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    Why are ponies born? Why do ponies die? And why do they spend so much of the intervening time being friendly to one another?

    When catastrophe strikes Equestria one day for no apparent reason, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, and Spike are thrust into a long and bizarre chain of events, that might just take them not only between universes, but to the Ultimate Question itself.

    Rated Teen for a bit of swearing. I'm so naughty.

    First Published
    16th Dec 2011
    Last Modified
    25th Mar 2012

    Comments ( 123 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 78w, 6d ago · · ·
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    42. nuff said

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 78w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Feels like Douglas Adams wrote it himself. I like where this going, keep it up.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 78w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I don't know... I'm hesitant to read it, because it's going to be hard to compete with the one on EqD...

    You know what? SCREW IT! There can be more than one! 8D (Assuming that it's well-written. Still, only one way to find out, and that's to read it! ALLONS-Y!)

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 78w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Okay, so it's still too early to say if this is as good, better than, or worse than the afore mentioned one on EqD, but it is certainly promising to be rather good. One will thus wait to see what direction this fic goes before becoming more liberal than one already has been. Good luck!

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 78w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>70082

    Thank you very much. That means a lot.

    Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 78w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>70163

    Thank you for taking the time to read the prologue. I am currently drafting Chapter 1, but I'm still not happy with it, so be very patient.

    In the meantime, why not watch the video I am writing this story to complement?

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 78w, 21h ago · · ·
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    want more...I hunger for more. Anyways, so long and thanks for all the fish.

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 78w, 18h ago · · ·
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    >>79323

    Chapter I is on her way. She'll be here soon! :derpytongue2:

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 78w, 13h ago · · ·
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    Oh, and I like your also having a video to go with it, it adds a flair of originality.

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 78w, 7h ago · · ·
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    >>79757

    Yes, it's my own little pet project. :pinkiehappy:

    #11 · Chapter 2 · 77w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Oh joy, this is lovely. I demand more! :yay:

    #12 · Chapter 2 · 77w, 5d ago · · ·
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    And that cupcakes reference was spot on as well.

    #13 · Chapter 2 · 77w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>84813

    You demand more and more you shall receive! :pinkiehappy:

    >>84814

    Ah, yes, I'm glad someone caught on to that. There'll probably be more jokes like that, if I can figure out where to work them in.

    #14 · Chapter 2 · 77w, 2d ago · · ·
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    XD I was WONDERING if that was a Cupcakes ref! XD

    Awesome! And, if you think about it, Sir Ginger DID make another copy of Equestria, propaganda to Celes and Lulu for that! Sothiz is like the sequel! 8D Anyhoof, eagerly awaiting teh next chapter!

    ~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria  

    #15 · Chapter 2 · 77w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>88882

    Yes, I'd like to add little nods to the fandom here and there in the story, to see who catches them. Brace yourself. The cameos are coming.

    On to the main point, I actully don't like to think of this as a sequel. I like to think of it as a different continuity entirely to Sir Ginger's work. Kind of like how the novel series and the TV series of The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy didn't match up perfectly, because all nine (count 'em) nine iterations of The Hitchhiker's Guide are all different. The plot will not be the same as Sir Ginger's work, I guarantee you that now. While Pinkie Pie takes on the same role as she did in Sir Ginger's work, the plot will differ (as you can tell already, as Pinkie's origins diverge from her origins in Sir Ginger's work). In fact, that's the main plot element I borrowed from him. Everything else I am trying to keep as original as possible, while staying true to the book (though, that said, it will not be following the plot of the book, either).

    Anyway, thank you for your support. You're a really hoopy frood.

    #16 · Chapter 2 · 77w, 2d ago · · ·
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    XD no, I mean that it is almost like this is starting from the re-created Equestria, but not at the same time. Stills, whatever happens will happen, and I await that happening most eagerly!

    #17 · Chapter 2 · 77w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>89394

    Nope, entirely different continuity, my friend. :derpytongue2:

    Watch this space! :rainbowlaugh:

    #18 · Chapter 3 · 76w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Your writing skills amaze me and my jaw is sore from hanging open. This makes me want to buy 50 copies of the book, burn them into ashes and snort them. But instead I shall suffice with watching the movie instead. Please give me more. :flutterrage:

    #19 · Chapter 3 · 76w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Oh great, now it's a Doctor Whooves fic? I can only imagine what must be going through your head while you write this...

    #20 · Chapter 3 · 76w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>97253

    Huh, really? I assumed that chapter would go down poorly, being as it was so dark. It ended up like that for two reasons:

    1. I was miserable when I wrote it (much like Adams when he wrote Mostly Harmless)

    2. I wanted to parody grimdark fiction and sad fiction.

    Well, thanks. This is the odd thing about my writing. I usually find it turns out brilliant when I think it's crap. Very well, I shall continue writing crap! :derpytongue2:

    #21 · Chapter 3 · 76w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>98324

    Well, sort of. I'm planning for it to be more of a guest appearance than for The Doctor to become an integral part of the story.

    Still, thanks! And that is the most adorable .gif evar HNNNNNNNNNNNNG

    #22 · Chapter 3 · 76w, 4d ago · · ·
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    "Oh, you said it! You're not supposed to use the D-word!" DELICIOUS! *Everypony passes out from the use of the D word*

    >>98735 Thanks for adding Dr. Whooves in thar! This is going to be EPIC! (And actually, you forgot about these pics for most HNNNNNNGGGGG

    [youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RPxEOysJGYs[/youtube]

    (Not sure if that works here or not)

    Careful of the next pic. The more you stare, the more you smile...

    #23 · Chapter 3 · 76w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>98730

    And perhaps its that low self-esteem that brought you to just write whatever the hell you wanted to write, which gave it that natural flow of creativity, much like The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy? I think so. I look forward to see this develop storywise.

    #24 · Chapter 3 · 76w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Great story! You really capture Douglas Adams' writing style well. Can't wait to read more!

    #25 · Chapter 3 · 76w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>99040

    Yes, the dreaded D-word. Everyone knows that on a kid's show, the one thing you never do is say "die" or "dead" in reference to a living or sentient thing. Ever.

    So I had Fluttershy say it. :rainbowlaugh:

    #26 · Chapter 3 · 76w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>99068

    It's not low self-esteem so much as the fact the words don't look right, or the stories don't feel right. Besides, I'm happier now, so Chapter III will be on its way shortly, and, Celestia willing, it will be much more cheerful. :twilightsmile:

    #27 · Chapter 3 · 76w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>99121

    You're too kind. :pinkiesmile:

    #28 · Chapter 3 · 76w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>99253

    Can't wait. :twilightsmile:

    #29 · Chapter 4 · 76w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Why is Doctor Whooves always Tennant? He's my favorite Doctor, but you'd think someone at some point would write him as Matt Smith, or, hell, even 9th Doctor guy.

    Anyway, good story.

    #30 · Chapter 4 · 76w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>100850

    Because the "canon" Doctor Whooves looks like Tennant. I thought about writing him as Matt Smith, but decided against it.

    Thanks, anyway.

    #31 · Chapter 4 · 76w, 3d ago · · ·
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    ... Win. So much of it. Pooooor Dashie, AJ and Rares... being stuck as hot chicks... of a different species. YEAH. That BITES! Can't wait to see how they deal with that! *Waits patiently*

    ~ Moonstone,  Minstrel of Equestria

    #32 · Chapter 4 · 76w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>101079

    Rarity hasn't appeared yet. :ajsmug:

    And I never said they were hot. Your sick mind did that all on its own. :raritywink:

    Anyway, thanks! I added another little nod to a grimdark horrorfic in there, I'm not sure if you caught it. Let's see who does.

    #33 · Chapter 4 · 76w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Ah, more Adams-ponies. Never a bad thing in my experience. The addition of Doctor Whooves is a nice touch, especially since it's an excuse to throw in Derpy as Trilian. :derpytongue2:I eagerly look forward to more.

