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Frozen Hearts
Fluttershy learns that she is an next heir to a distant land's throne.
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Frozen Hearts by Ruby Sunrise

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Under the sudden claim that she is the only heir in line to a distant land's throne other than their current ruler, Fluttershy goes to learn how to govern the ice-covered kingdom, but encounters things much more personal while unraveling the secrets of the kingdom and it's unorthodox ways.

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WARNING: Tons of 'other' characters with little involvement with other canon characters.

First Published
17th Aug 2012

Last Modified
17th Aug 2012

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Mudkippower1

#1 · 39w, 3d ago ·

Wow Really Good Prologue, I see potential... and now to favorite and like this fic.

Also First!

Vapour101

#2 · 39w, 3d ago ·

This looks promising...

CeresBane

#3 · 39w, 3d ago ·

hope this doesnt disappoint on the lATER parts like fluttershy dragon princess.

N00813

#4 · 39w, 3d ago ·

Good prologue.

Convention dictates that, instead of: "Sure." He muttered.

You should write

"Sure," he muttered.

since 'muttered' is a speaking verb.

Lapison

#5 · 39w, 3d ago ·

Hmmm. Nice prologue. This warrants a watch. My only qualm is that this might not need the "Other" character tag and needs the "OC" character tag instead. There's a nice blog post showing the difference between the two.

Either way, thumbs up. DO NOT DISAPPOINT! :yay: