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Brony MACH


I write, because I can. http://www.youtube.com/user/BronyOff

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After Rainbow Dash's sudden disappearance and her subsequent discovery in the another world, the Princess and Twilight Sparkle must do all they can to restore the separation between Equestria and the human realm. All traces of Rainbow Dash's presence must be erased, no matter the cost. Her past life must be turned into a forgotten memory.

But can memories truly be forgotten? Can magic destroy fifteen years of experience and emotion? Or will Rainbow Dash be forced to exist with a dual history, the memories of two lives flowing through her mind?

And what of the human?

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 23 )

i dont get why this is disliked its a good story

I've read many spin offs and sequels of My Little Dashie, but this one has to be the best.
You get 5 moustaches sir.
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

DUDE/GIRL :flutterrage: you had to make me sad in the middle of a reading :fluttershbad:

Wasn't much of a fan of the original MLD, but I enjoyed really enjoyed this. :3

Pretty good story, no mistakes as far as I see. Atleast a like, probably a fav once I get to read more of the story :3

Cried manly tears.

Very well written - I thoroughly enjoyed reading this :moustache:

i would like too see an mma fighter read this after he had read the original story :fluttercry: because even an mma can cry too the original story:pinkiesad2: :raritycry:

hey it suddenly got more likes!

i shed a tear like 10 times after chapter 3 its sad but nice one of those 16 likes is mine i was the 4th like and the first commenter the story went sometimes weird for me or i skipped a part from boredom butwhatever it ended very nice

Cried manly tears.

Very well written. Made me shed a tear. :raritydespair:

For that, you get 5 moustache spikes
:moustache: :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

1108516 Bro..I am an MMA fighter...i have a 2-0 record. Broke my last opponents arm with a kimura. I...balled. I cried like a baby.

THIS STORY DESERVES TO BE READ! I DECLARE THIS THE OFFICIAL SEQUEL! It is beautiful and I love it! I can`t find it anywhere because I read this long ago before I had an account. Then, I managed to find it again, read it again, cried again and then forgot to save it. Finally, after about a half an hour of searching I found this again and I did favorite it! I also hit like! I say that this was as good as or better than the first! Both were beautiful! ALL WILL KNOW THE NAME My Little Dashie: The Return! TONS OF SMILIES!!! :pinkiehappy::ajsmug::derpytongue2::pinkiecrazy::pinkiesad2::pinkiesmile::rainbowdetermined2::raritystarry::raritywink::scootangel::trixieshiftright::twilightblush::twilightsheepish::twilightsmile::trollestia::moustache:

This story is so sad I give a thumbs up, but cry too I can not favorite. Rainbow's dad should have gone with her I would have and not cared about about any on earth.

You deserve a Favorite and a Follow... Here they are. Thank you for this wonderful story and if you do happen to come out with more stories, I'll be here. Can't wait for more :pinkiesad2:

I cried so many unmanly tears... :applecry::raritycry: omg.... my heart feels empty....

I hate you... But i also love you for making this... I feel so tangled up inside and i'm so sad.... So much so that i cant even cry... And that just makes me want to cry even more! But even so... Thank you.... :applecry::fluttercry::raritycry:

is this a fan sequel to robcakeran's story ?

thank you.For this art.For its beauty.For the love.The happiness.The sorrow.Thank you:fluttercry:

Good story. Im gonna go read something really funny to stop the shed of tears.

Did you know Chuck Norris built the hospital he was born in?





I am still crying manly tears...

So far, so good. I’ve seen stories like this that move pretty fast, but this is fine. You do probably want to get things into full swing by the next chapter though.

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