    #34 · Chapter 4 · 76w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>101168 *Headdesks* I uh... Misunderstood the whole 'Rarity would have called it' part, so... XD

    And they're the mane six. Isn't it, like, a REQUIREMENT that they'd look good? (And it's not my fault! I've seen to many JohnJoseco pics... :facehoof: )

    I admit I wasn't paying much attention. Inbetween New Years and getting back from Nevada a couple days ago, my brain is still mostly mush.

    ~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria

    #35 · Chapter 4 · 76w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>101188

    They can be hot if you want them to be. I want no part of it, though! :raritywink:

    #36 · Chapter 4 · 76w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>101179

    I only ever found one other Hitchhiker's Guide pony-fic, and I wanted to do it my own way. I don't intend for the Doctor to take Zaphod's place, nor for Derpy to take Trillian's, but I think they'll play slightly similar roles.

    #37 · Chapter 4 · 76w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Of course, the whole "Time Lords were Total and Utter Bastards" section reads like classic Adams.  The Guide could have very well referenced Doctor Who almost exactly like this.

    Although I believe only two of the Doctor's incarnations actually made much use of jelly babies.  They're overdue for a comeback, in my opinion.

    #38 · Chapter 4 · 76w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>102987

    Yes, the Guide entries are written with a deliberate touch of humorous cynicism, as in classic Adams. I also like to write them and imagine Peter Jones is reading them as I write them, which helps.

    The Doctor still keeps jelly babies in the TARDIS. They reference it in one of the Tenth Doctor's episodes, so I expect if you were especially amicable and asked nicely he'd give you some.

    #39 · Chapter 4 · 76w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Splendid! :pinkiehappy:

    #40 · Chapter 4 · 76w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>103578

    Succinct. Thank you. :pinkiehappy:

    #41 · Chapter 5 · 73w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Wow... So... Either The Doctor is in different times at the same time (Entirely plausible, mind you) or one is 'The Doctor', and the other is Doctor Whooves. Also... DERPY! YEAH, WOO!!!! :pinkiehappy:

    ~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria

    #42 · Chapter 5 · 73w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Well. It would appear that Pinkie is a skeleton character: You can fit her in just about any role and she'll work, up to and including Paranoid Androids.

    Great stuff thus far. I look forward to more.

    #43 · Chapter 5 · 73w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>152459

    Congratulations on getting the 42nd comment! :rainbowlaugh:

    And, yes, I did base Depressed!Pinkie on Marvin. Because everyone loves Marvin. He's your plastic pal who's fun to be with.

    #44 · Chapter 5 · 73w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>151916

    It's the same guy, except he's humanoid now. Or something. I dunno, Rule of Funny and MST3K Mantra apply here. :derpytongue2:

    #45 · Chapter 5 · 73w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>151916 so i take it your happy with the new episode?

    Anyways, pinkie in the caves? Makes sense, being a Rock farmer and all.

    #46 · Chapter 5 · 73w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>154963

    Eh, I think she was always more into partying than rocks. Although perhaps gems are in her blood. I dunno, I never really thought about it.

    I actually included a couple of popular culture references in that last scene...did you spot them?

    There was a reference to John Steinbeck's "Of Mice and Men" in there (the conversation about alfalfa and 'livin' offa the fatta the lan'') and also a reference to this scene from the film "Contact", based on the book by Carl Sagan.

    They're obscure, but I got a kick out of them. :pinkiehappy:

    #47 · Chapter 5 · 72w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>155990

    I thought i recognized something ther...

    #48 · Chapter 5 · 72w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>164069

    Yes, I just like throwing stuff in.

    #49 · Chapter 1 · 70w, 16h ago · · ·
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    It's so sickeningly sweet that the Guide recommends packing insulin, regardless of whether or not your species can get diabetes, as you are guaranteed to get diabetes either way.

    :rainbowlaugh:

    #50 · Chapter 6 · 70w, 16h ago · · ·
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    >>223274

    Hahaha, yes.

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