myth: BUSTED! Goldfish have a memory span closer to 3 months. You're right, I should just keep enjoying the stories.

    #6 · 42w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1147269

    You are correct as the Mythbuster themselves proved the whole "goldfish have a five second memory span" false. :pinkiehappy: But this is Equestria and anything could happen! Right?...Right? :rainbowhuh:

    #7 · 42w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1148739 Most likely. If you can get the Princesses to laugh, you can do anything.

    #8 · 42w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Hey, if you don't mind could I make a suggestion?

    I mean, if you don't already have all the episodes planned out.

    #9 · 42w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1158739

    Sure you can make a suggestion. The only episodes I have currently planned are the next two and the finale. Suggestions welcome! :pinkiehappy:

    #10 · 42w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1158904 Well, I was thinking that maybe Rainbow gets a crush on somepony, but is afraid to admit in case he doesn't like her back and will hate her forever.

    Who, I'm not sure. Maybe Thunderlane? XDD

    That's, like, the only one I can think of

    #11 · 42w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1158942

    Oh ho! A romance story of sorts, eh? Unfortunately I happen to be terrible at writing romance stories. Sorry. :twilightblush: Plus, I don't know how I'd be able to keep a story like that within cannon. (I don't really do fannon. Again, sorry.) But I promise that I will take your idea into consideration and see if I can come up with anything that might work. However, if you just wanted more Rainbow Dash, she will be featured prominently in the next "episode".

    Thanks for the suggestion! If you or anyone else has another one, I'm more than willing to listen. :twilightsmile:

    #12 · 42w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1159008 No prob.

    And I wasn't thinking of a full on romance story, but more of a Spike crush thing, I guess, but hey, it's your story

    #13 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Wait ... What was the reference to emperor's new groove?

    #14 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1473971

    Yes. Yes it was. :pinkiehappy:

    #15 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1473977

    no, no. From everyone saying it I knew it was there. I just didn't know WHAT it was?

    #16 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1473992

    Whoops, read the previous comment wrong. My bad. It's the opening scene when Spike pulls the lever.

    Here's the actual quote:

    Yzma: To the secret lab!

    [They move over to two levers]

    Yzma: Pull the lever, Kronk! [Kronk pulls a lever, opening a trap door under Yzma; she falls through] Wrong lever! [splash]

    Kronk: Uh –

    Yzma: [comes out all wet and with a crocodile biting her hand] Why do we even have that lever?

    Here's the "No Memory" quote:

    “Pull the lever Spike!” commanded Twilight.

    The dragon nodded his head and yanked down on the lever. A panel in the roof opened up right above Twilight and rainwater came pouring in. Needless to say, the purple mare got drenched almost instantly.

    “Wrong lever!” wailed Twilight in surprise.

    Pinkie giggled. Spike pulled the lever back into its original position and the roof closed back up.

    “Why do we even have that lever?” asked Twilight with slight frustration.

    #17 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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