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Looking good so far, just a couple spelling/grammar errors. Plot is developing nicely though, and I am interested to see where this goes. Thumbs up from me.

Awww! This was just lovely. How neat to see Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy now married and with their little filly! Spectra is a great name for a filly born to them.

So now Soarin' is Rainbow Dash's brother? O.O Huh, never thought of that! But why not? That's pretty cool! Creative license, that works. Makes a nice idea! Awww, and Spitfire is pregnant! (Hee! Spitty....xD) And now Rainbow is replacing her? O.O Oh goodness...

Well I still look forward to how this story will turn out!

Up In The Sky - Joe Satriani

dawwwww

D'awwww! Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy make a perfect couple!

Yay, more stories! Another "Wonderbolts or love" kind of fic, I see. Not a problem, there's still a ton of ways you can go from that. You seem to like the idea of Soarin' being Dash's brother, I assume. It makes sense, so it's fine. I said this on Crashing Angels, but how did the 2 mares have a foal? Magic, I assume, but I'm curious as to what the answer will be. You said you were bad with names? Spectra is an awesome name! Grammar and spelling are pretty good for the most part, and the first chapter seems to kick off the story nicely. Of course I'll be tracking it, so good luck!

          And as always, FLUTTERDASH FTW

>>11084311108431 not a 'wonderbolts or love' story. I've tried to paint it as Fluttershy is willing to with Dashie. The sads will come from another darker source.

How they have a foal will be addressed in time... This fic is designed to be canon with my Crashing Angels story so I hope it explains why there are similarities like Soarin' being her older bother and all...

>>11041181104118 Thank you. Everything you have said is great to hear. I find appeal in Soar' being Dashies older brother. It also can go a fair way toward explaining her excessive taste for being a wonderbolt.

>>11053731105373 Thanks. I think so too

>>11043371104337 nice peace of music, yes yes.

>>11038991103899 and >>11048281104828 Good to hear... Thank you.

>>11039841103984 Yay! Thanks.

Expect a wild ride people... and remember;

D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW and AWWWWWWWWW! Too much emotion I don't think my heart can take it! Uh oh! Too late!

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Please excuse me I am a little over tired. When I am over tired, I get hyper. But really, this is so beautifully written. It is a work of art!

>>11474851147485 Why thank you. I like my cute and I like my Flutterdash.

Results like what I have gotten from you always make my day

Love the new cover =D

>>11947941194794 Thanks. It was a special request from me and I think it works realy well. One more week for chapter 2

>>11960941196094 as for the question i get the point you're trying to get across but you worded it wrong love the rewrite but the constant calling scootaloo the 'adoptive' daughter really makes her feel like a bit of an outcast

>>13199691319969 you think I should drop it after the first one then?

I didn't think of it that way...

>>13199931319993 yeah well you don't have to completely just dont do it as often also include how scootaloo became a member of the family

This is good!

I WANT MOAR!

>>16406001640600 Might be another month before an update on this. I'm focusing on Crashing Angels (which is the story that is set before this...) and want to get more done there before I start on this again.

If you've read my other stories and still want more of this then I'll try get the next chapter out sooner

>>16406301640630 all right.